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Posted: 21 August 2014 at 7:09pm | IP Logged
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Posted: 21 August 2014 at 9:34pm | IP Logged
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Before I read part 3, will comment for part 1&2

soulful work! i loved this so much! Heart
Devpriya is Clap The way she made her live in the midst of all dirty darkness, her attitude, her way of accepting life.. she is a true heroine in every sense!!! 
The questions she asked God, they way she decided to make her heart stone, how she decided to make her life better than worse by wooing the Pradhan Purohit! And all the while the weeping heart in her get crushed! She is bold, feisty, brave! I can go on and on about her! 

Pushpanjali is another character whom I liked! Embarrassed She somewhere reminds me of kanakalashmi, the motherly love and her caring attitude towards Devpriya! 

When I read of Pradhan Purohit's death, can't express how much happy I was! 

and when i read about the new Pradhan purohit, I felt he was like a ray of hope, a ray of light to all the Devdasis who are living in utter darkness with no hope!!! 

New pradhan Purohit's attitude towards the whole thing, his behaviour towards the devdasis!!! Second part of the OS was very soothing to read! 
The way Devpriya was shocked to find how different the new pradhan purohit is and the way she got lost in him! How she fancied of the day when she will become the Pradhan Devdasi and sudden embarrassment with which she closes her eyes! 

You have written it so beautifully that I could visualise the whole thing! Really soulful piece of writing!!!

PS: will read part 3 n comment soon! 


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panchali eagerly waiting for next part!

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Wow Di ! Oshadharon. Aagerta Chhilo Simple, And This One Has Shades !! Very Brilliant !! Taratari Porerta Likhe Phele Amake PM Koro ! Please !

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Posted: 22 August 2014 at 9:59am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Radhikerani

Wow Di ! Oshadharon. Aagerta Chhilo Simple, And This One Has Shades !! Very Brilliant !! Taratari Porerta Likhe Phele Amake PM Koro ! Please !

Thank you Niamvari Radha, I mean Proteeti Hug 

will post the next update soon Smile


and of course PM you Big smile




Edited by panchaali - 22 August 2014 at 10:00am

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