OS janne kyu part 4 on page 5

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Posted: 9 years ago
Hi yeh hai mohabbateins, this is my first OS and I don't know how it will be agar galthi hai toh maaf karna please
It was a regular morning in bhalla house
Raman:ishtaa ishitaa kaha chali gayi ye pakal madrasan
he was searching for her and that time his mother came
toshi:kya Hua puttar itna chilla kyu rahihu
Raman:maa ishita kaha hai
toshi: sorry meri puttar mei toh bulgaya tume bataanekeliye wo toh Singapore chaligayi koyi zaroori meeting hai
Raman:Singapore chaligayi why don't she tell me
toshi:u was sleeping isliye wo tume disturb karna nahi chatithi
Raman:yesterday y don't she tell me
toshi:she slept earlier because she wants to go early tu chinda math kar she would come next week
by saying this toshi has gone from there and Raman was in full of thoughts he was sure her trip was not for any meeting,he was thinking about the last conversation with her and that made him more frightened
why did ishita gone from there and why was Raman afraid about?
any guesses
will be continued
Hindi and English is not my mother tongue so sorry for the mistakes
comment please
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Posted: 9 years ago
A gud start... plz continue soon!!!
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Good start..curious to knw why Ishita left..continue pls😊
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