The beast & his belle | ArHi OS - Page 8 | Iss Pyaar Ko Kya Naam Doon

AngelTeen

@AngelTeen

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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: ...Doctor...
Reading something by you after so long :') Missed it so much!
You are so good at playing with words, you know that right? I don't know how to say it! I mean look at the first few lines of this OS, sheer perfection. Such beautiful words weaved into a perfect story. This is so short yet so deep. It took you 536 words to explain Arnav's mental and physical state without her, only 536 words.

I loved it.

Keep writing!

P.S.- Write a book! You're way better than some of the 'most popular' Indian writers. You know what I mean, right?

Reading your feedback on something I have written after so long! Missed it so much! :D

Thank You so much for your kind words and all the encouragment! <3

And about the PS, Lol! Lets see... :p

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sadhnasoumya

@sadhnasoumya

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Posted: 9 years ago

Very emotional
But khushi is no more :(

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AngelTeen

@AngelTeen

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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: sadhnasoumya
Very emotional
But khushi is no more :(

Uhhh...Khushi is alive, just not with Arnav...

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Nivriti

@agreatperhaps

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Posted: 8 years ago

Beautiful. I loved the way it flowed. Arnav is a flawed man, and you explained his predicament perfectly. Amazing. I adore your writing style.

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scrapbooker

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Posted: 8 years ago

That is a sad one. As much as Arnav deserved such and end,,, I guess I still wish a happy ending for them. Awww man this was a sad one.

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AngelTeen

@AngelTeen

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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: scrapbooker
That is a sad one. As much as Arnav deserved such and end,,, I guess I still wish a happy ending for them. Awww man this was a sad one.

That was I think what all of us always wish for even though we know Arnav deserves a bit of a bashing but then again, they are in love with each other and we are in love with them! :)

You may like to read a sister OS of sorts to this one - Hers

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