OKAY. THE FEEDBACK FOR THIS STORY IS AMAZING GUYS! So thank you! And your reviews are so sweet, they put a huge smile on my face. I answered some questions that a lot of people had below the first chapter on the first page but I'll reiterate it here.
1. NO ONE GUESSED THAT IT WAS AN EARRING IN HER POCKET LOL. You guys, Asad kept her earring for like ever in the showww! :) But the amount of people wondering if it's an engagement ring is too damn high, y'all are getting ahead of yourself there ;)
2. For the lot of you that are wondering about how the POV of this story will be, well, I plan on writing this story only in Zoya's POV until a certain point. It's just the way I am choosing to write this story, you will get an account of what was going on in Asad's head but not until later! You're going to be right there along with Zoya trying to figure out Asad's feelings okay?! I will probably end up doing something thing "Asad's POV Fridays" or something like that at some point where you'll get Asad's POV on multiple events.
3. For everyone wondering what their backstory is, you'll find out in due time! I set up the first chapter to just show the dynamics of their relationship. You'll get more background information embedded in the coming chapters.
4. Sexual tension - HELL YES. There is much sexual tension between our lead pair. I feel like Asad-Zoya always had sexual tension between them, even in the show, but they didn't dwell on it for rating reasons.
5. The inner voice - I AM SO GLAD EVERYONE LOVES THIS. Lol. It's so much fun to write tbh.
Edited by astonm - 9 years ago
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