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 Yoddha
The unknown warrior


 



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Posted: 9 years ago


Maan

hi  i am maan singh khurana 
son of veer sing khurana
who never  like robbery thief ect


today i am big dacott / daku
of this area and i proud of on that
if living with self respect is wrong than
i am wrong
if i rob that rich people who all ready
to drink  poor blood  is wrong
than i am wrong


my father live for  this village
and i become robber for this village people only
an i proud on that


but in all this l lost ...
a beutiful pair of eyes in come front of him



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Index

part 1




https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/4119929


part 2

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/4119929?pn=8

part 3,4

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/4119929?pn=15

Note
https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/4119929?pn=19

teaser
https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/4119929?pn=28

part  5,6

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/4119929?pn=33

part 7



part    8 



9-10





part 11

 

part  12       

 
part  13
 
 
part   14----95
 
part  15-----105
 
part  16-----108
 
part 17-----112
 
part  18 -------118

part  19   -----128

 
part 20  ------134
 
part  21  ...139
 
part 22-------142
 
part 23-------148
 
part 24
 

 


 
Edited by Mahimaan - 8 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
maan family


 maan  father  -Veer singh khurana
age 30



rough and tough man never fear about
anything , always ready to help
anyone , his body injury marks tale
story of his bravery

save mukhiya girl from lion
but so self respected person
just say no for reward to sve that
girl his self respect is life  for him


Edited by Mahimaan - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
My writing
My page
Dream come true with maaneet  thread 1

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/3857084

my complete story

Life of geet  ( complete )

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/3632879

Journey of maaneet arrange marriage
( complete )
https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/3826436

 Adoore Sapane

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/3854841

 
second thread of Adoore sapane  (complete )

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/105983789


ss Dhadkan do dilo ki
( complete )
 https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/3865415

Epilogue of Dhadkan do dilo ki (complete)

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/3974738


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my os

os  JAB WE MET
( complete )

Os Happy women day?

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/3942891


Mg os Marriage of soldier ( complete )

 

MG os Baate kuch unkahi si
( complete )
https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/107321287



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ongoing  ff

Journey ... Season two
https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/3921883

New story
Fate of the unfortunate

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/3952132

thread  2
https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/105285600

thread 3

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/4019591


os on fate Family drama od Fate family

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/4087378


MG ff Uljhe Rishtey----kahanni ek unkhili kali ki

thread 1


https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/4020200


thread 2

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/4082110


Time pass  teen age love story of maaneet  new ff

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/4048465



Yodha The unknown Warrior

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/4119929



Fight   for justice conquering Truth 



https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/4102273
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my other post

happy republic day
https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/3897661

i will not vote in Nach

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/3804079


How many time we have to hurt myself as GEET fan ?


https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/3987824


please don't hurt yourself as fan of maaneet


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Year 1852

a small village of  India  , there is darkness everywhere just sleep like dead person , but one person lost his  sleep is  mukhiya of village , have so much rich so much property  but sad really sad  they lost chance arrange goddess  fair from last 10 year , because there neighbor village man just took snatch this right from him  from their village



he is so irritated that no one is so VEER in his village who bought that right back , just than he hard noise in front of door he just called , who is there

 

sarkaare  hum hain  veer singh khurana

 

mukhiya - come in veer singh

 

 

veer - ji sarkar  and he entered in haveli he just make namste and say , don't sleep till now

 

Mukhiya - kitane dino se soye hi hai veer

 

veer - kuch hua  hai kya sarkar app intene pareshhan

 

mukhiya -  i feel very sad , our village lost its  shaan veer

 

veer - means

 

mukhiya - without fair it lost his shaan veer , look that other village they arranging 2 fair in year and we ...

 

veer - kya kar sakate hai

 

 

mukhiya - you are right when we don't have any brave man all are just ...naam ke man

 

veer - why you say like that , you yourself is brave person

 

 

mukhiya ,ha age 55 year brave person , you know 10 year before that  villager man just come  in  fair alone took that coconut  in front of all villager and  just take that with him , he get so many injury in that but he won and now fair of goddess just went to him  and we hear ...just like  that my village is so big and I don't have anyone why not one brave man in my village who brought back that right to our village why he have pain in his voice , veer just get his pain they are lucky got mukhiya like this , he always try to help villagers , never use his power to abuse them

 

 

he just say bye to mukhiya , but his word just in veer mind his pain , goddess fair , why not in his village till now why he cant thought about it why Veer singh Khurana   his par dadaji got some land as gift for behavery  but that land now  distributed in next generation , all just deepend upon rain , kam hua to bhi loss and jada hui to bhi loss , poverty start to show its color and some people start to robbery , robbery of crop just crop , to eat he don't like this so many time he and his family sleep without food because he don't like that robbery and all , he also want  goo life for him his family , his village  can really goddess get angry on us because we loss right of goddess fair

 


in all this thought he just reach  near his  house , little away from main village , light source is moon and diya in house


he just enered in his house as usual  his mother Savitri waiting for him along with his wife  same time someone closed his eyes and ask

 

guess me who am  I

 

veer know who is it but he say ,oh so much dark hear  idont get who are you

 

that voice oh baba I am MAAN VEER SINGH KHURANA , you don't know me

 

 

veer just laugh with his son attitude his son 6 year old he just pull him in front of him and ku nahi  main kya son all word know you one day ,Ha lakin acche kam ke liye ok veer just hug him , maan pride of veer , all say that maan is god bless child so sharp ,brave and fearless to his age



 

veer just look once to sword collection of his house  and mukhiya word again come in his mind

 


veer - maan abi tak soye nahi ,maan nodded in no ,veer narrow his eyes khana kyaya , maan stop for second and say na aj pet kharab hai mera

 


veer  get that again no food in house , his eyes moist , his son tailing lie so he don't get hurt ...veer just caressed maan face and say pani pi le aur so ja , kal bahot kaam hai

 


veer just took one sword and went  out his mother want  to stop but she know he will not stop now


 

veer just start to play with that sword with anger , he cant give proper food to his family , that sword just shining in moon his sharp move and he handle that sword like world soft things he just  all his  frustration on that 

 

 

precap

 

Veer decision enter in that village fair for that holy coconut

Edited by Mahimaan - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
Mahi 🤗...congratulations and thank u for the new story...different and interesting concept👍🏼...Mukhiya is a nice man...thinking so much about the village and worried about not being able to celebrate the Goddess fair ...Veer is disturbed by his talks and the poverty at home😕...Maan is such a cute and brave child.❤️...so sad he has to sleep hungry😭...wonder what Veer will do now...plz continue soon 😊
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Edited by --Ratna-- - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
lovely and different concept...
Veer is such a good person and love his son Maan...
Mukhiya is nice who thinks about his village and villagers a lot...
Veer feeling bad for Maan who slept hungery...
precap sounds good...cont soon...
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Posted: 9 years ago
wow its awesome continue soon
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congrsts for starting a new story.
is it robinhood types?