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Originally posted by: ...Hemangi
Yes she was my 2nd option but I forgot to mention that in my previous post... but i m glad I guessed it right 😊
then who was ur first option..Vrushu..supriya or...fill up the dash😉
Originally posted by: ...Hemangi
Yes she was my 2nd option but I forgot to mention that in my previous post... but i m glad I guessed it right 😊
Originally posted by: dhivyakrish31
may be😉P.S..is it compulsory to quote the refrence books..and websites dear?
Originally posted by: Texie-ShadyRes
UnresYes the first one lolIt was so beautiful di u explained it so well the feelings of her and her attitude towards arya 😆 thanks for the pm and do pm me when u write more
Originally posted by: Acidic_SanWow superb update😳 Urvi seems to love him a lot
Originally posted by: dhivyakrish31
Originally posted by: dhivyakrish31PART II
I am sitting in a swing.the wind is blowing gently.It brushes my whole body.Who gave the permission to this wind to touch my whole body.only one has that rightsMy are becoming pinkish..Oh god Uruvi ☺️Suddenly I realize that I am hit by a stone..or a fruit..It gives me a jerk.oh! where is my king??where is he..??who is coming there?"Dushala"Dushala still in HP.. is she still unmarried 😲 ..or has she just come over to attend the ceremonies.."Your mother told that you are the most mischievous princess in your place..but i cannot believe it"oh! Dushala is very nice to move.Everyone seems to find friend only in Dushala., only sister.. all other girls will be either sautans or devrani., jhetani in HP kingdom.. 😆yes! nothing to worry..He is in hastinapur now..the day which I expected has come finally..I cannot live anymore by carrying this burden of love..Iam going to meet him..Iam going to flood all my love in front of him..I heard he is so humble to people..he will not refuse my love.. I trust my love..Now I am eagerly waiting for this., I want to see what she has to say and how Karna reacts to this.. Daanveer Karna 😆
Originally posted by: swathi.priyaThis is awesome and looks very interesting Dhiv 👏I suppose the beginning is along similar lines of Karna's wife.. But., this is loads better I should say.. no offence here.. I did not like the swayamvar part in the book., and left it half way..
Good twist Dhiv 😆 I was thinking it would be just a hidden secret one side love without anyone's knowledge..excuse my poor knowledge., who is matha Gowri? some goddess?
Originally posted by: swathi.priyaanother beautiful update dear...I m starting to like this Uruvi.., though she lil crazy and head over heels for Karna which I disapprove ..And., as promised I have completed one part of the deal .. update the third part soon Dhivoh!! thank u Swathi dear!! regarding Dushala duryodan born first then dushy next day. so..all born within hundred days..101st day dushala..so she is elder to arjun..this story starts in the time of Arjun's marriage..that is after varanavadh and vanvass..bheem hidimbi marriage..born of gadothgakch..so she will be married obviously..but I thought it is unnecessary to mention it here..moreover always these ages are confusing in dwapar yug..sometimes it will spoil the whole mood of the storywhat u said id right..@B:: yes she has a safe relationship with kauravas..pandavas and karna..but uruvi is using her to find information@U:: yes..she is the craziest girl..that is how I characterized her..I thought it would justify my climax..
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