Forever and ever final part on page 90 updated on 13/2 - Page 7

Originally posted by: Ni33

Sorry for the late unresing and this very short comment.Aww u call this short😳

I have ten more stories to unres my posts on.😆 Ha ha am better, just one or two missed out

Busy, busy, busy Choti Ni. 😆 Or what Sudha calls me youme. 🤣

 

First. Great first part.👏👏Thanks dear

 

And like Sudha said you had me confused there a bit.Thats what i want😆 What and why you shall soon find out.😆

 

Honestly sleeping with a teddybear.🤣Her love for teddy bear is more😆😆

Well everyone should still have their inner child intact, even though I didn't see that one coming.😆

And that to after marriage.🤣She is stil a child Now I hope that RK's late wife didn't also act like a child.Nope she did But then again we all act like children at some point.😆Obiously

Now over to the confusion.😆 You made me believe that Madhu was his wife and that she was dead, cause afterall this is a Rishbala story.U got an point, but stil there is something But then when RK went down the stairs and saw how Madhu ordered her and his family around, cause who want to handle one angry Madhu?😆 What secret power does she have? Don't tell me she have borrrowed some magic from any of the students from Hogwarts No i won't.😆 Anyway, this little belief of mine somehow got stronger. I thought RK visualized Madhu, remembering one old memory. This much Visualising, then he would live with that, but thats not the track girl Even during their conversation I still thought it was one of his memories.Ha ha really That he hallucinates Madhu time to time, because that is how much he miss his beloved Biwi.He miss her really, but the reason why he doesn't hallucinate wil be cleared later And that he haven't told about his hallucinations because he doesn't want to end up being all buddy buddy with a looney in an asylum, like Jack Nicholson in One flew over the Cuckoo's Nest. 😆 And this belief continued when RK looked at his late wife's portrait and his daughter Maya came to him, and cried along with him. But you crushed, which by the way made me happy 😆, my little assumption.Ha ha 😆 Cause I thought this means this wouldn't be one sad TS.I actually planned for a sad ending, but only kavya would love it, so thinking to change the end, shhh don't tel it to anyone But yet again I changed my mind as quickly as Schumacher drove his car. 🤣 Sorry, Schumacher was a Forumla 1 driver.Oh, sorry i don't know him Actually one of my favorites, when I watched him drive his car in those contests. 😆 I will come back to me changing my mind later. Anyway I agree with Sudha on this one, do not make Deepali his wife.No i won't She doesn't deserve that much love from our RK.Yup u r right Cause she left him afterall to raise his daughter all alone. And when RK called someone, I began wondering if Madhu really was alive or not.Ha ha thats why i didn't mention the name Cause there is no way he has a direct connection, meaning just a simple phonecall away, to his late wife.Girl, u crack me up 🤣 So when Maya cried Madhu ma, my little bubble burst and a whole lot of fireworks exploded.🤣 Unluckily they got extinguished pretty fast when RK gave a glare to Maya for calling Madhu, Madhu ma and that selfthought of his.Ha ha, see how much i have confused u

 

Now writing about my second confusion. You haven't actually written anywhere that RK's first wife was actually dead. Yup girl, but that candle thing doesn't strike ur mind that she is dead We all assumed that she was dead. Maybe she just left him. Because him making that promise to his two angels and that portrait just made us all assume she was dead. He might just loved her that much that even though she betrayed him he kept on loving her, staying there by her portrait, not allowing Maya to call Madhu Madhu ma. Cause Maya might have not cried because she misses her late mother. But because she misses the love from a mother, the love she gets from Madhu and because her father still lingers on in his memories from a woman that betrayed him.You giving more ideas for a new track, well we will work on that little late, might be after diwali

 

Now I do wonder is this is a 2S or 3S. Even i wonder, how i gonna complete this withing another part. And how RK will accept Madhu, that is if he does. And that is if she is actually alive. I hope you remember my little mindchanging from above. About this being a sad TS. Because this is called forever and ever. You might think that, like Sudha wrote that after his angel gets married he becomes all alone and then because of the sorrow and he no longer has to be there for Maya like before. He dies and gets his forever and ever in heaven with Madhu.That was the baseline of the story, but am working on it to change it  That is if Madhu really is his first wife and is dead. Thus concluding this to be one sad TS.

 

Hm, I was wrong. 😆 I did give you one long comment. 😆 Exactly Well, it isn't as much fun as I usually write them. This one is full of analyses.😆 But i enjoyed reading it

Well enjoy reading it and I hope you don't get tired after that.No i didn't

Sorry for the late unresing.No need of sorry Ni