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raina verma

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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: avinaksh
hfff!!!! still panting! !! I mean seriously ! wow... amazing! !! just didn't want it to ever end. beautifully written. keep up the good work. please update the next part soon and tum mile too. I know I m being too demanding, but just can't wait.

that's so sweet avi..glad u all like this part..thanks

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Sonam

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Posted: 9 years ago

very nice part
keep writing

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raina verma

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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: SONAMB404
very nice part
keep writing

thanks sonam..

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Jai shree krishna

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Posted: 9 years ago

again a nyc ff read all da parts plzz continue it soon

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raina verma

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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: neeru84
again a nyc ff read all da parts plzz continue it soon

thanks dear for liking it..

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varsha

@CuRlyTalEs

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Posted: 9 years ago

good one dear nice convertion between naksh and their romance r very hot plzzz continue soon

thanQ 4 good ff

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raina verma

@NAKSHMYJAAN

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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: varshanakshiran
good one dear nice convertion between naksh and their romance r very hot plzzz continue soon
thanQ 4 good ff

thanks varsha i will update it soon

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raina verma

@NAKSHMYJAAN

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Posted: 9 years ago

PART 7 naitik wake up in the morning and find akshara lying beside him..and gets shock to see himself and her in this situation..
nk to himself..ye maine..ak ke saath..
but she is in deep sleep..
nk-ak ji please utiye..
and she wake up..
ak-nk ji aap uth gaye..
nk-ha pls chaliye yaha se..
ak-theek hai chalte hai..par aap bataiye kya hua ?
nk-yaha tamasha karne se kuch nahi hoga..pls aap aaiye..
ak-hmm..
naitik was in very angry mood when they ame in their hotel room..
ak-nk ji ab aap bataiye kya hua ?
nk-mai nahi aap mujhe batayengi..ki kal raat hamare beech..
ak-matlab?
nk-matlab ye ki kya kal hum dono ke beeh
ak-ha naitik ji par isme problem kya hai..aakhir hum pati patni hai..toh hamare beech..
nk-ye aapke liye hoga akshara ji par mere liye nahi..
ak-aap kehna kya chahte hai ?
nk-yahi ki mai aapse..abhi
ak-kya ? pyaar nahi karte hai..
nk-pata nahi par..shayad..
ak-toh phir aap mujhe yaha kyu leke aaye ?
nk-majboori me..kyunki dadda ji chahte the..
ak-aur hamari shaadi ?
nk-wo bhi..warna mai kabhi bhi aisi ladki se shaadi nahi karta jo..
ak started crying..jo ? theek se chal nahi sakti..
nk-akshara pls..mai ye nahi keh raha hu..
ak-toh aap kya keh rahe hai naitik ?
nk-akshara mujhe thoda space chahiye..aur mai chahta hu ki mai aapko bhi utna space do..aur ye shadi me nahi ho sakta..
ak-toh kya mai aapko bandhe rakhti hu..
nk-ha..mai jaha jau aapke saath,khana khaun aapke saath, sona ho to aapke saath,aue sex karna..ho..to..
ak-toh..matlab aapko mujhse space chahiye
nk-haa..
ak-toh theek hai nk..iske liye mujhe kya karna hoga ?
nk-akshara..mai bas itna chahta hu ki..aap jo bhi kare..ya phir mai jo bhi karu usme khush rahu..app samajh rahi hai na..mai kya keh raha hu ?
ak-hmm..samjh rahi hu..aap kya kehna chahte hai..
nk-good..hum hamesha ek doosre ke liye ajnabi rahenge..
ak-hmm..her tears came continuosly from her eyes..
nk-thanks akshara ji..iss tarah hum hamesha khush rahenge..
accha ab hum breakfast karne chale..
ak while wiping her tears..aap chaliye mai khud aa jaungi..
nk-hmm..
and he went from there...
IN THE restaurent..
nk is waiting for akshara to come..when a beautiful girl came and sit near his table..
girl..hi ! i am antra..
nk- naitik singhania
an-ji kya mai yaha baith sakti hu..
nk-ofcourse.
an-thanks..
then after some time akshara came here and sit on the same table..
an-oh sorry..i think she is ur wife..
nk-ji..wo
ak-ji nahi..i am his friend..
an-oh..that's great..so nk are u single..
nk-..
ak-ya he is..kyu naitik ji..
nk-mai..wo and continuously looking at akshara..
an-toh kya aap mere saath aaj raat ko disco chalenge..
nk-ya..
an-oh thank u so much naitik..i will wait for u..ok
nk-ya sure
and she went from there..
nk-ak aapne usse jhoot kyu bola ?
ak-abhi thodi der pehle hi aapne kaha tha ki hum ek doosre ke liye ajnabi rahenge..to mai aur kya karti..
nk-ha wo sab theek hai..par friends..
ak-kam se kam ye rishta to ho hi sakta hai..kyu
nk-hmm..
ak-nk ji ek baat poonchu..
nk-hmm..
ak-aapko antra jaisi ladkia pasand hai..
nk-theek hai..par ha mujhe ek aisi ladki pasand hai jo..
ak-kaisi ?
nk-jane dijiye akshara ab kya farak padta hai..meri shadi ho chuki hai..aur wo bhi aapse..
ak-...
nk-accha aap breakfast kijiye mai kuch shopping karke aata hu..shaam ke liye..aur aapko chalna ho toh..
ak-mai akele ja sakti hu..
nk-ok..
and he went for shopping..
when akshara phone ring..its varsha..
ak-hello..ha varsha bol kya hua ?
vr-kuch nahi bas tu to waha nk ji ke saath itni busy ho gayi ki ghar par phone nahi kia..to maine socha ki mai khud hi phone karu..
ak-accha kia..and started crying
vr-kya hua ak..
ak-kuch nahi bas sabki yaad aa gayi..
vr-nahi koi problem zaroor hai..bata..nk ji tujhse pyaar to karte hai na
ak-hmm..bahut karte hai..accha varsha mai phone rakhti hu..nk ji bula rahe hai..
vr-ok..bye..
ak-bye..
IN EVENING
nk gets ready for disco party with sneha..when akshara came from shopping..
nk-kaisa laga akele freely shopping karke..maza aaya na..
ak-ji..
nk-mujhe bhi dikhaiye kya kya khareeda..
ak-ye sab mere liye hai..toh pls
nk-hmm..good..ye hui na baat..accha akshara ye jijiye
ak-ye kya hai..
nk-aapke liye ye saari..aur jaldi se ready ho jaiye hume disco chalna hai..
ak-disco..aur saree me
nk-lena to mujhe kuch aur thi tha par aap to hamesha yahi pehne gi..chahe disco ho ya beech..kyu ?
ak-ya right..
nk-toh chaliye..jaldi se ready ho jaiye..
ak-nahi naitik mujhe nahi jana hai..
nk-kyu ?
ak-mai aapke aur antara ke beech me..
nk-akshara ye kya baat hui..mai janta hu ki aap kya kehna chahti hai..par mai apni limits janta hu
ak-mai aapko samjhti hu naitik par antra ko nahi
nk-toj phir..chalye ready ho jaiye
ak-hmm
nk-to theek hai mai bahar aapka wait karta hu..
and he quickly went to take antara..but she is already waiting for him..on the reception
nk-hey an..wow u looking hot
an-thanks nk..tum bhi kafi handsome lag rahe ho
nk-thanks..tum hamesha kya aise hi kapde pehenti ho
an-ha..kyu acchi nahi lagti
nk-nhi bahut sundar lagti ho..kaash
an-tumne kuch kaha
nk-nahi mai to bas yu hi
an-toh phir chale
nk-bas ek minute antara..wo akshara bhi abhi aa rahi hogi..to hum teeno saath me chale..
an-wo..akshara jo subah..resaturent me thi..
nk-hmm
an-wo behen ji type..tumhari friend..
nk became angry on this..matlab kya hai tumhara?
an-kuch nahi..maine socha tha ki hum tum akele chalenge..but its ok..uske jane se hame kya fark padega ? right..
nk-hmm
then their is a voice call from back and both turn to see..its akshara
PRECAP- antra try to get close to nk in the car in front of akshara..

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varsha

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Posted: 9 years ago

ooo wow raina ji hum to aapke fan hogaye ji

yaar kitna cute ff hai aapne to hume mar dala nice yaar par naksh ko milao unhe sepreat mat karo

but ye antara🤢 uff ... ise naitik se dur karo aur hamari akshra ko modern banaao antara ne akshu ko behenji kaha na

pls continue soon ...

thanQ 4 FF

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raina verma

@NAKSHMYJAAN

IF-Rockerz

Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: varshanakshiran
ooo wow raina ji hum to aapke fan hogaye ji
yaar kitna cute ff hai aapne to hume mar dala nice yaar par naksh ko milao unhe sepreat mat karo
but ye antara🤢uff ... ise naitik se dur karo aur hamari akshra ko modern banaao antara ne akshu ko behenji kaha na
pls continue soon ...
thanQ 4 FF

aapki saari baaton par gaur kia jayega..but thanks dear for liking it..with ur sweet comment

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