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Gotta be you (FF)(Part4-pg5-Updated)

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Posted: 9 years ago
Hey guys!
I am up with a new FF
Yeah i know exams but i can't stay away from Zaya
But you will only get update when i am lil free...
I am updating the prologue in some time!!
Just watch out!!
BABA BI- gentlemeno aur ladieso aagayi hai wapas aapki writer SUNIDHI
(My real name for those who don't know infact no one knows)
To rahiyega humare saath dekhenge #BEINTEHAA aur karenge Zaya aur Harshika se mohbbat
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Index:
Prologue - Below
Chapter 1 - Page 1
Chapter 2 - Page 2
Chapter 3 - Page 4
Chapter 4 - Page 5
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Posted: 9 years ago
Continue plzzz and here's mine :)
http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=4165067
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Posted: 9 years ago
Gotta be you (FF)
Prologue:

Zain:Mat karo yeh sab mere liye...yeh samjhota tha isse samjhota hi rehne do...
khamaka ki galat famiya pal raha tha..
ki hum logo ne kahi faisla tai ka liya hai...lekin
sach toh yeh hai ki hum wahi ke wahin hai...ek centimeter bhi aage nahi badhe...aaj sham sari galat famiya door hogayi...aur mujhe apni zindagi ki hakkikat bhi pat chal gayi..jhooth ke sahar jeete aye hain..
ajnabi the aur ajnabi hi rahengi...
He moves out from the room
Aaliya:Zain...
Nahi abh main nahi seh sakti...main jaa rahi hoon...
kahin door...bhopal...nahin aana mujhe tumhare pass...jab tumhe mujhse itni takleef hoti hai...
Aaliya leaves
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That's it for now will be updating after sometime...
hope u liked it...
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"Ek baar jo maine commitment kardi uske baad toh main apne aapki bhi nahi sunti.."
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Posted: 9 years ago
It seems like an very nice prologue 
Continue soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
nice prolouge
cont soon plz
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Posted: 9 years ago
Hey guys!
You all are not commenting!
That's the biggest problem!!
If u don't comment i feel i am writing terrible...
Chalo yahi comment kardo ki main bura likhti hoon...
Par kamse kam comment to karo!!!!!!!!!!!!!
BABA BI se shraap de dungi..
Chalo ab le hi lo...apna return gift 
(THIS ONLY FOR THOSE COMMENTED BEFORE)

Gotta Be You

Chapter 1:

Scene 1:

Zubair:Aaloo tum chinta mat karo waise bhi yeh rishta ek samjhota hi to hai sab theek ho jayegaa 

keeping a hand on her cheeks...

Aaliya:Hmmm...

Tears rolling down her face..

Zain sees this whole scene and is fuming with anger...

Zain comes in b/w

Zain:Kya main apni biwi ko apne saath leke ja sakta hoon?

Mr. Zubair Qureshi?

Zubair:Zain woh tumhari biwi hai isme tumhe permission lene ki koi zaroorat nahi hai...

Zain:Thank u very much for your advice...

Aapko mere saath ghar chalna hai aap kisi aur ke saath ayengi?

He asked aaliya.

Aaliya:tumhare saath...

Zain holds her hand tight and goes to the car and makes her sit,

he was quiet harsh on her.

The whole journey in car was silent.

 

Scene 2:

They both get out of the car.

Aaliya is moving towards the house but Zain stops her and twists her hand behind her back (Zain style)

Aaliya:Ahhh Zain...

Zain:Kya keh rahi thi tum...yeh shaadi ek samjhota hai?

Hmmm bolo?

Aaliya:Main?

Zain:Haan tum..

Aaliya:Zain who maine nahi Zubair ne kaha tha...

Zain:Maana ki Zubbair ne kaha tha par tumne haan mein haan to milaya than a?

Aaliya:Haan Zain...aur waise bhi yeh rishta ek samjhota hi to hai...

Zain:Haan...Zubair hi toh hai tumhare life ki sabse badi importance or main?

Main tumhari Zindingi ki sabsi badi galti hoon?

AAliya:Zain...tum aisa kyun bol rahe ho?

Bichare Zubbu pe kyun gussa nikal rahe ho?

Zain:BICHARA ZUBBU...MY FOOT!!

And stabs hard on the car engine...he gets hurt...

Aaliya:Zain dhikhao...

Zain leaves from there...

 

Scene 3:

Zaya in bedroom

Aaliya takes out a tee for Zain..

Zain pulls her back to him..

Zain:Mat karo yeh sab mere liye...yeh samjhota tha isse samjhota hi rehne do...

khamaka ki galat famiya pal raha tha..

ki hum logo ne kahi faisla tai ka liya hai...lekin

sach toh yeh hai ki hum wahi ke wahin hai...ek centimeter bhi aage nahi badhe...aaj sham sari galat famiya door hogayi...aur mujhe apni zindagi ki hakkikat bhi pat chal gayi..jhooth ke sahar jeete aye hain..

ajnabi the aur ajnabi hi rahengi...

He moves out from the room

Aaliya:Zain...

Main jaanti hoon ki agar main ya rahi to tum apna gussa kam nahi kar paoge...tumhare bhalie ke liye main ja rahi hoon

Khuda Hafiz

She wrote all this on a piece of paper and left it for Zain.

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Promo:

Zain:Wah ek emotional sa letter likh ke chali gayi...

Tumhe kya lagta hain Zain abdullah tumhe manane aayega?

Huh kabhi bhi nahi...

Suddenly the besharam Zain enters.

Zain:Tu?

BZ:Haan main...aur tu kya keh raha tha kit u nahi jaega mat ja main chale jaata hoon...

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"Bas dua mein yaad rakhna...

Kyuki kal mera exam hai.."

Edited by -Mera-Hi-Jalwa- - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
I m first. waiting for besharam zain.
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Posted: 9 years ago
Its amazing dear
Pls update the next part ASAP
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Posted: 9 years ago
This is A-M-A-Z-I-N-G!
Pls pm me next tym.
And continue soon!:-)
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Posted: 9 years ago
Good one...
Tnx
And
Cont. Soon