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Posted: 9 years ago
#41
OMG madhu yeh idea sirf tum soch sakti thi๐Ÿคฃ
Ek chutki sindoor...woh dialogue ka timing mast tha
I think Kriya ko usse Ranbir nahi ranveer banana chahiye tha๐Ÿ˜†
Singhania's toh apne bahu se bahut kush hogaye...bechari bahu ko ab kaun bachayega???
Sab ek saat...maza ayega ab...Rey ki band zarur bajayegi woh๐Ÿ˜†
update karna jaldi...
Tumhare sare updates achanak kam hoagye hai
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Posted: 9 years ago
#42

Originally posted by: Rajeshwari_KR

OMG madhu yeh idea sirf tum soch sakti thi๐Ÿคฃ

Ek chutki sindoor...woh dialogue ka timing mast tha
I think Kriya ko usse Ranbir nahi ranveer banana chahiye tha๐Ÿ˜†
Singhania's toh apne bahu se bahut kush hogaye...bechari bahu ko ab kaun bachayega???
Sab ek saat...maza ayega ab...Rey ki band zarur bajayegi woh๐Ÿ˜†
update karna jaldi...
Tumhare sare updates achanak kam hoagye hai


Thanx Raji ๐Ÿ˜Š
Nxt updt jaldi dungi :)
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Posted: 9 years ago
#43
this was a idea and a suspensious surprise... that lead them into
be it... and how will they tackle this things out... chapter fablous...
do continue soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
#44
Haha... Awesome update...
Ek chutki sindoor... lol...
It did it all... Pata nahi evil Manju kya kaaregi...
Update soon :)
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Posted: 9 years ago
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SCENE EIGHT

Kriya's POV on reaching Singhania House

Pata nahi yeh sab kya ho raha he universeji...main kya thik kar rahi hoon? Rey k mummy papa tho kitne achhe hain aur main tho unhe dhoka de rahi hoon...nahi nahi mauka milte hi main unn logo ko sab kuch sach sach bata dungi. Papa ko patha chala tho wo bhi tho kitne dukhi honge. (mentally appreciating the big house).

Papa Singhania: aao aao beti..kaisa laga tumhe aapna naya ghar?

Mama Singhania: aaree yeh kya kar rahe hain aap? bahu aise andar nahi aa sakti uska grihapravesh kaha huya hain..aap log yehi rukiye main thaali aur chawal lekar aati hoon

Rey: ma yeh sab ki kya zaroorat hain?

Mama: tu chup kar aur khabardar jo andar per rakkha tho...manju tu mere saath aa.

Rey's POV

yeh mama aur papa ko kya ho gaya hain...main tho bilkul phass gaya...yeh Kriya kya soch rahi he yeh bhi pata nahi lag raha hain...mere papa tho itne khush khabhi nahi lage...yahan tak ki wo iss pagal Manju ko bhi bhool chuke hain...aya tha Deepika ka hero banne par Kriya ka dulha ban gaya ๐Ÿ˜ฒ

Ithne me Rey ki mom wapas aa jati hain chawal ki kalash lekar aur Manju ki haath me thaali

Mama: ab tum dono saath me aapna daina per andar rakkho...aur beeti tum apni per se uske baad yeh chawal ki kalas ko girana...aaj se tum iss  ghar ki laxmi ho...oo pehle mujhe tum dhono ki aarti utar na hain...Manju thaali laa

Manju's POV

ha ha khub aarti utaro...Kriya ki bachhi me tujhe iske baad maza chakhaungi...Rey sirf mera hain...tujhe tho main yahan se bhaga kar hi chodungi ๐Ÿ˜ก

Mama Singhania: ab main baaki ki tayyari karti hoon...tum log aapne kamre me jao aur fresh ho jao...aur haan Kriya beti tum mere saath aao

Rey ki dad aur Manju wahan se chale jaate hain...Rey sochne lagta hain k mom Kriya ko kaha le jaa rahi hain...Kriya aapne saasuma k saath chal deti hain. Kriya ko Rey ki mom uski kamre me le jaati hain. Kriya surprise k saath uss room ko dekh rahi thi jab...

Mama: yeh lo beti...aaj raat tum isse pehen lena  ...yeh hamari khandaan ka riwaaz hain...meri saas ne mujhe di thi (she gave her a beautiful pink zardousi saari and jewelry set)

Kriya: par ma isski kya zaroorat thi? 

Mama: tu bhi bilkul Rey ki tarha ho gayi hain uske saath rehke...ab le aur jaa wo tera intezar kar raha hoga...aur shaam ko jaldi se tayyar ho jana

Kriya saari aur jewelry lekar Rey ki room me pohochti he tho...

Kriya: aare aare yeh kya? disgusting...jaldi hatao inko (usne dekha room ki poore walls Deepika ki poster se bhara hua he)

Rey: excuse me????? tum bhool rahi ho yeh mera room hain...aur Deepika meri heroine

Kriya: tum hero hi nahi ho tho kahe ka heroine???? aur tum yeh bhool rahe ho aaj se yeh room meri bhi hain...yaad nahi "ek chootki sindoor ki keemat"? agar bhool gaye ho tho mummy ko bulaoon kya?

Rey: ithni saari ladkiyon me tumhe hi mere wife banna tha...

Kriya: o hello mujhe koi saukh nahi hain tum jaise pagal ka wife banne ki...main tumhe Manju se bacha rahi hoon...taras khaake

Rey: tho kaunsa teer maar liya...issme tumhara bhi tho fyda hain...bhool gayi meri saari help

Wo dono ek doosre ko gusse bhare ankhon se dekhte hain...

Kriya: mujhe freshen up hona he...tum niklo yahan se

Rey: ha ha ja raha hoon par jaldi karna...mujhe bhi tho freshen up hona he

Rey leaves the room and Kriya closes the door but forgets to lock it. She goes to the washroom and takes a long refreshing hot bath. She had soap all over her body when the shower water suddenly stops. Kriya somehow washes her face and wrapping the towel comes out...at that moment Rey also comes inside singing "manwa laage laage re..." but stops in the middle seeing Kriya...she was dripping wet...her hair tied in a knot...some splashes of soap on her body...her big eyes horrified on seeing Rey...her lips pink and lush

Rey's POV

Deepika gaya bhaar me,,,,haaye kitni khubsurat hain miss Ghai...nahi Mrs Singhania...thodi rude aur baddimag zaroor hain aur aapne aap ko bohot zyada importance deti hain par...

Kriya: tummm?????????????? andar kaise aa gaye...mene kaha tha na jaoo yahan se (she was blushing deep pink...holding the towel more closely to her body)

Rey: pure 40 min ho gaye tumhe andar gaye huye...mujhe kya pata tha tum abhi bhi ready nahi huyi...aur tum towel pehenke kyun aa gayi?

Kriya: tumhara washroom bhi tumhari tarha dumb aur worthless hain...achanak paani bandh ho gaya tho main kya karoon

Rey ko bohot gussa aa jaata hain yeh sunn ke "how dare u call me dumb and worthless...baddimag ladki..lady dabaang" He comes close to Kriya and lady dabang sunn ke Kriya ka bhi hosh kho jaata hain gussee me "how dare u call me lady dabaang? " she also advances towards Rey...but the floor was slippery from the soap dripping from Kriya.
Rey slips..falls on Kriya and she falls on the bed beside her with Rey on top of her. 

Rey ko laagta hain ussne ithni beautiful eyes kabhi nahi dekha tha...wo dheere se Kriya ka haath pakad ke bed se pin kar deta hain...Kriya ke hair abhi khul kar bed pe phayla hua tha and a floral scent was coming from it...Rey apni ek haath se usse uthkar smell karta hain

Kriya jaise koi sapna dekh rahi thi...usske saath aisa kabhi nahi hua tha...ladke tho usse darrte the naa...uske saanse tez chal rahi thi "Rey yeh kya kar rahe ho aap..."

"Shhh..." Rey stops her and places his lips on her soft ones...Kriya closes her eyes...then Rey progresses his kiss on her bare shoulders and long neck...Kriya lost in the momentary pleasure...initially she tries to resist pushing Rey's hard chest but finally gives in.

All the while Manju was watching them standing outside the door...her face red with anger...she closes her fists so tightly that her palms started bleeding from the bites of her nails "Yeh ladki achanak ayi kaha se...kuch tho gadbad hain jo mujhe pata lagani hain...paani mene baandh kar di thi firbhi yeh bach gayi...koi nahi khana tho khayegi na madam tab pata chalega...chudail kahiki  tujhe koi nahin bacha sakta..Rey bhi nahin"




 
THATS IT GUYS...LATELY THODA BUSY SO UPDATES ARE NOT REGULAR...HAVE TO UPDT THE FF ALSO..WILL TRY TO DO IT NEXT WK..AAPNE REVIEWS DENA MAT BHOOLNA MUJHE SABKI KI COMMENTS BOHOT ACHHA LAGTA HAIN ๐Ÿ˜Š







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Posted: 9 years ago
#46
Awesome update
Loved it
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Posted: 9 years ago
#47
superb update... first time u gave a hot update like this one...
after reading this meri fever to high ho gaya
loved it
update soon next time bhi mujhe aise kr romance chahiye...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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I think Rey ki mom dad bohut kush hai ki Reyne koyi bollywood heroine pakad ke nahi laya...isliye bahu ki itni seva๐Ÿ˜†
Manju ki ek hi chalne hamara hero ko deepika ke duniya se bahar lekar aya...๐Ÿ˜†
Manju deemag aise hi chalti rahi aur indono ko aise hi pyar hoti rahe๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜›
KR convo and romance was all superb
If possible update soon
Edited by Rajeshwari_KR - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#49

jaldi se unress raji
pls _/\_
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Posted: 9 years ago
#50
supab update I love rey ka dialoge aaya tha deepika ka hero banne n bangaya kria ka dulha n kria ka bhi dialoge ws ek dam fatte tha ki ek chutki ki sundir ki kimmat n all supab update waise thanks to manju rey n kria ka romance dekhane ko mila amazing update