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Posted: 9 years ago
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awsomee update soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
update asap eagerly waiting and i dont want sanyu to forgive him so easily😭😭
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update asap eagerly waiting and i dont want sanyu to forgive him so easily😭😭


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Yeah dear ... i was busy due to my cousin's wedding ..
vl update today ..
pakka
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Posted: 9 years ago
Part - 8

K- dekho tum na tnsn mat lena agar wo nhi mani to .. mein bachpan se janti hoon use ... thoda sa gussa to dikhayegi wo ... par phir maan jayegi

R- theek h ...

He went inside their room ... he noticed that sanyu is not in room ... then he knocked the gate of washroom .. but sanyu was not in washroom too ... he turned towards bed .. he noticed that there was sanyu's blackbery on side table ... he picked it up .. there was a note along with it .. he opened the note ... there was something written on that note ... he read it ..

LISTEN TO THE 1ST RECORDING OF PHONE

He played the recording ... it was recoded by sanyu in her voice ... and sanyu was speeking ... from her voice it was clear that she was crying at the time of recording that ... and the recording was-

RANDHIR,TUM SOCH RHE HOGE NA K MERE PASS YE PHONE KAHAN SE AYA .. YE PHONE TO MERE PASS US DIN BHI THA JIS DIN YE SAB TUMHARA REVENGE START HUA THA ...

he was shocked after listening all this

TUM YE SOCH RHE HOGE K MAINE KISI KO KYUN NHI BATAYA YE SAB .. Q K MUJHE LAGTA THA K TUM KISI DIN TO MERI FEELINGS KO SAMJHOGE... PAR I WAS MAD .. TUMHEIN TO VIDUSHI KI BAAT PAR YAKEEN THA NA .. PAR
ISMEIN USKI BHI KOI GALATI NHI HAI .. TRUST TO TUMNE HI NHI KIA NA MUJHPE ... AUR YE JO VIDUSHI WALA DRAMA THA NA YE SAB TUMHEIN BACHANE K LIYE HI KIA THA MAINE .. Q K MUJHE PATA THA K AGAR MAINE MANA KARDIA USE TO WO KOI AUR PLAN BANAYEGI TUMHEIN PARESHAN KARNE K LIYE ...

She paused for a second ... may be she was wipping her tears ...
Listening this kanika & randhir both
were in tears ... she continued ..

JANTE HO RANDHIR PYAR TO MUJHE TUMSE USI WAQT HOGYA THA JAB TUM MUJHE DHUNDTE DHUNDTE MERE GHAR POHNCH GYE THE SIRF YE CHECK KARNE K LIYE K KYA MEIN SAFELY POHNCH CHUKI HOON YA NHI .. MERI FAMILY
NE MUJHSE RISHTA TOD DIA THA .. TABHI
MAINE SOCH LIA THA K MEIN UNHEIN APNE AP PAR PROUD KARWAYUNGI ... AUR SOCHTI THI K TUM MERA SATH DOGE .. JANTI HOON K IS SAB MEIN TUMHRI GALATI NHI H GALATI MERI HI H
K TUMPAR GOD SE BHI ZYADA TRUST KARLIA THA .. SAB KUCH CHOD KAR TUMHARE PAAS AGYI THI .. IT WAS MY BIGGEST MISTAKE ...

his tears were continously flowing out of his eyes ..

YE SAB MEIN TUMHEIN TAB BHI BATA
SAKTI THI JAB TUMNE MUJHE WO RECODINGS SUNAYI THI .. PAR I WAS IN SHOCK K MERE PAYR NE HI MUJHPE TRUST NHI KIA ... ANYWAYS LAST MEIN BAS ITNA HI KHUNGI K JA RHI HOON TUMSE DOOR ... SABSE DOOR ... Q K AB BAS AB AUR TOLERATE NHI KAR SAKTI MEIN... AUR NHI JEE SAKTI YE ZINDAGI ... JA ...JA RAHI HOON APNI MAUT K KAREEB... BAS AUR NHI BOL SAKTI
KUCH ...

she was crying too much that her voice
was shaking ..Randhir & kannu both were crying after listening all this ...

R(shouted)- sanyu .. plz mujhe chod kar mat jao .. mein nhi ji sakta tumhare bina ..


K(crying)- randhir ab wo ja chuki h ... dubara kabhi wapis nhi ayegi ... how could u do this to her ... apne pyar par hi trust nhi kia .. ab kya jawab doge uske frnds ko uski family ko ... sanyu ne suicide nhi kia balki uska murder hua h ... tumne kia h uska murder ...

Kannu got call from sanyu's mom-

K- ab bolo inhein kya jawab dun ... inko bolkar ayi thi mein k sanyu se milne
ja rhi hoon ... now tell me damit ... she
shouted

He was sitting there motionless

She recived the call..

S.m- hello beta tu snayu se mili kya?? Kaisi h wo?? Baat to karwa usse ...

K (crying)- aunty ... sanyu ne suicide karlia h

S.m- yee kk..kya boll rhi ... h ... her voice was shaking ..

In a very short time this news spread in all her family and friends ... everyone was
blaiming him for this ...

S.m- ye kya kia tune randhir .. itna bharosa karke dia tha apni beti ko tumhein .. aur tumne .. chee ... tumhein to
police k hawale kar dena chahiye ...

K- haan aunty ap sahi keh rhi h

Kausto- kitna pyar karti thi wo tumse .. aur tumne ye sab kia .. shame on u randhir ..

S.d- haan mein police ko phone karta hoon ..

parth broken his silence ...

P- ye kaisi batein kar rhe h ap log .. usne bhi apni wife ko khoya h .. wo bhi kitna dukhi h .. ye to bas use galatfehmi thi jiski
vajah se ye sab hua .. ise chod dijiye ..

Kausto- ye kaise bat kar rhe ho parth .. i dont agree with u ..


But some how he convinced everyone...

He was totally broken after all this ..
every one was sad after this .. everyone wanted to go to past and stop all this but life doesn't have a reverse button ...they wanted to bring sanyu back in their lifes .. but now they can't bring her back ... every one was remembring their good times with sanyu ...

Randhir was also remembring his good movements with her ... their dates,paties,late night walks ... and in 4rd year how he proposed her in front of everyone when she said that she want him to propose her ,they went on walk and how they got scloded from vardhan sir ..


#flashback ...Sanyu was sitting with kaustoki & parth in canteen ... randhir entered ... sanyu ignored him and just to make him jealous she
started gigling with parth .. randhir got irritated ... he went to sanyu and holded her wrist ..

R- utho yahan se sanyukta

S- kya h dekh nhi rhe k mein aur parth baat kar rhe h

R- uske sath gossip karna band karo mujhe tumse zruri baat karni h kuch..

She immidately got up from her chair .. went near him and curved her lips into
a smile..

S- haan randhir jaldi bolo ..

R- arey itni khush q ho rhi ho aur wo bhi mujhse baat karne k liye ...

S- jaldi bolo na randhir kya bolna h

R- mujhe bas ye bolna tha k yahan par baith kar gossip karna band karo aur thodi si study karlo..

Her face fell..

R- arey kya hua,aisi shakal q bana rakhi h..

S- i am going bas?? .. she said with moist eyes

She picked her bag and was moving away ... when she was just pareller to him, randhir put his hand on her waist to stop
her... she was feeling current in her body and butterflies in her stomach...

R- wait farzi .. he said smilling

S- ab kya h mcp?

he pulled her towarda him
so that she could face him

S- huhhh ..chodo mujhe...
she was looking at the floor...

Everyone was looking at them .. he
cupped her face with both of his hands and made her face him but she again started looking at floor ...

he bend on his knees ,holded her hand.. now she was looking in his eyes ..

R- farzi look i know k u love me .. par phir bhi ek baar officially puchna to pdega hi na .. i love u farzi ... will u be my gf,wife,mother of my babies and my life partner?? She was standing quitely

R- arey my knees are paining,jaldi bolo...

Tears were coming out of her eyes,tears of happiness ... he got up from his place...

R- arey m sorry .. agar mein kuch zyada hi bol gya hun to ..m so sorry

S- idiot i love u too ...

She hit his forehead playfully and hugged him ..

R- acha farzi mere sath walk par chalogi aj k dinner k baad?? Collage se bahar chalenge kahin

S- raat ko collage se bahar?? No no no ..
marna nhi h mujhe

R- arey marein tumhare dushman...baat to aise kar rhi ho jaise k pehle kabhi gyi hi nhi

S- acha baba thek h chalenge..

At 9'o clock they went on a walk and came back around 11'o clock ... they were ouside the collage when they saw vardhan sir and vardhan sir also noticed them.. he looked at them with a shocked expression ... they were gigling & hand
in hand ..

V- tum dono yahan kya kar rhe ho itni raat ko

R- wo sir actually choti si walk par gye
the .. kuch discuss karna tha ..

Sanyu was standing sillent bitting her lips,bcz she was scared.. vardhan removed his specs and went near them ..

V- so miss sanyukta aggarwal batayie kya discuss kar rhe the tum dono wo bhi ek dusre ka hath pakad kar..She left his
hand

S- sir... woo... actually ...

V- no answer miss aggarwal ... ye koi tumhara ghar nhi h jo tum log aise ghum rhe ho .. zara bhi fikar h tum logon ko k agar collage authories ko pata chal
gya to kya hoga .. aur tumhari studies ka
kya .

R- sir ap studies ki fikr mat kijiye .. rank 1
aur rank 2 to already fixed hai .. rank.1 mein aur rank 2 sanyu ..

V- will u just shut up randhir singh shekhawat

R- sorry sir..

V- just go back to ur rooms.

R- okk sir..

Remembring the whole inccident,he was more and more crying ...

He was going from that part of life in which no one could help him in coming out of his greif


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Posted: 9 years ago
Thanks for pm
Awesome update, it was so emotional😭
Randhir was so broken😭
I think nothing has happened to sanyu, she has just left
The flashback was good
Update soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
Omg ye kya ho gya

The update was superb
So much hppnd
That recording really emtnl
Sanyu was so broken

She was crying lyk hell

She had cmmited suicide
I cnt believe she can do sum thing lyk dat
There's a lot more
Vo zinda h


Poor rd he was so broken
He's blaming himself


Everybody angry n blaming rd
Parth sum how convinced everyone

Rd rembering his beautiful past with sanyu

Rd proposed sanyu
Both were enjoying each other cmpny

Vd sir ne pakad lia

Rd is dying without sanyu

What will hppn next

Update soon
Cnt wait

Luv u yr
Keep smiling
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Posted: 9 years ago
Finally next part mil gaya.
It was nice but made me cry yar.
But also nice part 👏