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Posted: 21 October 2006 at 3:27am | IP Logged
                      PART-8
Amy comes to chandni's place and knocks at the door!
chandni opens the door and amy says.....
amy=chandni tu abhi tak tayyar nahi huyi !party mein jana hai ya nahi
chandni=amy mera mann nahi hai!tum chali jao!
amy=c'mmon chandni tujhe Chalna hi hoga!agar nahi gayi to pata hai adi i mean to say vishesh ko kitna bura lagega!usne kitne pyar se sab ko invite kiya hai!aur tu to unki fav. employee hai!tujhpe kitna trust karte hai vo!tu hi aisa karegi to
chandni=dekh amy main na jakar kisi ka trust nahi tod rahi 100 employees mein se agar 1 employee nahi gaya to kisi ko koi farak nnahi padega
amy=par adi i mean mujhe to padega!chal yaar
just then bg comes and says
bg=are ye kya party sharty ki baat ho rahi hai
amy=bg dekhiye na aajindia calling mein party hai aur vishesh sir ne sabko bulaya hai!aur ye chandni hai ki chal hi nahi rahi apni zidd par adddi huyi hai
bg=puttar tere vishesh sir ne sab ko bulaya hai tu nahi gayi to unhe bura lagega
chandni=par bg....
amy=chal ab to bg bhi razi ho gayi ab to chal
chandni=thike main change karke aati hun
amy=ek minute aaj main tujhe dress select karke deti hun
bg=accha chandni main mandir ja rahi hu tu fir chali jana
amy-chandni=bye bg
bg=bye bye
then from the almirah amy chooses a beautiful black churidar
amy=ye pehen le tujhpar bahut suit karega
chandni=ye pucca
amy=haan pucca chal ab ja jaldi
chandni goes to the wash room to change then after a few minutes she comes out
chandni=kaisi lag rahi hu main
amy =bahut acchi bas ek kami hai
chandni=kya
amy=zara ghum
chandni turns and amy opens her parandi
amy=aaj ke din to kam se kam ye parandi khol de thuj par khule baal bahut suit karte hai!chal
and both leave from there
in ic party is going on all the maurya students have already reached and even all employees have reached xcept chandni and amy!
ashi is coming from one side and uv is coming from the other side and both collide
ashi=physco tum dekhke nahi chal sakte kya
uv is just stunned to see ashi ashi is luking reeli pretty
ashi=ab kuch bolo bhi are kuch bol hi nahi rahe
     phsyco physco physcooooo
she shakes him and uv gets back in reality
ashi=duh uh kis dreamworld mein khoye huye ho physco
uv=kisi dreamworld mein nahi btw wacko aaj bahut acchi lag rahi ho
ashi janbhujkar says......
ashi=mujhe timbo bula rahi hai i have to go
uv=par maine to tia ki aawaz nahi suni
ashi=vo isliye kyunki tumhare kaan kharab hai now bye
ashi leaves and uv smiles to himself
uv=i know ashi u also luv me but confess nahi karti par ek na ek din zaroor karogi!
adi is anxiously waiting 4 chandni and ashi observes this and she comes to him
ashi=hey hi adi
adi=hi ashi
ashi=chandni ka intezaar kar rahe ho
adi=main uska wait kyun karunga
ashi=duh uh now don't behave as if sab ko kuch pata nahi hai bolo usi ka wait kar rahe ho na
adi=haan!par vo abhi tak aayi nahi
ashi=dun worry aa jayegi!
just then adi's cell rings and he xcuses ashi for a minute after a few seconds adi cuts the phone
ashi=kya huya adi
adi=jis band ko is party mein play karne ko bulaya tha vo nahi aa payegi
ashi=thats nt a problem!remix!
adi=remix!!
ashi= i mean ranveer,uv,tia aur mera ek band hai jiska naam hai remix!hum play kar sakte hai
adi=par.....
ashi=dun worry ye hamara first experience nahi hai hum pehle bhi discos,parties aur pubs mein play kar chuke hai
adi=wow that's gr8 musical instruments tumhe yaahan se provide ho jayange
ashi=but one condition is there
Adi=kya?????
ps=whats the condition to find the answer keep urselves updated with this fusion fic

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Posted: 21 October 2006 at 4:20am | IP Logged

Wowwwwwwwwwwwwww its grrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrr8.I  mean its truely awesum.U r just tooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo ooooooooooooo gud yaar.Clap.

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You're Welcome Shristi.... but that is the truth Tongue

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Posted: 22 October 2006 at 11:45am | IP Logged
Clap wow

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Goldie

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Posted: 23 October 2006 at 11:28am | IP Logged
Thx every1 will be writing the next part by tomorrow Smile

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ya im eagerly waitin 4 it Tongue Tongue

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Posted: 24 October 2006 at 6:04am | IP Logged
guru.........tum ne jo yeh kahani banayi hai.........wah iska to mazaa hi kuch aur hai......read it like sidhuism. Wink Tongue

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Posted: 24 October 2006 at 12:35pm | IP Logged
                    PART-9
adi=wait a minute agar baat paison ki hai to dun worry tum jitni bhi fees charge karoge vo tumhe mil jayegi
ashi=adi question is not about about money!
adi=then?????
ashi=tumhe chandni ke saath dance karna hoga!
Adi=ashi have u gone mad!vo miss parandi mujhse pyar se baat karle vahi bahut badi baat hai dance karna to door ki baat hai
Ashi=that i dun know adi par tumhe ye to karna hi hoga
remember   !!!!!!adi rox!!!!!! ya fir tum kehna chahte ho ki tum itna bhi nahi kar sakte
adi=hey !!adi rox!!main kisi bhi ladki ko apni tune par dance kara sakta hun to ye chandni kapoor kya chiz hai!aaj vo mere
saath hi dance karegi
ashi=thats the spirit!main abhi sab ko inform karti hun aur fir i promise hum sab ek rocking performance denge
bye
adi=bye
Ashi goes and informs tia,ranveer and uv about the performance!
ashi=chalo every1 aaj hume ic mein ek rocking performance dena hai
tia=par tia ne to rockstar vala makeup bhi nahi kiya hai tia abhi play kaise kar sakti hai
uv=ashi humne to practice bhi nahi ki hum abhi kaise kar sakte hai play
ranveer=ashi uv thik keh rahe hai
ashi=uhhhhh i dun know anything hume play karna hai to karna hai main adi se promise kar chuki hun
ranveer=ashi agar aap adi ko promise kar chuki hain to fir hum play zaroor karenge
tia=par ranveer hum play karenge kya tia means na humare paas guitar hai na humne koi song practice kiya hai
ashi=musical instruments ka arrangement ho chuka hai aur rahi baat song ki to vo to humne ek pehle hi practice kiya hai!
right!
every1 remembers the song which they had practiced recently!
uv=right!
and each of them then say
                        remix roxxxxxxx
chandni reaches the party with amy and she is looking stunning!adi is just amused with her beauty!he goes and says.......
adi=hey miss parandi!aaj kuch alag lag rahi ho
chandni=kyun
adi=aaj tum sunder lag rahi ho na isliye
amy strts laughing and says.......
amy=btw adi main kaisi lag rahi hu
adi=tum asusual amy bahut acchi lag rahi ho
chandni gets jealous and gives an angry look and says
chandni=main abhi aati hun
but adi stops her by holding her hand
adi=hey miss parandi main to mazaak kar raha tha gussa kyun ho rahi ho!i was just kidding!
just then every1 out there hear a voice!
its the voice of remix band!
the remix band is playing the song
                                     DIL KI YE DHADKAN TUMHARE HAI HUM
adi=hey miss parandi mere saath dance karogi
chandni=haan
and they both dance to the beautiful song by remix band!
after a few hours the party gets over!every1 out there get back to their homes
adi-chandni both r happy and both r thinking about each other!they r somehow waiting that when the night will
get over and when they will meet!
its a new day exactly 10 a.m.
tia reaches a cafe where ranveer was waiting 4 her
tia=tia is sorry ranveer that she is late
ranveer=its ok tia aaiye baithiye
tia=ranveer tia ko tumse ek zaroori baat karni hai
ranveer=kya tia!
tia=dekho ranveer kal tia ke papa usse uski shaadi ke baare mein baat kar rahe the!vo keh rahe the ki college ke baad
vo tia ke haath jald hi laal kar denge
ranveer=laal!peele kardenge
tia=haan whatever ranveer tumhe papa se baat karni hogi
ranveer=fikar mat kijiye tia hum aapke papa se jald hi baat kar lenge!aap hum par vishwaas karti hai na
tia=haan!
ranveer=to fir chinta mat kijiye
ranveer stands up from the chair and comes behind tia and puts his arms around her shoulders and says......
ranveer=now smile
and tia gives a sweet smile!
ps:preeti kya sidhuism hai LOL

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