Originally posted by: TereLiyeMINUthat was a Wordsworth style writing.Nature became the mode of communication when words could not materialize.the primroses was a beautiful symbolism of myriad shades of colours spilling across the ground.suddenly mountains seemed beautiful reminding of Wordsworth's ''Tintern Abbey'' poem.waiting for the monsoon of gloom to unravel in the forthcoming update.
Beautifully sketched nature ruling update.thanks for the pm and do continue soon.😊😊
Originally posted by: fly.highAnd this was Fabulous!
So my personal Nicholas sparks...this couldn't get any better. .
The spring...Ur beautiful description of Cherry blossoms... their beautiful heartfelt confession and ...the song...I love HIS this song so much...thank u tons for including it here...
the confession and the cherry blossoms sort of took me into a trance...
well...moving on in life is not easy always...but its not that hard too ...especially if you have the right person with u...
the gardening scene was too good...
well...u are exceptionally improving in writing the closeness scenes...
Now what was that cliffhanger...
waiting for it
love
birdie
PS: missing piya and siddie yarr
Originally posted by: anitasharmaTheir confession was beautiful
loved their family moment with arzoo
why arjun was so tensed at the end
waiting for next update
Originally posted by: Swara85Throughout the chapter I was like And at the end I could utter only one word..WOW..!! ❤️
The description about the cherry blossom took me into another world itself..My room turned out to be the path, walls into trunks of the cherry blossom trees..and i'm reading your update..and with headphones in my ears.. (you can guess whose song.☺️) Ok what I meant to say is It felt So Real....I LOVED IT.👍🏼
The confession was beautiful..👏 And the song in the background..☺️ And Arakshi..☺️
I'm already melting here..😳
Ah.! Gardening..
The gardening part, the fun they had playing with water..again..lots of memories related to it came crashing down..me and my best friend had only one thing to do after school..watering plants..😆
Sorry..got distracted again..Anyways..the whole part there was very refreshing and brought a biggg smile on my face.😃
Dreaming about snow-capped mountains in the night and pine trees..
Wait..! there is more to the update and I'm already lost..😳
And then Arakshi was ☺️
About the ending part, I would say, whatever might be the twist here, their side is much stronger this time to overcome anything.
The update was beautiful, dreamy, magical.👏 It had everything, river of emotions, romance, nature's beauty, curiosity at the end, and also the good thing was you brought in the hesitation to put a step forward which was required here.So overall I loved every bit of it.🤗
Continue soon..Thanks for pm. I'm back to dreaming about Cherry blossom..
Originally posted by: SnehajainAwesome update...The confession was ...Infact instead of their confession I liked the role of trees, leaves, wind etc. in the whole scenerio...😆😆😆 😆😆😆Both are scared to move on...but still don't want to loose each other...😃😃😃Then comes the watering time...😆😆😆Antara is defintely happy...😃😃😃Whose call was that in end??? 😕😕😕Continue soon...Thanks for PM...
Originally posted by: anu91story is really a stolen moment ritu...i just loved every bit of the story...aarzoo such a cutiee loved her so much...the story from start to end simply amazing...just beautiful...the moment arjun and aarzoo shared was so cute...the relation grown between two was sweet...the confession of arjun and sakshi was so nice...loved it so much waiting for next chapter to read...thanks for PM:)am so sorry for this much late for stories...
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