Me first me first!!Resss😎
Unress! Yaaay you wrote the second chapter! 👍🏼
First of all soo sorry for the late comment! You already know my views on the first chapter, so here's the second chapter ke comments😉
I must say I am loving Zara to bits 😳 She does seem like an innocent and bubbly girl hehe
The beginning was so well-written. Hehehe the alarm clock bit sounds like moii😆
I have to snooze my alarm at least three times!
Jenny and Zara's relationship seems so nice ..waiting to see you pen down more of their scenes 😃
Alsoo I love how he calls her little devil😃
LOL the scene at the terrace.. that was so unexpected.. I was like whaaa😲
And then he appears in front of her😳😳
Love the first convo between Ryan and Zara..damn I love them already😃
Bechara Ryan..how could he not appear in front of her and save her! 😳
Ahhh Zara is the next one why why whyy.. ok I know why😉
Summerdale college.. I started dreaming about the place as soon as I read the name sighh😳 What a pretty name😃
Yaay he is going to be their tenant! Can't wait to read the next part..update sooonish please😳
Edited by SeasonOfLeaves - 9 years ago
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