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Pyaar Ya Dosti part 7 pg 7 - Page 5

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Posted: 9 years ago
thank you guys soo much.your appreciation makes me to improve.
part 7 will come up soon in a week itself.
will try my best to update..😊😊

and yeah agar ladai hui tho patchup bhi hoga.
waise bhi veeba kitne din tak rute rehenge?😉😉
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Posted: 9 years ago
Very well written sanju as alwasy... please jaldi sy patch up krwa dena ziyada missunderstandings create mat krna... best of luck for your model exams 👍🏼
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Posted: 9 years ago
part 7


anirudh was walking down the streets when suddenly a hand came and came and caught him..
mainnu chadd,kon hai?

it was dark all around so anirudh could not see who it was.
the person dragged him through the streets .he kidnapped him but no one saw that.

veera at her room crying,
veera,tu ro mat,mai aaya hoon na..
veera turned back to see baldev with a box of choclates.
tu,tu yaham kaise? tu toh mujseh naaraz tha na..

baldev,veera tannu pata haina mera gussa ekdum pressure cooker jaise hai.isiliye mai bas yuhi tuj par gussa hua.
mainnu samajna chahiye ki tum ne usse aisa kyom kaha aur yeh bhi ki tu sirf mujseh pyaar karti hai.haina?

veera ran to baldev's arms.
baldev, tu teek toh haina,tu jab samajdhari ki baat karte ho toh mainnu toh tension aa jaati hai.

baldev started laughing.
baldev, yeh tension hamesha keliye ab teri hone waali hai..

baldev picked her up in his arms and walked towards her bed
veera,baldev ,i love u.
baldev,main bhi luv u 
he slowly placed her on the bed and kissed her forhead.

meri veerakdi ko mujse aur koi nahi cheen sakta,haina?

veera brushed baldev's hair by her hands 
muje apne sher se cheen na door muje teri nazron se koi bhi alag nahi kar sakta.
mai teri hun aur tu mera
chahe hamare dosti ,dushmani ya pyaar chale us waqt pe.
  
baldev cupped veera's face.they shared a kiss.it turned passionate as their hunger to get each other flooded out.
veera,baldev main bahut lucky hoon jo muje tu milla

baldev,lekin veera mujseh zyaada lucky nahi hai tu,jab se yeh sherni meri zindagi mai aaya hai mere life hi badal gaya..

baldev placed his lips again on her lips and sealed it as his own.  he leaned onto veera
but suddenly the kiss was broken by a phone call.


ab yeh kya nahi siyaapa hai,

veera was laughing seeing baldev irritated.
baldev was going to cut the call when he saw the number and who was calling him he quickly jumped out from the bed.
baldev,veera mainnu yeh call lena hoga ek minute.

baldev redialled the number and walked towards the window so veera cant hear.
baldev,kaam hua ki nahi?
person on phone, hua.jaise tumne kaha.
lekin sirf iss baar tum jeet gaye ho,agli baar shayad nahi jeet paaunga.
baldev,jeet meri tha ,the, aur hamesha rahenge.aap uss baat ka phikar mat karo,
person on phone,teek hai phir.

baldev cut the phone and came back to veera
veera,kon tha?
baldev,koi nahi ,bas mere dost tha.lekin veera sun,mainnu ab jana hoga bahut der ho gaya hai

veera was sad hearing that.

baldev gave her a kiss ,
phikar naa kar mere heeriye,jald se jald tannu apne dulhan banakar apne saath lekar jaaunga..

veera smiled at that.
they shared a passionate hug.both of them holded on to each other promising to never let go.



                                      thats it for today.
drop in comments and likes.😊😉

mehwishk13 thumbnail
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Posted: 9 years ago
Oye hoye!! Sher ne phir koi ulta kaam to nahi kar dia 😲👏
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Posted: 9 years ago
Originally posted by: veeba4eva

Oye hoye!! Sher ne phir koi ulta kaam to nahi kar dia 😲👏



sher ka kaam sher hi jaane.
wait until the secret about pind da sher reveals!😛😉😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
Awsome update dear as always keep it up 👍🏼 
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Posted: 9 years ago
hai sanjana, i am kichu. nice update i am from kerala
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Posted: 9 years ago
Originally posted by: KICHUdaffodil

hai sanjana, i am kichu. nice update i am from kerala


thank you.
hey iam also from kerala.nice to meet you.