new ff -- Good boy and bad girl sandhir ff - Page 3

Priya

@asya_luver

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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: ArshaParsh
Sorry Priya di...
Im so late to reply.. Busy.. Arre maaf to kar do??
Anyways I never imagined a plot where Sanyukta was bad... Seems like an intersting thkng to read...
Love the CS and prolouge...
Sorry once again..
Love
Prishi

thank u so much!! and no need to say sorry!!

meri bhi bahut sorry pending hai!😆😆😆

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Dhruvi Mehta

@dhruvi_parsh

Goldie

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Posted: 9 years ago

Oooh...

Its really interesting...

Awsomeee

M really looking fwd

Do update soon

Love

Dhruvi

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Karishma Sewani

@AnIndianWriter

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Posted: 9 years ago

The prologue is amazing! Couldn't stop laughing! Loved the prologue! Randhir Ki entry pr prologue khatam kar dia? Continue soon! Loving it already!
Super-excited for the 1 chapter! Thanks for pm'ing.

Keep writing.
Love,
Karishma. :* <3

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Priya

@asya_luver

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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: karishmagsewani
The prologue is amazing! Couldn't stop laughing! Loved the prologue! Randhir Ki entry pr prologue khatam kar dia? Continue soon! Loving it already!
Super-excited for the 1 chapter! Thanks for pm'ing.

Keep writing.
Love,
Karishma. :* <3

posting chap 1 in few mins..

and thank u so much!

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Priya

@asya_luver

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Posted: 9 years ago

CHAPTER -1

manik(sanyu's bf) - hi whats up sanyukta?

and he hugged her

sanyukta - hi..i am bored yaar..aaj toh 1 year ke bakre aayenge naa??

manik -- haan..

rahul - sanyukta you are looking good.

manik - kya chahiye

sanyukta - hey!! u come

guy - hi..

he was wearing spectacles..

sanyukta - what is your name?

guy - champak

sanyukta - hmm..nick name champu..

champak - aapko kaise pata?

all started laughing..😆😆😆

rahul - toh tera nick name champu hi hai??

champak - haan..

manik - champu dance karega?

champak - mujhe nai aata

sanyukta - 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9

manik - 10.!!!!!

sanyu - kiss peon on lips!

champak - kya?

sanyu - kiss peon now!!!! warna.

manik - warna teri pant kahin ki nai rahegi sochle..hahahaha😃😃

champak kissed peon

all started laughing except randhir

randhir - W*F..this is wrong

Sanyu - come here...

Randhir - why?

Sanyu - chill! surprise hai

Randhir - okay

rahul - hi, what is ur name?

Randhir - rss

Sanyu - rss..hmmm..

Randhir - sorry its randhir

Sanyu - randhir.. meine iss manik ko punish karna hai..isse murga ban na hi nai aata tum bata do naa!! please

randhir - pehle aap promise karo ki champak ke saath aage se kuchh nahi karengi

sanyu (in mind) - pehle tere saath toh kar lun😆😆

sanyu - okay!

randhir murga ban gaya

simi - sanyu done..kar liya record..she said in her ears..

randhir - manik ab tum bano

manik - call me sir..i m ur senior

sanyu---bahar jo tv laga hai naa..

simi - done

randhir - boys hostel room kahan hai

sanyu - boys hostel nai hai..

1 room mein 5 rehte hain girls and boys mix

randhir - okay

in hostel

sanyu - randhir!! tum?

champak -mein bhi hoon

randhir - mera bhi yahi hai..

sanyu - omg..

manik - bad luck sanyu..

sanyu - chalo koi nai...maza aayega

rahul - guys no! bahut ho gaya

corridor

all were laughing

1 guy - guys dekho murga aa gaya

2nd guy - kukdu koonn,,,

champak - randhir bhai chaliye yahan se

randhir - yeh..un seniors ne mujhe jhooth bola?

champak - haan.

in hostel

randhir - yeh kya chal raha hai? hnn..

sanyu - so pata lag gya ki mujhse panga lene ki kya saja hoti hai

randhir - punishment?

sanyu -pure college ke samne tumne yeh kaha ki i am wrong??

randhir - jo sahi tha wahi kiya

sanyu - meine bhi wahi kiya jo tum deserve karte ho...isse chodo..aur aaj freshers party hai u re invited

randhir - no..

manik - aana toh padega

precap - freshers party..randhir and champak ki bajegi BAND

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Sanya Goel

@CrazyKupKakes

IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 9 years ago

Wow dono hi full Tashan mai hai 😆

Excited fr their chemistry

U write well

Continue soon

Thnx fr pm

P.S - i am hell excited for the freshers party 😉

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CaLYpSoAmante

@CaLYpSoAmante

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Posted: 9 years ago

oh i loved the prologue ...!!!!!!!!

really interesting ...wanna read more

can you plz pm me ..!!!!

sanyu gonna ask rd what????

to kiss her!!!!!

goonna love the nxt part

love ya

gowri

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Priya

@asya_luver

Senior Member

Posted: 9 years ago

[QUOTE=candyfreak]oh i loved the prologue ...!!!!!!!!

really interesting ...wanna read more

can you plz pm me ..!!!!

sanyu gonna ask rd what????

to kiss her!!!!!

goonna love the nxt part

love ya

gowri

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thank u so much!!

and i will pm you!😊

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_Angel_love_

@_Angel_love_

IF-Rockerz

Posted: 9 years ago

Hey! Priya

it was literally hilarious funny update🤣

moi rofling...🤣

Randhir 🤣

Sanyu to Randhir ki achi wali band bajaigi🤣

Champu k chakar mein Murga bangaya!!!😆😆

Update ASAP

Eagerly waiting

Thanks for pm

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Priya

@asya_luver

Senior Member

Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Param_love
Hey! Priya
it was literally hilarious funny update🤣
moi rofling...🤣
Randhir 🤣
Sanyu to Randhir ki achi wali band bajaigi🤣
Champu k chakar mein Murga bangaya!!!😆😆
Update ASAP
Eagerly waiting
Thanks for pm

thank u so much!!

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