Originally posted by: babita68Hope you have read my comment for the first chapter at page 4 ---- last comment 😳
Very nice and nervous progress 😆 I was like in a shock to see Ashu like this ☺️ 😲 🤪The servants are given a fab job here. 😛 The Sasurji is going to take Ashu in hands now. What should we say ------- Poor Ashu or poor Radhika 😉Will wait for more.
Originally posted by: VidishaaHi friends...though I promised you a casanova FF, I am unable to write it. Instead, I am writing a short story...I loved a serial called Hasratein...and hence gave this FF it's name...Though this SS won't be a patch on it
Ahutosh isn't a Mathur here...he is Tripathi( Like Hasratein's KT)
Nidhi's entry thodi late hogi
Both Ashu and Nidhi are grey
Both Ashu and Nidhi ( I mean heroine) were grey in Hasratein??😲
Some other woman will be a pragon of virtues
So people who don't like Nidhi being anything other than a virtuous woman please excuse me...I have no intention to hurt you...you can miss this SS...it is not a great piece of fiction anyway.
Come on... we love to experiment and see variations...🤗
The chapters will be short...as I can't write long paragraphs...I will be short even by Mudraji's standards😉
Ha... Iam glad to see someone thanking me for this😆😆😆
Lallan Trivedi reclined on his chair and talked to his aide Pandey
"Pandeyji...Mujhe advocate Tripathi ke bete ke bare mein details chahiye...sab kuch pata kijiye... par jaldi"
Inka koi beti hai kya?😕😳
Originally posted by: mudraswathiPart-1
Ha... glimpse of Ashutosh in his element..😆.. he knows he is the show stopper...nice nice😆😆
I am curios about this...Lallan Trivedi reclined on his chair and talked to his aide Pandey
"Pandeyji...Mujhe advocate Tripathi ke bete ke bare mein details chahiye...sab kuch pata kijiye... par jaldi"
Inka koi beti hai kya?😕😳
Originally posted by: rajanigandha26Vidisha what are you writing. Read chap 1 . will read 2 now. Vidisha ki hasraten. I used to like that show and cast too.👍🏼
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