Posted: 9 years ago
This poem described akshara's feeling when naitik was about to came to meet her and what she feels after him
here is the poem...

Holi aayi bhai holi aayi
Aj usse milne ki din aayi
Man to hai mera bahut ghabraya
Phir bhi hai mujhe usse milna
Jab usne di darwaje pe dastak
Tab dil me hui dhak dhak
Jab samay aayi unse milne ki
Tab hai maine chuppi sadhi
Kuch samajh na aaya main kya kahu
Main to bas ho gayi piya bawri

how's this.. pls share ur viewsEdited by Pragati-naksh - 9 years ago
Posted: 9 years ago
Lovely poem 😊
you are a great writer
please write more..it's very nice
Posted: 9 years ago
Very nice poem.. akshi's feeling was beautifully described
Posted: 9 years ago
awesome poem
keep it up πŸ‘πŸΌ
do write more
Posted: 9 years ago
Originally posted by Ritu-


Wow...it was awesome πŸ‘
Thanks
Posted: 9 years ago
Originally posted by SONAMB404


Lovely poem 😊
you are a great writer
please write more..it's very nice
m not a great writer.. its only naksh who encourage me to write more
Posted: 9 years ago
it was awesomeπŸ‘πŸ‘...do write more...πŸ˜ƒ
Posted: 9 years ago
Originally posted by naKsHolic


awesome poem
keep it up πŸ‘πŸΌ
do write more
Thanks.. sure soon posted new poems
Posted: 9 years ago
Originally posted by nivedha_123


it was awesomeπŸ‘πŸ‘...do write more...πŸ˜ƒ
Ya sure.. write more poems
Posted: 9 years ago
Originally posted by anjali-naksh


Very nice poem.. akshi's feeling was beautifully described
Thanks dear

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