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Posted: 05 October 2014 at 12:01pm | IP Logged
He walked along lonely streets . All sattered broken n most importantly alone . All he could feel was pain piercing his broken heart . Today he lost his everything his heart , his soul , his willing feel any thing other than pain and most importantly her. Her whom he lo
ved more than himself , her whom he considered as his life , he lost her today . 

She left him all shattered broken beyond repair . All he wanted to do was to go back to her n ask her why , why she did this . What wrong he do??????? This is question he was asking to himself all the time but no answer came. He remembered her beautiful eyes which speak volumes . Her black hair oh seemed to be so sft . Her lips , he remembered their movement when she speaks . Her anger always ready to burn the people who came in her way . He remembered the day when she confessed how important he was to her. That moment he felt like world has stopped to him he coul only see was her only her . Then suddenly the faitful event of today morning when she betrayed him come to his mind . His small smile
 which came to his lips when he remembered her , vanished. All he could
 remember now was her betrayal.

He knew he was destined to be alone until she came. She came to his
 life
 n changed it completely without saying anything . She gave him
 hopes
 well false hopes would be better that he wont be alone again ,
 he 
would live his life not jst survive. Though she never told him but her
 gestures told him how important he was to her . Maybe he mistook
 her
 gestures how can anyone love a looser like him he was never
 important to anyone. He had found his solace in solitude but his destiny
 had planned smthing else for him it snached away his solace
 by
 snatching her waway from him. 

Why?????????? He yelled
He wanted his answers now n he knew how can he get his answers n
 how
 can he get his solace 

He moved towards the cliff n was about to jump when he heard a voice
 .
 The voice that he can recognise in millions the only person who
 cared
 him , who understood him n his pain

The person came near to him caught his hand n turned him so that he
 could collide with the persons chest. The person cupped his face ,
 their
 face inches apart he could feel the persons breathe

"How could u do this how can u even think of leaving me dont u
 know
 how much I love u how can u even think I will be able to
 live
 without u ha ?? Answer me pkc"Tongue

"I didnt had the choice sameer u know she betrayed me sameer oh for he
r i refused u n she how could she but u still love me oh honey i cant believe
 this i m sorry baby"he said

"Its ok pkc but whobetrayed u n how???? " said sameer confused

" That maya betrayed me u know for that vd but u tell me today was ur marriage na then what r u doing here dont tell me u r ready for my extra marrital wala idea" pkc told excitedly

"Well no need wo actually sanyukta ran away fo kaustuki" said sameer sighing

What what what (guys imagine thos as tv serial wala what) yipppeee that means they too r like us yaaay." Clapping pkc told

"No they r not wo actually kaustuki planned k wo sanyu ko mere saath phasa k khud rd k saath shaadi karegi but sanyu got to know her plan n also that kaustu has went to kidnap rd to marry her forcefully . So she went yo rescue rd n when she came back after rescuing him she was already married to rd so i thought of meeting u n i found u here" said sameer

"Awww my baby" pkc pulled his cheeks 

"Will umarry me pkc "

"Yess yes "

He pulled him to a kiss (ewwwDead)
N then they lived happily ever after

Plz read authors note bakwaas k alaawa bhi bohot kuch if u can understand
HEY KITNE LOG ABHI BHI BACHE HUE JLDI SE COMMENT DO WARNA RD KO RAAKHI BAANDHO
BTW A SHHAYARI BY ME 
NOT IRSHAAD NOT IRSHAAD
THANKU 
"AISE NA DEKHO MUJHE AE DOST K AATA HAI MUJHE HEART ATTACK
AISE NA DEKHO MUJHE AE DOST K AATA HAI MUJHE HEART ATTACK
MERE WRITUPS PADHE HAI TO KAROGE HI MUJHPE ATTACK"
OK I CAN AK47 COMING TO MY DIRECTION 
OOPS GOTTA RUSH
ZINDA BACHI TO APNE FFS UPDATE KARUNGI
BYE SASTRIYAKAAL JIII

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Posted: 05 October 2014 at 12:13pm | IP Logged
res.
unres
ROFLROFLROFL
i mean pkc and sameer in loveROFL
its really funny and superb fab really awesome.
you describe everything very nicelyROFL
love it. thanx foe pm me.
ma Rd ko pakka rakhi badhungi,ROFL


Edited by sudipto-69 - 05 October 2014 at 12:16pm

Mahi2012

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Posted: 05 October 2014 at 12:25pm | IP Logged
res
Unres.

Omg!!! wht ws dis!!!!
  ROFL
I couldnt stop my self of laughing so hardly.
Pkc n  sameer r in love. LOLLOLLOL
dey evn kissed!!!!! ROFLROFLROFL
Moreover kaustu planned 2 marry rd!!!
N sanyu ran 4 rd. Big smileBig smileBig smile
God!!!! whn i started 2 read i tho8 itz emotional n beautiful stry.
Bt omg!!! usk= k baad jo bomb foda hai!!!
I seriously gone mad!!!
I ws laughing lyk mad person n dat  2 at dis tym!!!
1 more thng u hd gvn name painful love, yeah it ws indeed painful
coz of continuous laughing in my stomach.
 
omg!!! grl!!!
Hats off. Clap Clap Clap

keep gvng such gr8 updates
Dhansu comeback by u.

Love,
Mahi Heart




Edited by Mahi2012 - 05 October 2014 at 12:40pm

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Posted: 05 October 2014 at 12:31pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by sudipto-69

res.
unres
ROFLROFLROFL
i mean pkc and sameer in loveROFL
its really funny and superb fab really awesome.
you describe everything very nicelyROFL
love it. thanx foe pm me.
ma Rd ko pakka rakhi badhungi,ROFL
Thanks baby
Thank god u r ready raakhi baandhne k liye thanks for that 
Phew chalo ek mere checklest se hati


Edited by pritha072angel - 05 October 2014 at 12:30pm

sudipto-69

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Posted: 05 October 2014 at 12:32pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by pritha072angel

Originally posted by sudipto-69

res.
unres
ROFLROFLROFL
i mean pkc and sameer in loveROFL
its really funny and superb fab really awesome.
you describe everything very nicelyROFL
love it. thanx foe pm me.
ma Rd ko pakka rakhi badhungi,ROFL
Thanks baby
Moi to tujhse raakhi bandhwaa k rahungi atleast ek to mere raaste se kam hogi
ma tho first sa hi Rd ko bhi jasa manti hu.ROFL

pritha072angel

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Posts: 887

Posted: 05 October 2014 at 12:36pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by sudipto-69

Originally posted by pritha072angel

Originally posted by sudipto-69

res.
unres
ROFLROFLROFL
i mean pkc and sameer in loveROFL
its really funny and superb fab really awesome.
you describe everything very nicelyROFL
love it. thanx foe pm me.
ma Rd ko pakka rakhi badhungi,ROFL
Thanks baby
Moi to tujhse raakhi bandhwaa k rahungi atleast ek to mere raaste se kam hogi
ma tho first sa hi Rd ko bhi jasa manti hu.ROFL
Sorry us time moi ko laga tune likha h tu raakhi nhi baandhegi 
But thank god to mere check list se hati ab dusro ki baari h bwahahaha

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pritha072angel

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Posted: 05 October 2014 at 12:41pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by Mahi2012

res
Unres.

Omg!!! wht ws dis!!!!
ROFL
I couldnt stop my self of laughing so hardly.
Pkc n  sameer r in love. LOLLOLLOL
dey evn kissed!!!!! ROFLROFLROFL
Moreover kaustu planned 2 marry rd!!!
N sanyu ran 4 rd. Big smileBig smileBig smile
God!!!! whn i started 2 read i tho8 itz emotional n beautiful stry.
Bt omg!!! usk= k baad jo bomb foda hai!!!
I seriously gone mad!!!
I ws laughing lyk mad person n dat  2 at dis tym!!!

omg!!! grl!!!
Hats off. Clap Clap Clap

keep gvng such gr8 updates
Dhansu comeback by u.

Love,
Mahi Heart

Thanku yaara 
Moi to likhte k start se hi has rahi thi 
Thanks a lot dear

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Posted: 05 October 2014 at 12:49pm | IP Logged
amazing os dear n ha tujhe marne ke liye mein yahi wait kar rhi hu ni likhungi bolke dara deti hai, agli baar aisa boli na toh chodungi ni tujhe chal aaj ke liye itna hi kafi hai i think Wink

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