Originally posted by: login97so sorry i still haven't unres'd my comment... i got really unwell, couldn't get off my bed... school bhi nahi gayi do din se... lekin in the next 24 hours for sure, i will unres π
sorry by the way this is preeti... my cousin had logged in from her account that she just made two days ago ... lol didn't realise i was still logged into her account... by the way she loved this ss too, mere saath parha tha us ne, lekin her parents are a little but strict, they don't want her to watch serials and read these stories... for her, its just study study study all day... to mere ghar aa kar usne account banaya, warna mere uncle ko pata chal jata lolbut yah i will unres soon π
Ok Preeti
Unres when you are feeling better
Get well soon and please do take care
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Kuch din I too a break from IF and you break a record
Originally posted by: jyothi_cooloops I am sorry I forgot to unres my comment.
the last part i felt was a bit rushed.
it is an amazing story I really liked the complex characters and the emotions described.
nice work chahat but its definitely not your best sorry but tats just my opinion.do.write a new ff soon
Thank you for the comment
Originally posted by: Chahanya
She began calling him Shiv when they shared thier pain Ye toh bas she was being strict with her naughty hubby so she called him Mr. Shekhar
Inke baby boy ka name Shivan hai not Shivam
Yeah fatema wanted me to mention that he was impotent but then I twisted with a preggo Ashima's accident so then I thought to bring in a twist where Shiv will reveal that he lied
It takes a man to tell the truth about him being impotent I think it takes more than a man to lie about it when he can father a child
Yeah did not go my usual SR way but jitna tha utna kafi tha
Thank you for the long comment
Originally posted by: Chahanya
Thank you for unressing
Haw naughty baby sneaking into mamma papa room in their absence and taking their phone
If they will come to know they will say I spoiled their good gal
Originally posted by: Chahanya
Sumi and Irawati both were widows in this story
Her hubby Bhairon had died long time back
In this story she was childless So HE was not her son
I mentioned a little something na that she an Irawati went on a foreign trip
Yeah during the round n round shadi she was not mentioned ; Actually she was on a national tour for her NGO
(Just like BV ppl don;t show us things and then one fine day the characters speak about them as memories
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