NEW ASHLOK FICTION : GUILTY Chapter 29page 140 - Page 40

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Posted: 9 years ago

Thank you sweety!
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: DEVU.NAIR

@bold thank u soo much 4 your wish chechiii🤗❤️
 


You're most welcome.
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: jhumjhum

Amazing update Anu one mystery solve that Shlok is unmarried n Kavya is this new lady's daughter who's husband would be Shlok's colleague. Astha saw a new side of Shlok n slowly she is thinking about him more. But I love Shlok's reaction when Astha tell him about his wife & his line "I'm married n nobody bother to inform me" 😆. Shlok past is so pathetic both of them r deprived from their parental love n childhood happiness I think this feeling will bring them more closer. Shlok again dreaming about his Holy Cow Girl 😉! Waiting for next update 😊.


Hey jhuma thank you so much for the the wonderful comments. So sorry for the delay. You know the reason.. Forgive the short reply. 


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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: miac

Lovely update... I am married no body cared to inform me bhwaa. .loved it..


Thank you Raji for the support. 
He's irritated to say the least.
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: GoWithTheRhythm

Wonderful update i wonder whether he is related to that little girl or not! Loved the curious aastha very much and how she felt secure in his arms!  And loved that shlok is slowly falling head over heels for this tiny cow girl *-* amazing update continue aoon


Hi Amel! That will be revealed  in the next.  Thank you so much for your support.
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: sreekailas

Anu diii..I wish u were here so that I can hug with all my might... You know what I'm actually proud of myself! Yes! For insisting u to start writing stories too.. I always knew that u r an excellent writer..but ..I don't know how to say..you're simply brilliant! The way u wrote this one.. I must say I felt like reading Dan Brown's! Yes..Dan brown's novel added with elements of humour! Don't think that I'm flattering u..but honestly I really really really loved it..i only read till chapter 8.. I'm commenting b4 reading d rest coz if I continue reading..I will b too lost that I won't b able to even comment properly!
Wanted to add something else too.. Shlokie's self talk!! Thats just hilarious!


Hey! Little one! Thank you so much for those wonderful words, dan brown would sue you for  belittling his name.  Thank you nevertheless. I would give you one tight hug as well. Thank you for pushing me over the edge so that I would leap and test the depth.. 
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: srilotus

such beautiful updates😃

thanks for the PM😊


Thank you so much Sri. 
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: lively_roshani

ok now our det. Agnihotri started to lose in her dreams😳

and he had bitter past also like Aastha
thats why they felt so connected to each other😊


Hi .rosh, thank you for taking the time to read and comment.,

That is one reason., yes!
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Posted: 9 years ago
Hi dear
I had read the chap a couple of days ago but didn't have the time to place a comment until now
and what can i say other then that this was another marvelous chap. I liked aasthas curiosity towards lovemehotri and his "wife"
plz continue soon at your convenience
love ya and take care
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: sathuraj

Hi Anu...

 
A Big Sorry for not responding to your update dear...
 
will go to each chapter and will write my comment..
 
pls forgive me...
 
 


Hey! Sathu! I know the reason. So, please don't say sorry. Just read and enjoy I know how busy you are. It's ok. I really mean it. Your thoughts means mush to me but I know it takes time to sit a post comments.