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Posted: 9 years ago
Originally posted by: Shivanie05

Hello my dear interesting story I'm guessing this will be going like the movie "She's All That" anyways I have a small request whenever you are writing in Hindi could you please translate that part to English since I don't know Hindi thanks again and please continue soon.

sure darling as my hindi sucks tooo
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Posted: 9 years ago

Part 2 

----next day

Singhainas land to india (mumbai), & heading toward there mansion

R:wow,so many girls, I like indian beauty Sammy (looking here & there)koi se Sammy bol

S:no,not them, I will tell u, fr nw let go...

R:haan,theek hai,bt paaki kahan hai???

P:I'm here (coming frm behind) 

R:I told u to be with us, phir bhi u r behind me y paakhi

P:bhai don't treat me like a kid,I can take care of me (rudely)

R:don't talk to me in tune of urs, I'm nt mom to tolerate u bad behaver,I will slap u fr that got it

P:sorry bhai (tear eye)

R:let go

----in car 

Sammy got neetu call 

N:so reached there huh!!! (Smiling)achi, choco pie, first go to Kamla house then home 

S:aunty pls it's Samar, ok theek hai 

R:kya hua 

S:wo aunty wnt k hum Kamla ma k ghar jaaye  

R:what?? Have mom lost it...shit, suhana is waiting for me 

S:raghav cme down, don't worry only for 5 mins

R:ok

P:driver ji pls Kamla k ghar chala 

------reach Kamla house 

Pakhi run inside the house 

P:Kamla ma, hum aagaye!!!!(hugging her)

Ka:mera paakhi baby, aur kon aaye hai??(hugging her back) 

P:wo raghav bhahiya & Sammy bhahiya

Ka:aur Saab & madam 

P:wo kuch time baad aaye gaye 

Ka:ok, bt where is raghav & Samar baba 

P:outside 

Kamla go & greet them & bring them in...

Ka:raghav kaise hai aap 

R:I'm good Kamla ma 

Pa:aai, where is my book (didn't realise who is here, Sammy staring her,raghav dnt like her) 

R:stp stare she is nt that pretty, she don't even have dressing sense (hitting elbow on his stomach)nt ur type 

S:ouch!!! Bt she is cute, indian beauty 

Ka:payal dekha kon aaye hai 

Pa:kon aai???

Ka:raghav baba,Samar baba & pakhi baby...

P:OMG!!! Payal di, Remeber I'm pakhi (hugging her) 

Pa:haan, how r u, 

S:hi, I'm Samar bt aapno k liye Sammy (move hand toward her)

Pa:hi, I'm payal (shaking hand)

R:hi payal 

Pa:hi raghav, sorry bt I hav to reach my class bye to all

Ka:where is Kalpi

Pa:aai, she is sleeping bye (walking out) 

After sometime Kalpi come out on phone swearing some1 in her night short & singlet, 

K:ullu ka Patha, call kyun nahi ke 

Raghav is staring her from head to top

Ka:Kalpi beta, yeh dekho...

K:I will call u later,haan aai 

R:hi, I'm raghav Singhania, (with smile) 

K:hi I'm kalpana (shaking hand ) 

S:Sammy 

K:hi 

P:I'm pakhi di u Remeber me...

K:haan how r u (hugging her) 

P:I'm good 

Ka:u all talk I will gt u something to eat 

Kalpi & pakhi tlking, raghav staring at her , 

S:stop staring she is nt ur type, so 

R:so??? (Looking at him) 

S:Issa pata,wo bhi ek month, ur time start nw(smiling)

R: are u sure 

S:raghav leave it, chor da she is nt ur type raghav, she is nt bimbo who fall fr u 

R:she will I promise , so miss kalpana wht u do???

K:I'm xxx degrees 

R:wow, any future plans

K:MR Singhaina, ap mujhse shaadi karna aaye hai???

R:no 

K:then y r u asking these,I dnt like hare my personal life (leave frm there, & Sammy & pakhi crack up laughing) 

R:how dare she??? None talk to me in my life..now I want her in my bed ??? (Smirk)

P:how cheap bhai????

R:Paakhi shut ur mouth, let go home (leave frm there) 

------

Raghav keep thinking abt Kalpi, he hate her bt wnt to teach her a lesson to talk to raghav Singhania, he kick suhana out from room & think abt Kalpi, her sexy figure is nt going out of his mind,Sammy entry 

S:wht happend??? 

R:I want her 

S:u kick her out of ur room 

R:nahi, mujhe wo chahiye 

S:who u talking abt 

R:kalpana, I want her 

S:haan, theek hai, sleep now we will talk tomorrow 

R:hmmm,he think of plan to bring her closer...

--------next day

Sammy & raghav stuck in traffic, Kalpi was passing by & sw some kids crying,Kalpi knw those kids meena,Sana & ali 

K:kya hua?? Ro kyu rahi ho ??? 

A:Kalpi di, humhare female singer is nt coming & show must go on!! It's for kids who suffered for cancer, di kuch Karo pls 

M:haan di pls 

S:di u knw I'm suffering from cancer too do it for me pls 

K(in tear):ok, I will sing for u guys, happy now(in mind:I will nt let anything happend 2 Sana)

Kalpi sing & dance on Saturday Saturday

raghav saw her dancing & got angry ,leave the place..reach home & walk toward his room

R:how dare she dancing in pubilc, wo bhi happily (throwing things in room) 

S:raghav wht u doing???

R:I want Kalpi & today I will reach my first step toward my plan (smirk) & go frm there to Kamla ma house...

Ka:raghav baba,aap yeha kuch kaam hai, 

R:why can't I just cme to meet my Kamla ma (looking here & there) ma girls nahi hai 

Ka:Kalpi nahi hai, payal is in room, u sit I will come 

Kalpi entry the house & saw raghav, fake smile walk toward his 

K:hi, how r u

R:I'm good, how r u 

K:I'm super kool 

R:so where u coming frm 

K:I want college, kuch kaam tha??? Aai mr Singhania aa hai (& abt to leave) 

R(hold her hand):raghav

K:sorry 

R:call me raghav 

K:pls leave my hand (raghav leave it )

R:oh, sorry but I'm here to invite u & payal for party 

K:thanks but we have exam so party,aai will nt give permission 

R:u tell u wnt to come, I will talk to Kamla ma 

K:ok, if she give permisson we will come...got to go..bye 

R:bye (smirk) 

------precape:ragna close paper dance, set dance floor on fire

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Posted: 9 years ago
Awesomeness my Dhuki bitiya!
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Posted: 9 years ago
Interesting story concept!! Brilliant updates, so far!! Love the way Raghav is falling for Kalpi. Continue soon 😃
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Ragnaislife

Awesomeness my Dhuki bitiya!

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Posted: 9 years ago
Awesome update. Waiting gir paper dance of RagNa.
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Posted: 9 years ago
Awesome ... Totally loving how desperate rags is.   Like kalpi telling him off. Waiting for prem kalpi rag triangle.    Continue asap
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Posted: 9 years ago
Ok here's my feedback Dhukhi:

CS: it was amazing! Thanks for makin Paakhi Raghav's sister! 😉
Part 1: 🤣 Raghav- shut up and eat your food!
Part 2: I love flirty raghav! 😉Edited by Ragnaislife - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
I like this Kalpi, she is definitely not shy lol
Love the way she spoke to Raghav. He finally has someone who dare to raise their voice on him lol
Oh my!!! Raghav has the hots for Kalpi and that too really bad
Superb update
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Posted: 9 years ago
DEAR FREND,
tq,give me a good story..like it...before this, i follow ur best story "pyar karne ki saza ragna"...
Now, i'm waiting ur next update...but Plez, translate in English too...
Now, i'm learng Hindi language from the book, watchg Bollywood movies but still blur...

tq 4 ur kindness