Posted: 9 years ago
This is the first time i wrote something for naksh so thought to share it... it is my imagination and feeling to naksh.. read these line and enjoy it... bear up my imagination
here is the few lines for our cutest couple naksh..

Naksh ko dekh kar khushi milti hai
Naksh ko dekh kar jindagi milti hai
Naksh na ho to jindagi berang lagati hai
Naksh ho to berang jindagi bhi khoobsurat lagti hai
Naksh ko dekh kar khoobsurat se rishte ki ehsaas hoti hai
Naksh ko dekh kar apnepan ki yaad aati hai
Naksh ko dekh kar khushi milti hai
Naksh ko dekh kar jindagi milti hai

so how's this.. pls wrote what is good and what is bad in this
pls give ur feedbacks..
Posted: 9 years ago
nice poem..
loved this line naksh ko dekh ke jindagi milti hai
Posted: 9 years ago
Originally posted by anjali-naksh


nice poem..
loved this line naksh ko dekh ke jindagi milti hai
Thanks
Posted: 9 years ago
nice poem😊
Naksh ko dekh kar apnepan ki yaad aati hai good line
Posted: 9 years ago
Originally posted by saumya77


lovely poem...
Thanks
Posted: 9 years ago
Originally posted by 786.khan


NICE POST
thank u
Posted: 9 years ago
Originally posted by Mini2013


nice poem😊
Naksh ko dekh kar apnepan ki yaad aati hai good line
Thanks for liking my poem.. this line is also close to my heart
Posted: 9 years ago
Originally posted by SONAMB404


superbb poem
Thanks 4 commenting
Posted: 9 years ago
Originally posted by Pragati-naksh


Thanks 4 commenting
please write more 😊
Posted: 9 years ago
Originally posted by SONAMB404


please write more 😊
OK.. will try to write more

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