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a manan ff-Damaged soul(NOTE on page-43 27/08/2015)

apardh_ba IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 05 October 2014 at 11:43pm | IP Logged
well i m new to this forum. First time I m trying to write a ff.
Plot - Same as d show but with a slight twist. Is nandini is as sweet as every1 thinks, But what if she is as broken and damaged as manik. What will Manik do when he came to know that maybe nandini is as much shattered in her life as his or maybe worse. But the thing is the path she has chosen to escape her demons. What will happen when fab5 came to realize that there are many ppl like them. What will happen when they realize their mistakes and how they try to be a better human being in their life.

Story starts when nandu land up at manik's house after risabh incident.

sorry guys for my bad english. But if you have like my concept plz press the like option or comment me.IF u guys want then I will cont this ff.

chapter 1 below

Chapter 2- page 2
Chapter 3a- page 3
Chapter 3b- page 4
Chapter 4- page 5
Chapter 5- page 6
Chapter 6- page 8
Chapter 7- page 12
Chapter 8- page 13
Chapter 9- page 16
Chapter 10- page 19
Chapter 10(a)- page 21
Chapter 11- page 24
Chapter 11(a)- page 25
Chapter 12- page 28
Chapter 13- page 30
Chapter 14 a&b- page 33
Chapter 14c- page 35
Chapter 14d- page 36
Chapter 14e- page 38

Edited by apardh_ba - 26 August 2015 at 1:16pm

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Kinnu1 Newbie

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Posted: 05 October 2014 at 11:58pm | IP Logged
I reqlly like the concept
Please continue soon

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ArchanaRM Senior Member

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Posted: 06 October 2014 at 1:47am | IP Logged
I liked the concept please give a try...
PanchaliKaArjun IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 06 October 2014 at 2:01am | IP Logged
Plz do write it and plz pm me i love Nandidni and Manik 
apardh_ba IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 06 October 2014 at 2:46am | IP Logged
chapter 1
scene starts when fab 4 went back to their home and manik decided to drive nandini to her house.
Manik: umm nandini i want to say something.
Nandini: What is it manik?
manik: You know I was thinking about...
ok this is not what I want to say to her. I M saying this because it is about my buddy I m doing this for him. Its not like I want to spend my precious time with her. I mean who wants to spend their time with her. Well Dhruv does and I know many of the boys does. Ugh I hv scene them ogling at her creeps they dont hv any other work except looking at pretty girls. This is all her fault why does she have to look so adorable all d time. I just hate her.
Nandini:Manik manik
Manik: what?
Nandini: Nothing its just that you are holding my hand and its hurting.
I looked at my hand and realized i m holding her hand like my whole life depends on it. But it feels good. OH what I m even thinking. OFF i hate her so much she drives me crazy.
Nandini: Manik are you ok?
MAnik: Ofcourse I m ok. I m holding ur hand bcoz I want to
MAnik: U want to hear that only right but I m so not sorry to burst ur bubble. I hold it mistakenly.
Nandini: Ok I get it now will you tell me what u want to say.
Oh god I totally forgot what I want to say ahh damn I hate her so much when she is around I become amir khan from ghajini. Oh I rem
Manik: I want to talk about rishabh and dhruv.
NANDU: oh d thing u said that night. Yeah ok I m f9.
MANIK: will U shut ur mouth for one sec I was thinking dat both dhruv and rishabh attacks are same but I think ris has suffered more. FOR one sec I thought she looked scared like she has seen a ghost infront of her. BUT I choose to ignore thatcand continue. I m thinking bout couns she can talk to him and maybe then we will know about d real reason behind his silence. I hv talk about this with dhruv nom also but dhruv never listen to us and we dont want to make him angry so we chickened out. But if rish wil agree to this then maybe we can help both of them. If earlier she looked scared then now she look like I hv accused her of a murder.
Nandini: I i hv to think about this now I need to go.
Manik: but ok you take ur time tell me in d mrng.
Nandu:my hand
manik :oh right ur hand bye hv bad dreams
nandu: sweet dreams monster she said with a smile. and i watch her as she dissapear in the night all d time I hv a smile on my face oh what I m doing ah I hate her of that i m sure.

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GERUA IF-Achieverz

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Posted: 06 October 2014 at 3:52am | IP Logged
welcome to the forum 
GERUA IF-Achieverz

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Posted: 06 October 2014 at 3:52am | IP Logged
congo for new story
GERUA IF-Achieverz

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Posted: 06 October 2014 at 3:52am | IP Logged
nice concept 

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