Teri Umeed Tera Intezaar Karte Hai, (5), COMPLETED - Page 6

Amazing n lovely part..romance was simply wow but geets twist in story wsd funny. ...

can't wait ti c whats next...maan n sham...lol

Congrats on new thread and i will go with option B to your note.

Ab bhooka sher aise dhaadey ga ke Geet ki Mumbaiker-giri dhari ki dhari reh jaayegi 😆

Congratulations on the new thread! 16 chapters in 4 threads, so approximately 4 chapters in 1. That would make almost 4 more threads to come. Yayy! 😃

Loved this update, Avi! Especially the "abhi toh kissing ho rahi thi phir ghussa kyun" 😆

As for the options you have given, my vote will go to what is better for the story, that is, the way you wish to tell it. If you think the story in your mind will take fifteen to twenty more chapters, write them. If you think you can tell the story better in fewer chapters, it'll be your choice and your decision. So yes, tell it the way you have thought and not the way it is expected or wished for by the readers.

You also are affected by our Maaneet's naughtiness
leaving us in a lurch dreaming
never mind
waiting for the next
😉😉  Edited by maansi25 - 9 years ago

Originally posted by: nibi_suchi

luved it !!! stopped at wrong time will be waiting for msk reaction but really not getting the story as have missed part 14 n 15 pls provide the password...anyone else who have password pls can u share it only these 2 parts !!!!

hi dear! Option 2! Thanks 4 da pm n rocking fab update! Superbly written! Geet's self talk was hilarious! Maan cannot control n wants to continue! Geet is so innocent! Poor Maan! Stuck with Shyamlal! update soon

Thanks for t update
Really chotu part


Geets reaction earlier to kisses seemed quite out of character first
& now looked rt


But again can't stop myself from indulgence
Geet in Mumbai was able to put distance between herself & flirty maan
Oh she fell head over heal for him

& he waiting pampering her all t while
She all t while maintained her distance
Even he did


But now this maan is more demanding & she is a lot more attracted to him
More over nothing stopping her like subconsciously
Her studies earlier

As of now her subconscious is all his
& conscious has no logical reason to hold back from t hOT shot boss
Which doesn't sound logical at all to her
Geet tu gayi 😆

Hence her reaction u have portrayed is beautiful

Wat she feels for him is not right she knows but she doesn't know why

I so want to read maans POV
Of this chapter plz

Originally posted by: muskanp

Thanks for t update
Really chotu part


Geets reaction earlier to kisses seemed quite out of character first
& now looked rt


But again can't stop myself from indulgence
Geet in Mumbai was able to put distance between herself & flirty maan
Oh she fell head over heal for him

& he waiting pampering her all t while
She all t while maintained her distance
Even he did


But now this maan is more demanding & she is a lot more attracted to him
More over nothing stopping her like subconsciously
Her studies earlier

As of now her subconscious is all his
& conscious has no logical reason to hold back from t hOT shot boss
Which doesn't sound logical at all to her
Geet tu gayi 😆

Hence her reaction u have portrayed is beautiful

Wat she feels for him is not right she knows but she doesn't know why

I so want to read maans POV
Of this chapter plz

geet and her self talks...gud bangaya karela...ha ha
abhi abhi kiss kar raha tha ab glaring ha ha darbadloo...
she is amazing yaar...
maan was on roll to kiss her...geet tricked him and locked him in his office room with shyamlal...ye kya hogaya poor shyamlal bachega king khan khurana se ya nahi...what will maan do with geet after he comes out from the room...
garlic wala idea kaam karegi dekhna padega...
eagerly waiting for the next part
continue soon...