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SwaRon FF- KiSmAt CoNnEcTiOn #2 LastChap-57, Pg 62. (16Oct'14) updtd. (Page 15)

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Posted: 28 August 2014 at 11:29am | IP Logged
OMG di it was amazing updateClap
swaron in manaliBig smile
n their love making sessionEmbarrassed
it was damm hotBlushing
n dii u penned down it very beautifullySmile
update d next part soonSmile

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Posted: 28 August 2014 at 2:25pm | IP Logged
Sweet update :)

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Posted: 28 August 2014 at 5:54pm | IP Logged
Wow awesome romantic passionate
All in one update
Thanks for the pm
Do update next chapter soon

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Posted: 28 August 2014 at 8:17pm | IP Logged
awesome update

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Posted: 29 August 2014 at 12:01am | IP Logged
fantastic chapter!!!!!
it was super romantic!!
loved it!!!
thanks for the pm.

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Posted: 29 August 2014 at 2:19am | IP Logged
edited ma comment

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Posted: 29 August 2014 at 9:32am | IP Logged
Hey Shakshi,


Finally i am commenting here from long time so i am resuming my read from holi track,Whole swaron moments were trully flawless and u wrote so well..Sharon side confession was funny as swayam slept but in between the romance was blissful,perfectly written for this beautiful Duo. in total loved the update..In next update,loved the way u described whole marriage sequence adding some extraordinary writing spices of romance..The whole marriage virtues n rituals were beautifully written n they were also true in sense..No facts, u are a perfect narrator..in between the league i like ur writing to write some emotional moments between sharon n renuka..And manvi was adding here some extra volts to the story..loved it..After that in next part,the conversation was amazing in terms of required need..I loved the way, swayam made sharon so comfortable after marriage..This duo understanding was apt..literally..

Now the extraordinary chapter is here,Finally sharon confession..The wait was worth it truly..Here ur writing n ur efforts are commendable dear..Loved the way u added all the possible flavours to make a unique confession ever in terms of Sharon..The song,background stuffs,their dance,their intense kiss,their final confession all of them was perfect and loved this creative idea from ur mind..In total loved this update to the core..Now the next update was good to read some small romantic scenes of swaron,specially the kitchen one..and also loved the academy moments..After that pani puri sequence was romantic yet enjoyable to read..Sara is such a cute character,i loved to read her cute dialouges n her sweet interpretation between sam n shari..In total loved the update..

Now for the chap 46,I have to reserved as the update is trully intense n passionate..So obviously i will need exclusive time to read..So i'll be back soon..

And yes,u are working hard,ur efforts are commendable dear to write each n every sequence and to make readers fall for ur story..In such a inactive span of time,i only following ur story by heart..So just keep it up the way u are and keep updating if time permits u..














Thanx for ur all PM n Scraps..keep continue















Prateek

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Posted: 29 August 2014 at 10:31am | IP Logged

Very passionate update...I'm actually speechless after reading this chapter...I mean how the hell can you manage to write so magnificently? Seriously ya I can't gather any words...So please don't blame me if my comment is too short :P it's your fault that your writing skills are so brilliant which makes the reader fall short of words...Firstly the first half of the update was damn hot...I was blushing throughout the section Blushing And later their conversation was way too cute... the way he was teasing her about that honey moon thingy & all...Mind blowing yaar...So All in all incredible update...It was exceptionally beautiful...Please update the next chapter soon...HURRY!! Embarrassed



Edited by TanHa_VruShan - 29 August 2014 at 10:36am

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