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aatif_bilal Goldie
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Posted: 25 September 2006 at 2:51pm | IP Logged

part 15

recap:they go to beach

ON BEACH

K:sujal kitna maza aaraha ha

S:haa mujhe to buhat maza aa rahe ha poocho kyu

K:kyu???

S:who dekho kitne sare larkiya hain,,,, ab tum hii batao

mujhe maza nahi aie ga

K:yaha per bhi chalo aabhi ke abhi yaha se chalte hain

S:ese keise chale ??

K:nahi bus chalo

S:ok me ab nahi kahoga ok

K:ok thats like a good boy

S:yes :)

K:ok ab chalo na

S:ok aacha ice creeem khao ge

K:haaa

S:wait

K:ok but jaldi ana

S:haaa haaa

K:ok

 

& AFTER SUJAL COME

 

K:aa gaie

S:haa ab khao warna bigaljaie ge

K:ok

S:aacha ab khao phir hum pani me chalege

K:wwoww ok

S:mene to ice creeem khatam kerde & tum ne kii

K:haa me bus karne wale hoo

S:ok jaldi karoo 6 baje ghar chalne ha

K:ok ab kitne baj rahe ha ?

S:5:30

K:what!!!!!

S:haaa jaldi karoo

K:ok ok

 

 

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

K:ok me en bhi khatam ker de ab jaldi chalo

S:haa bago bago

& who bagte bagte pani me jate ha

& Kashish chilate ha

S:kiya huia??

K:fish

S:is se darte hoon

K:haaaa

S:to nahi daro na

K:kyu ??

S:kyu ki tum sujal ki patni hoo

K:aacha to tum mujhe sikhao ge ke me kis ki patni hoo

thahro me tum ko batate hoon

 

& KASHISH US KO DIQA DETE HA TO SUJAL PANI ME GIR JATA HA

& WHO PANI SE NAHI NIKALTA HA TO KASHISH ROTE HA

 

 

PART 15 END

HOPE U LIKE ITSmile

 

Rajeev_gr8 IF-Dazzler
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Posted: 26 September 2006 at 1:57am | IP Logged
great mona Smile keep it up Smile
MysticRiver IF-Stunnerz
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Posted: 26 September 2006 at 11:41pm | IP Logged
very nice mona... Clap
ambarinaaltaf IF-Rockerz
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Posted: 27 September 2006 at 4:53am | IP Logged
Originally posted by mona_wasu

Originally posted by ambarinaaltaf

yaar font decrease karoo naa plzz..its difficult to read..plus pg is not lukin goodd ....plzzzzzzzz Cry Cry Cry

I think now the pg is ok

isnit?

yeh good will comment on ur storyy soon..Embarrassed

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Posted: 06 October 2006 at 8:56am | IP Logged

Originally posted by sun_423

very nice mona... Clap

thankx

aatif_bilal Goldie
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Posted: 06 October 2006 at 8:55am | IP Logged

Originally posted by Rajeev_gr8

great mona Smile keep it up Smile

thankx

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Posted: 07 October 2006 at 2:02am | IP Logged
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