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Posted: 10 September 2014 at 10:58pm | IP Logged
A one shot which suddenly struck my brain



' Smoking n drinking...injurious 2 health...causes cancer..'
Yoshika tilted her head slightly to throw a glance at d owner of d voice who announced d statutory warning, though she did not hv much interest. And once she had a glimpse,she looked away and went on with her business,,,,with a glass of red wine in one hand and a half burnt cigar between d fingers of d other,,,held in d poise of an expert. She could still feel that d tall figure moved close to her and was right now standing beside her. One of those crazy aimless flirts...the only thought Yoshika Malhotra's brain echoed. ' I wud request u to throw d cigar,,,,you can well continue with ur wine,,,though...' Interference is d thing Yoshika had always hated... ALWAYS!!... ' Do I know u... SIR????'..she turned towards d tall figure who was standing shamelessly close to her...being a complete stranger...and so she decided to emphasise the word SIR! ' Not actually...but that doesn't mean I dont have d right to warn u against things which r bad for u...and d society as well!'... Yoshika was startled at d confidence with which d tall figure threw d words at her,,,as she was unused to such a grace of common flirts before d stony image which she preferred to hang out with... Nevertheless,she was not of d kind to show off her surprise,,,, ' Thank u Sir! I am happy that u r so concerned with d society! But I myself know what's bad for me and how much! And as for d society is concerned, am not smoking n drinking in d grounds of a school! And am not used to getting instructions at a place I hv been visiting for so long,,,,,,,,,' CONTROL Yoshika!! She cud hear her brain shout! My godd! Why did she react so much? She was at a loss...and what added to her confusion...was a smile...an achingly irritating smile of d tall figure right before her...as if whatever she burst out shouting had 0 impact on d other person...standing inappropriately calm...though looking straight into her eyes... Yoshika looked away... She was jumbled up suddenly...
' Never mind ma'am! I appreciate that u know ur limits! N m no one to instruct u what to do n what not! Its just that I do not want ppl like u to die so easily... The society needs u! Wine...added to cigar... If u r so tired of life...why dont u hang urself? The society will mourne though... But that doesn't concern u...does it... Ms Yoshika Malhotra?'... What????? Did she just hear what he uttered? He said something long...but what concerned her more was...he knew her name!! How???!!! But before she cud clear any of her doubts..d awkward stranger disappeared in d crowd... And Yoshika stood with a pair of wide eyes...a glass of wine in one hand and a cigar on d verge of hurting her fingers...in a posture as if she had just seen a GHOST...!!


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Posted: 11 September 2014 at 1:13am | IP Logged
Nice OS dear loved reading it kaushi Thumbs Up

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Posted: 11 September 2014 at 1:26am | IP Logged
Thanks!

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Posted: 11 September 2014 at 2:03am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Kaushitaki

Thanks!
welcome Smile

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Posted: 11 September 2014 at 2:04am | IP Logged
Finally read.
Love it.

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Posted: 11 September 2014 at 2:15am | IP Logged
Thanks!

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Loved it.

Edited by beautiful_heart - 12 September 2014 at 12:59am

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Thank u beautiful heart! M so glad that u read!

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