Naina-Sandhir 4 shots Last part on page 5,culdnt PM :( sorry - Page 2

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Posted: 9 years ago
Hey,
Amazing OS :)
Just loved it.
BT yaar y such a open end???? :(
Plzzz continue it na with a happy wala end.
Plzzz
N PM me when u do.

Love
-Pihu
newmoon18 thumbnail
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Posted: 9 years ago
Hey nyc try

Luved it to the core

Alwz keep smiling dear 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
I loved it yr..its sweet nd simple..
Nd i like this ending but
If u want contiune this ..so plz update
Nd yaaa ...
I love this song too...a day may be i am listing this song 20-25 time
Nd this song suits this os perfectly
Love
Payal
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Posted: 9 years ago
Beautiful!🤗
Good Job!👏
It was sad...but pwuweez continue! * puppy face*

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Posted: 9 years ago
It was really beautiful.. coming straight from SanDhir's heart.
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Posted: 9 years ago
It had a sad ending
But I love sad stories
Thanks for writing this! 😃
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Posted: 9 years ago

Ok so many of you were demanding for the next part of my OS "Naina" as you guys thought it's too sad...frankly I was kinda depressed yesterday as my exam didn't go well...but I really loved the response...thank you so much!!!! Ok so here's the next part...and yes...SanDhir ki story ends in a happy tone... PART TWO!

 

It was dawn...a new day, a new hope...but for our TWO SOULS...it was a day of separation...of pain...

Sanyukta couldn't sleep whole night...neither could Randhir...both were like zombies...sitting beside their windows...staring lifelessly outside...Even our Vidarth was tensed...seeing their condition...but both decided something

"Inn donno ko koi alag nahi kar sakta...donno ko milana banta hain..."

And at the same time both of them SMSed each other...

"Meet me in the storeroom within 10 mins"

Both of them got the message and smiled...how much their thoughts were alike...Oh yeah forgot to tell you...Vidarth were now couple...

Both of them rushed to the storeroom..and reached there panting...

V- Uff...Parth! Sanyukta ki halat bohot...

P- Randhir ki bhi halat bohot..

Both- Kharab hain!

Both were now perplexed...

P- Pata hain...kal kis halat main tha??? Roye jar aha hain...ab to rona bhi bandh kar diya..na kuch khaya na piya...he loves her a lot yaar...

V- To tumhe kya lagta hain??? Sanyukta ki halat achi hain??? She is enjoying this???  She is devastated...who to abhi bhi ro rahi hain...

P- To ab??? We know that they love each other...but...

V- Sanyukta ki shaddi...she is gonna go by 12 o clock...

P- Hume kissi bhi tarah Randhir ko motivate karna padega...

V- Hmmm...main bhi wahi soch rahi thi...ok thikhe...idea!

P- Kya???

V- Are main abhi Sanyukta ko jakkar convince karti hun...tum Randhir ko jakkar provoke karo...he works best when his ego is provoked...

P- Yeah right...WAH! Vidushi mere sath rehne ka asar para hain tum par must say! I am proud of you!

V-*dreamily* Thanks...Ok well now go!

P- Pehle ek...

Vidushi understood and blushed and kissed him on the cheek and said- Now go!!!

And Parth ran away...Vidushi too...they only had 20 mins left...

In girl's room-

Sanyukta was packing her belongings..when Vidushi entered...

S- Loh Vidushi! Ab tum mera bed finally apne wale se join kar sakti hon...humesha ke liye...she said sadly...

Vidushi felt bad...she went near her...and said...

"Tum apne dreams and pyaar ke liye ek baar bhi fight nahi karogi???"

"Itne din se kya kar rahi hun??? Aur nahi hota..."

"Galat...tumne aj tak sirf apne dreams ke liye fight ki hain..."

Sanyukta...startled by her voice...looked up...

Now Vidushi's voice was raising...more like an accusing tone...

"Tumne sirf apne dreams ke liye fight ki hain...Pyaar ke liye nahi...Randhir ke liye nahi...yaha tak to usne bhi tumahre dreams ke liye fight ki hain...TUMHARE liye fight kiya hain...engagement main kitna maar khaya phir bhi...he supported you and loves you..."

"Wait a min...tumhe kaise pata ki.."

"Miane video dekhli thi...that's not the point...the point is...kyun?? Kyun tum apne pyaar ki kurbani de rahi hon??? Mujhe to lagta hain tum to shayad pyaar tak nahi karti..."

SLAP...

"Bas Vidushi..."Sanyu trembled with anger...

Vidushi smirked...but again composed herself...

"Kya galat kaha haan????"

"Mere pyaar par ungli uthane ka koi right nahi hain tumhe..."

"Huh! Sirf kehne ke waqt hi tum kehti hon...karte kuch nahi..."

Now Sanyu broke down...

"Tum kya jano Vidushi...main kis halat main hun? Mujhe meri family ke izzat ke liye kitna bara sacrifiv=ce dena par raha hain..."

Now Vidushi got frustrated...

"Toh maat..."

She couldn't complete as Sanyu's phone rang...it was his brother...Sanyu composed herself and answered...

"Han bhai???"

"Jaldi aja main gate par...10 min main araha hun...tujhe lene..."

It felt like a hammer...

"Thikhe bhai...abhi ayi..." The call disconnected...

Sanyu excused herself and walked past Vidushi...

V- Dhat tereki!!! Yeh to khudki bali chadane par tuli hain!!! Kya karu??? Ab to bas Randhir ke side se hi kuch ho sakta hain...Hope Parth kuch karde...

 

Boys' room...

Jiggy was constantly ushering Randhir to have food but he was numb and quiet...Parth entered the room and Jiggy said- Dekho na Parth bhai! Randhir bhai kuch bhi nahi kha rahe...Kalb hi kuch nahi khaya...

P- Jiggy tu chor use aur ja...class main...

J- Are par...

Parth looked at him with pleading eyes and Jiggy understood that he was upto something so he quietly went away...

Parth went near Randhir...

P(in mind)- Hope sab plan ke mutabik ho...

Then he got a msg from Vids...

"Sanyu ki taraf se plan failed :( Ab to Randhir ke side se kuch karo...she is at Main gate now...leaving within 10 mins..."

He face palmed..."Ab toh aur pressure hogaya..."

"Randhir????"

Randhir just tilted his head ever so slightly at him...Parth gasped as he saw cold eyes...and tear-marked face...

"Concentrate Parth...now you have to taunt him..."

"Maine socha nahi that um ek looser hon..."

Randhir was a little taken aback and agreed in a low voice...

"Pata hain...isliye to koi mere life main nahi tika..."

Parth again was going to fale palm...

"Dhat! Kaunse direction main ja rahi hain baaat??? Are yeh aur mayus ho raha hain..."

"Bass dekhliye tumhare pyaar ka power..."

Randhir was now pricked...he raised hi eyebrows...

"Kaam kar raha hain.."

"Aur nahi to kya? THE RANDHIR SINGH SHEKHAWAT! I AM RANK NO.1...bloody hell...Sanyukta ko to rok nahi oaya...bas itna hi pyaar karta hain??? Maine to maut se bhi ladne ke liye taiyaar tha..to bring Arpita back..aur tu??? Tu use ese hi jane dega???"

Now Randhir was angry...

"To ??? Aur kya karu main??? Agar who apne bali chadana chahiti hain to??? Aur upar se main to engagement bhi todne gaya tha..."

"Haan...pata hain...talli hoke...phir pitayi bhi huyi..."

Now Randhir's cheeks flushed...

"To?? Aur kya karu??Is baar humiliate hone ka shock nahi..."

Now Parth got irritated...

"Are yaar!!!! Iss baar drink mat karna!!! Bas! Aura b main bhi hun...hum sab help karenge teri..shaddi todne main...Hum bhi chahte hain Sanyu ki shaddi nah on..."

Now Randhir was finding some light...

"Really?'' He asked...

Parth nodded in affirmation...and for the first time in a long time..Randhir grinned...and hugged Parth again...

"Thanks!!!!!"

Parth smiled...

"Chalo dulhan na sahi...dulha to patgaya! :D"

End...

Ok..so I have an idea for the epic shaddi also...if you like this...then I will make it a four shot...

Baishali

 😊

Edited by baishali1234 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
Now dis is going to be fun

I luv happy ending

All on mission dulhan bhagao

Wtng to see what hppns next

For sure continue yr
N han don't b disheartened exams to hte rhte h don't take stress yr

Next tym acha ho jyega

Alwz keep smiling dear 😊Edited by newmoon18 - 9 years ago
MDKSSM thumbnail
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Posted: 9 years ago
Finally dulha patgaya i just cant wait fr nxt prt plzzz updt asap
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Posted: 9 years ago
Awesome
Love the concept and storyline
Update soon