RaYa SS : Destined to Marry *PART-13 on PAGE-137 on PREVIW ON PAGE-145 - Page 7

Originally posted by: dhristikpd

Wow great twist I m loving your ss pls continue soon

Originally posted by: dhristikpd

Thanks for pm

Originally posted by: lpsakshi

thanks for pm

hahahha OMG twist pe twist 

loved each and every bit

rams expression when he saw married priya 🤣 that too  closing his mouth 

"Daaarling" suprb 

raam corrected his mistake 👏 yaha YD ki koi galati nahi hai 

and the young doctor is muttering some thing o bhi batado bhai😉😆 other wise all readers will imagine different different things 😆😆

Young doc : scrunched her eyes ,her eyebrows knotted suspiciously "why you wanted to meet her 

bechara ram 😆

Ram: uff how many times I told you ,Its personal  with frustatation he said "Kiddo kahin ki "

hahaaha i m imagining her expressions 

omg  mera pet dukh raha hai 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 

She pointed her index finger at his chest "Mister ,First You are the one who asked me help

And you are the one stopped me from my way

And You are the one asked about Priya with out mentioning surname

And You are the one calling me Kiddo from   when we met

aur koi hoga tho bhaag jayega haha

rams expressions good and he is calling sweetly her name i m thinking how it will be if ram calls sweetly"kiddooo" instead of her name 

awww priya didnt accept his appology very bad kiddo she is 

sorry neel meri comment ki puri asar tum par padegi

and ram ne lift offer ki👏

Ram: laughed at that quickly balnced with a stare , She was so cute how proudly she is saying that she has driving licence that means indirectly she is telling  she is not a kiddo ..Lol ..

hahhaa but any way we are not going to accept it 

But he liked her

we tooo😉

and rams opinion is too good 

priyas frustation is so real and natural to react like that 

and first impressoinof kapoors is so bad infront of kiddo i mean priya 😃

uff she didnt meet them properly

You know papa most shadists and most alcoholics  and most chain smokers are in doctors . she reasond out her point

😕😲

 she walked back to her room with  moisty eyes    

awww🤗

 He sat down ordered him self a hot strong coffee ,turning to her he asked what you want kiddo  . bits his tongue

hahaha

🤣 ab tho gaya 

Ram : hmm err , how to start it im ... Keeping Dairy milk infront of her 

hahaha koi aisa propose karta hai kya but smart try mt doc kapoor  but loved it in her mind she is cursing her self for rejecting choclt

and rams analysation is suprb 

Ram : kiddo . you are truly a kiddo ,but seeing you im not feeling you are rejecting this offer for being Doctor .before he shoot his question she shot up

Priya : mind you , Im 23 ,  

hahahaha is it?

in behaviour its like 3 

and the way she is effecting by ram s presence lovely described  and i think ram also hav a idea about her feelings lets see what is that connection 

Ram smilingly ..ufff bhai to deal with this kiddo  I need cold coffee . he laughed at his own joke , 

wow loved it 👏👏👏

he asked sudhir to come  to the place ,after talking with him  both left from there .

oh ram ne plan banadiya wow waiting eagerly

and waiting for ram and sudheer convo revealing  

and sagai owww 

.Priya  confused  poor baby

Priya sat in the sofa which was situated in the hall midway ..  When a pair of hands closed her eyes , she startled ,

i think its ram lets see

 

Wow wow wow...  

Originally posted by: rags06

Wow wow wow...  

I liked the twist... 

Thank god Priya is different from Priya sharma😛😛😛

I think Sagai is for Priya...

Waiting for next part eagerly😛😛

Thanks for PM😛

Originally posted by: armanz

Oh My , what a twist it was , awesome , will give my detailed comment later

I just loved the twist yaar but frankly giving Giri's antics to Priya was so good to read.. and u knw what when Ram has fallen for Kiddo she has to be Priya only but not my Kiddo..Loved her expressions when he told which Priya he wanted to meet.
Oh so hospital area is banned for marriage discussions 😆 but I understand her words about docs heard so many times from Giri. But Ram's expressions hearing her were worth reading.
She said No.. He took it to engagement!!! Ram toh Ram hain then will see what will Priya do.. And he took a dare step of planning against Priya with her dad..Will see how my sherni would react.
I just loved while readng the 2nd part so now I want 3rd part asap.. Its my bday gift na toh dedo abhi.. Plllzzz...pretty pllzzz.
PS: Who is following her?? Hmmm plz dont put her in troubles.

Lovevu n thanq for such a marvelous gift.. Want to read more so plz update asap.. Am just loving this...

Edited by luvsakshi - 9 years ago

Omg super preview

So those hands were Neha's and she is her di!!! and upar se preggy bhi... Lol when I read Priya's line I just wanted to request writer to write one flashback or current scene where Priya threatens her di that it should be a baby girl otherwise she wont take the baby into hee hands if its boy... Such a strong desire and warning se jaroor ladki hi paida hogi.. experience hain.. 😉 😆
And am very eager to know whats that Vik is hiding from Priya..
Sagai Ram ki sis ki hain ya Ram ki hain Priya ke saath jaldi bathao yaar . plzzz... ab next part toh banta hain boss...asap...
Ppleaseee.. Edited by armanz - 9 years ago

Originally posted by: luvsakshi

Lol hai na when he saw married lady😆

young doctor is muttering something" wo unse puchlena😉

lol

lol laugh laugh seeing your comment she will giv you in WA sooon🤣

loved your lovely comment with your description😆

haha no one will propose like this i think giving a dairy milk😆

but nice try wo doc hai na😆

will see wether those were Rams hands are some others

will try to give a preview by tonight

thank you so much for the comment

Hahaha OK
Its my pleasure to give comment

Part 1