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Sandhir FF : Falling In Love With You (Part 14 Updated Page 58)

priya2701 Senior Member

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Posted: 21 August 2014 at 4:13am | IP Logged
Intro of d writer

Hey Peeps,
This one is my frst FF n my first story ever in life...
Am very nervous dun weather u all wil lyk it or not...
if u dun lyk it plzzz tell me.. criticism is alwys welcome..
Also tell me weather i shud cntinue or not...
n in case if u lyk it buddy me for pms :')
ok lets not bore u ne more lets start d story

<font size="5" face="Courier New, Courier, mono">SANDHIR FF :- FALLING IN LOVE WITH YOU
<font size="2">Prologue</font>

Sir we have to go inside its a matter of 250 innocent children .. We can't let them die.. Sir please allow us!! said a young lady officer.

Yes sir she is right! we have to go inside, we can't wait nemore!! said another young male officer.

We can't Officers.. I know its been really long we have been waiting.. n we shud go inside now... bt wat cn i do we dont have higher autority's order till now.. !! said d commandng officer incharge

But the two young officer were too much impatient to wait ne longer..
it had been 2 days now dey were waiting ourside The St. Mary Orphanage.. where 250 children are house arrested by 5 terrorist.. n deir demand is to amke deir head release frm d Indian jail or Else dey wud kill dese children.. Indian Govt. n Concerned Offixers were discussing over dis mattr from two days Dat dey dint gave ne order for ne action.. although A huge force of army officers were surrounding d orphange bt dey were nt taking ne riak n was waiting for deir authprities order..

But d comnding officer inchrge knew dey cnt wait ne longer n children r suffering alot wthout ne food n water.. n his team of young officers were dere to support him n was ready to attck.. hence d cmnding officer along with his 5 officer .. enter d orphange from backyards ..

n wen dey entered d orphanage dere was a BLASTTT!!!! outside d orphanage !!!![
Who were dose officers??? what Happend next ?? to know plzz cmnt if u wnt me to cntinue.. :)

<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" color="#ff0000" size="5">
<font size="2">Prologue: Pg1
Part1: pg 1
Part2: pg3
Part3 : pg 4
Part 4A : pg 6
Part 4B : pg 7
Part 5A : pg 10
Part 5B : pg 13
Part 6: pg 16
Part 7:- pg 20
Part 8 : pg 23
Part 9 :- page 29
Part 10 A:- Page 31
Part 10 B:- Page 34
Part 11:- Page 40
Part 12 A:- page 42
Part 12 B:- Page 47

[DIV]Part 13 :- Page 54
Part 14:- Page 58

Edited by priya2701 - 07 November 2014 at 12:58am

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prushasil Senior Member

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Posted: 21 August 2014 at 4:20am | IP Logged
nice prologue! please do continue! i would be waiting!Smile

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priya2701 Senior Member

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Posted: 21 August 2014 at 4:24am | IP Logged
Originally posted by prushasil

<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="3" color="#003366">nice prologue! please do continue! i would be waiting!Smile</font>

Thank uh so much... ur reviews means a lot :)
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vidhichaudhury Senior Member

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Posted: 21 August 2014 at 5:00am | IP Logged
nice prologue. update soon

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priya2701 Senior Member

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Posted: 21 August 2014 at 8:25am | IP Logged
thank uh so much guys dis means a lot...
priya2701 Senior Member

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Posted: 21 August 2014 at 1:20pm | IP Logged
thanks guys for ur support.. i know i hv a huge way to go.. i will wait for ur lyks.. :') neways lets cntinue d stry..


They entered the Orphanage from backyard at d same tym there was a BLASTT!! outside d building...

Then they heard one of the terrorist saying on d mike to forces gathered outside the orphanage..
terrorist 1 : its been 2 days now.. we r giving uh 5 hrs more to decide weather uh want these children alive and give our boss back or uh want to keep our boss wth u n along wth dat u want deses children dead..

This was it to make the senior officers more worried. hence as a result govt. decided to release d boss terrorist to save d children..

But here inside d orphanage. Those six officers had diff. planss.

The head commanding officer ordered his team mates to form a group of two members each.
Head officer:- Captain Randhir singh sekhawat (the young male officer) and Captain Jiginesh Patel u go to the top floor..
Captain Sanyukta Agarwal and Captain Ankit u guys go To 2nd floor..

And Major Vardhan u come wth me to d 1st floor...
And Guys be careful want all my officers back safely.

All the 5 people followed his instructions and did what he said.

Yhe orphanage building was very big.. it had 3 floors and each floor had 12 rooms..

1st Floor
Vardhan : Major Armaan Mallik (the head commanding officer) i think dey r in dat room.. reffering to d room frm whr lil. noise cud be heard..
Armaan:- ok be carefull! we have to fire carefully. No children shud get hurt.
slowly dey strted towrd d room n stood beside d closed door..
arman entered frst n directly shot d guy who was stndng before hm... u cn say it was luck dat only one terrorist was dere... n d room cntained around 50 children.. arman made dem quite and assured dem dey wud be freed soon . but soon dey got a big shock... 5 children dere were made wore time bombs which was suppose to get blast aftr 5 hrs...

Floor 2

Sanyu and Ankit were moving towards a room from where d announcement was made by d terrorist.. but suddenly dey heard some one shouting at dem from behind..

terrorist 2 : Drop ur guns and Hands Up! or else I will shoot u guys !

For a moment ankit felt everythng is finished now. but at d same tym sanyu pushed Ankit on opposite side to a room which was emptu so dat ankit cud hide him self behind d door.. and sanyu herslf hide behind a wooden almirah which was just outside d room in which dey were suppose to enter.. so suddenly sanyu did all d things dat d terrorist was amazed n cud nt do nethng till den.. n he strtd firing towrds sanyu... aftr hearing so much sound d othr terrorist on d same floor came out of d room beside sanyu.. n he was abt to shoot sanyu bt ankit ahot him from oppost side.. d othr terrorist was abt to infrm his team members abt deir arrival bt befr dat sanyu shot him to death..

den sanyu n ankit entered d room n saw around 100 children were dere n 10 children here also was mase wore time bombs with same tym intrval...

3rd floor

here randhir was beating a terrorist whom he just caught in a room whr he was monitrng all d activities takng place... randhir was determined to keep him alive so dat dey can get info frm him regardng his all missions...
bt suddenly some one shot Randhir from behind...

to be continued...

for PM send buddy req... :)

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sudi_4m_kol IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 21 August 2014 at 1:27pm | IP Logged
nyc story n nyc start ...
loved it ...

well done dr :)

update soon :) 

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