Rishabala FF- Sajda Tere Pyaar Mein Discontinued (note on pg 24) - Page 7

Posted: 9 years ago

Awesome start
sounds intresting both my fav couple arshi and rishabala
thanx for pm :)
keep writing
Posted: 9 years ago
Originally posted by -ChitraRocking-


awesome update dear πŸ‘πŸΌ

thanks dear...😊
Posted: 9 years ago
Originally posted by AzraZaidi



Awesome start
sounds intresting both my fav couple arshi and rishabala
thanx for pm :)
keep writing

thanks..😊
Posted: 9 years ago
Originally posted by noiseygirl


nyc update waiting 4 next

thanks dear...😊
Posted: 9 years ago
Congrats for the new story
Read both the parts and they are superb! Keep it up dear!
Posted: 9 years ago
Originally posted by sufidox


Nice update.
Continue Soon 

thanks dear...😊
Posted: 9 years ago
Originally posted by kg15


Congrats for the new story
Read both the parts and they are superb! Keep it up dear!

thanks...😊
Posted: 9 years ago
hi friends...so here goes the next chapter...i hope u all enjoyed the previous one..
                        
                                                        
         
thank u for supporting me...  
               
                            
          In the evening at the malik's place...
                             all the guests started arriving. Madhu and Khushi are with deepali tesing her.
Madhu: Offo Di u are so hot today. Agar Sikki jiju dekhenghe na to unki bolti band ho jaegi..
Deepali: Madhu leave it na..
Khushi: Kun di Sharmaagai app β˜ΊοΈ
        Padmini comes to deepali room and says
Padmini: Tum log abhi tak tyaar nhi huye.. niche sab log aana shuru kar diya hai..
Madhu: bas maa abhi aaye.. didi tyaar ho gayi.. bas hume tayar hona hai..
Padmini: acha tek hai jaldi karo ladke vale aane vale hai..sab logom ka dyann rakna.. tek hai
Madhu and Khushi: Haan maa.
 they went to their room... afterall their waiting is comming to an end...

In the hall:
Padmini: Aayiye Aayie samdan ji. Namaste.
Radha: Namaste padmini ji. Tyari bahut achi hai. 
Padmini: ji chaliye. Madhu beta zara yaha aaoo.
Madhu: aayi ma.
     Madhu was comming from stairs in this attire looking breath taking.
                          Rishab was starring at her.. as if she has taken his breath away..
Rishab too looking handsome as ever..
Rishab's attire:   


madhu came staring at rishab as if he too had taken her breath away...
Madhu: Haan Maa.
Padmini: Inhe zara andha le jaaoo
Madhu: ji. aaiye na aunty..
 they all came inside and rishab followed madhu... Madhu noticed and said to herself "Madhu 
nervous mat ho..usse pta nhi chalna chayike tum nervous ho aur tujhe uske hone se farak nhi padta u have to do it..."
Rishab: Hi Madhu.
Madhu: hello ji.
Rishab: ye ji ji kya laga rakha hai..
Madhu : To kya bolu Mr. Kundra.
Rishab: ni ji hi tek hai.
Madhu: aur kuch.
Rishab: nhi..haan mujhe tumse kuch baat karna hai..
Madhu: haa bolo..
    Rishab looking into her eyes started moving towards madhu.. and madhu kept moving backword...Madhu hit the wall..now she was between wall and Rishab
Madhu: Rishu..
Rishab: Haan rishu... kuch der phele kya bulayata..
Madhu: woo..woo.
Rishab leaned towards her and wishpered..
Rishab:tum aaj bahut khubsoorat lag rahi ho...
Madhu was stunned at what he said...she was looking into her eyes that always held hers captured..Rishab winks at her leaves...πŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰
      Here arnav was looking for Khushi... there she was taking to his mom...
Arnav's attire:
Khushi's attire:
    
 
Arnav: hi khushi...
Khushi: Chali jaao mujhe tumse koi baat nhi karna...
Arnav: Kyun...
Khushi: Bano mat... Main tumse abhi bhi gussa hoon...
Arnav: Acha tek hai baat mat karo..
Khushi: Tek hai.. to main jaa rahi hoon
Arnav; haam jaoo
   Khushi left from there...
Arnav: Rishu ye sab tumhari vajah se hua hai..ye sab karne ki kya jaroorat hai..
main teri khabar bad mein lethi hoon.
    All the guests came and sangeet is on full swing... Rishab came on to the stage took mike and started saying...
Rishab: Hello Ladies and gentlemen. Lets start the sangeet programe... har sangeet mein naach gana to hota rehta hai to kyun na hum kuch alag kar de... Kyun bhai aur premikhyom...
all chered rishab.. Arnav came on to the stage and said sorry the old men and women.. this is only going to be for the younger one... so lets get ready...
Khushi: Rishab tere bhai hua kya hai... karna kya hai ye to bataya nhi aur shuru karne ki baat kar rahe hai...
Arnav: Khushi jo bhi hai mujhse baat kar.. and sry bhaiyom n premikhayom lets play shayari game.. shayari to old man and women aap log yun kehte hai lekin hum jaise log kaha keh sakte hai... so shall we start...
Rishab: Well hum two teams mein divide honghe.. boys and girls... ismein dhulha dulhan bhi shamil hai... phele kisi ko start karna hai aur agar jo bech mein rok dethe hai to vo haar jayegha...kk then aur bhi hatke programes bhi hai.. soo lets start today's eve with shayari...

Madhu, Khushi, Deepali, Purvi, Trishna, and some other girls and Rishab, Arnav, Sikky, Arjun and some other boys sat opposite to start the shayari contest...

Rishab: to koun first start karegha.. Rishab took a coin asked girls head or tails..
Madhu: Heads..
Rishab: ok.. Rishab tossed the coin and it came as heads.. " so girls start,,.."
Khushi: Phele main start karthi hoon...
                            Dil ki gahraiyom mein rakte hai aapko
                            har dam palkon par bitae rakthe hai aapko
                            dil dhadhakta hai to suno gaur se
                             har dhadkan ke saath yaad karthe hai apko
Arnav: ab humari baari. arnav knows that she said this for him...
                                  Haste dilom me kabhi ghum bhi hai
                                  Muskurathi aankhe kabhi nam bhi hai
 Dua karthe hai aapki hasi kabhi na rukhe 
kyun ki aapki muskurahat ke deewane hum bhi hai...
Rishab: waa Arnav tu aur shyayari waa..
Khushi: di aap bataoo na...
Deepali: Unki har shaam suhaani nahi hoti ,
              har chahaht ke peche koi kahaani nahi hoti,
              kuch to asar hai pyaar mein ,
              warna gori radha sawle syaam ki deewani nhi hoti...
Rishab: wah baabhi...
Sikky: ab main kahungha...   Khudha ne jab tujhe banaya hoga,
  ek suroor se banaya hoga..
socha hoga kya doonga  tofe mein tujhe 
tab ja ke usne mujhe banaya hogaa...
Shayari contest continues...πŸ˜‰

Precap: All couples dance, masti, nok jhok...πŸ˜‰πŸ˜†

 Rishabala and Arshi Know each other... how they knew each other will say in the upcomming updates...

soo how is attempt of wiriting..
hope u all like it...πŸ˜ŠπŸ˜‰ 
if there are any suggestions... u are welcome...😊

Posted: 9 years ago
hey gal..was waitign for ur update..woww...Rishabala...and Arshi...woww.
But i need lil lengthier one...eh bohath short hai baba..

anyways..keep it up..ur going good
Posted: 9 years ago
Nice update. It has made me more curious. continue soon😊


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