Geet - Hui Sabse Parayee

MG SS CUTE LOVE STORY PART 1-15 on PG 1-3/ Part 16-PG 7 /part 17 -pg 8

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Hey readers I am starting my
MG SS :- CUTE LOVE STORY again its more than one year i didnt updated and the reason is my lazyness
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"I am really very sorry"
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PART 1-15 on PG 1-3
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This is my first attempt of writing
fiction i hope you will like it
Character sketch
Maan singh Khurana: younger son
of pratap khurana who is very
polite, good by heart lives with his
father
Pratap singh Khurana:
Maan's father very serious person.
They live in Khurana mansion
Geet Handa : Middle class girl ,
works in Gift emporium shop,
having nephew and niece in her
family who are children of her
died elder sister
Avni Khurana : 8 year old sweet
girl , niece of geet
Aman Khurana :13 year old boy,
nephew of geet
Niharika Handa -Khurana: was
elder sister of geet and wife of
kabir singh khurana
Kabir singh Khurana: was elder
son of Pratap singh Khurana
Niharika and kabir were died in
car accident
This is character sketch if you
liked it pls give comment may be
good or
bad
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Prologue
In Khurana Mansion
Maan- Why papa? I know brother
is not with us . I also miss him so
much, why you cursing Avni and
Aman for it?
Pratap: Because if kabir didnt had
married with that middle class girl
then may be kabir have been
today with us, those two children
are of niharika
Maan: They are your grandchildren
also. I know am talking little rude,
but am sorry i will not hear you ,i
am going to take them back in
mansion, they are last memory
and symbol of my dear brother
Pratap: Maan...
Maan didnt heard him walked
away
In Handa House
Geet just came back from work
little Avni seen her and hugged
her, she is so close to Geet bcz
she was very small about 2 year
old when her parents died
Avni : where is my Chocklate?
Geet: take it, where is aman?
Avni : He told me he is going to
friends home.
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PART 1
Aman came back to home
Geet: Its too late, why?
Aman: I was playing so am late.
Geet:Did you complete your
homework?
Aman: I will do it later
Geet:You are getting rude day by
day these are bad manners. Its
not a way of talking to elders.
He dont hear geet, goes to his
room
Avni: Leave him he is just like
that . Masi I am feeling
hungry.Please make dinner soon
Geet:yes i am going for making it.
Geet thought to herself have tear
in eyes"I am not angry on you
Aman ,I know why your nature is
like that you miss your parents so
much . I also miss. May be I cant
be like them for you, but I will
try.May be its our fate to live
without them."
In Khurana Mansion,
Maan thought about past, when
his brother married to niharika
was very happy.But father thrown
them out of house,but they were
happy.He never broke contact
with him but due to fear of father
they never met face to face, they
just talked on phone, both
brothers shared each and
everything with each other.
His eyes well up with tear due to
memories.
He thought" now i will not hear
father , i will bring Aman and Avni
back,Now I will not fear of him,
may be it will be rude or anything,
I want them back .They are my
family.You will have to accept it
father. I will make you to accept
them''
Precap:Maan at Geet's house.

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PART 3
Next morning
In Khurana Mansion
Maan: I am going papa, to bring
them back
Pratap:You are not going Maan.
Maan:If you are not giving me
permission then I will also leave
this home,now choice is yours.
Pratap: Ok but dont expect that I
will give them any love or
affection
Maan:Ok
Then Maan leaved for Handa
house to Hoshiyarpur from Delhi
In Geet's house,
After sending Aman and Avni
to school , Geet left for her work
in gift shop.
She handle every work very
carefully helping customers and
other work so nicely
At afternoon
Owner of Shop: Geet you have to
leave job .
Geet:But i havent done any
mistake then Why?
Owner:I know you are very good
at work, but I am selling this
shop , I need money so am sorry
you have to.
Geet: Ok
Geet left from there and directly
went Gurudwara
she cried"why?why this happened
with me? what will I tell to Aman
and Avni?
She left for house then,
In Home
Avni: Masi you came so early
today?
Geet : Yes was feeling headache
so, Did you taken lunch or not and
Aman had or not?
Avni: Yes we had.You know Aman
is doing homework.
Geet to herself : What should I
do?What to tell I lied today but
tomorrow?
As she was lost in her own
thought door bell rang
Geet opened door:You , Why you
came here.
Maan: To take Avni and Aman with
me.They are my family
Geet: After six year you
remembered your family.Wher
were you in six year.Oh I forgot
you were polite son of your father
Hearing noise children came in
drawing room
Avni: Masi,Who is he?
Geet : He is...
Maan cut her
Maan: I am your uncle
Avni: Really Masi ,is he our
chachu?
Aman: Yes,Avni he is
said so and left from there.
Precap:Geet and Maan quarrel
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PART 3
Geet: Avni go to your room
like polite child Avni left from
there
Maan : From time I come here you
didnt think you didnt asked me to
sit.This is bad manner.
Geet: Mr.Polite dont teach me
manners.Tell clearly what what
you want?
Maan: I told clearly I want Avni
and Aman back .They are my bro's
children, my family.
Geet: They are my sister's children
and my only family too.
Maan: But how will you take care
of them you have lost your job.
Geet shocked : How do you know?
Maan: well MSK knows
everything.See I know you love
both of them and also I know you
love Avni like your own
daughter.But dont you think they
are Khurana's children and
deserve best life and everything
best in their life
Geet: I agree but in these six year
where were you when they need
you most?
Maan: Yes you are right. But in
these six year I hope just that
papa will understand and will
accept them but it was false hope
he didnt accept them till.But I will
make him to accept them.Now I
am giving you time today.But
tomorrow morning I will come to
take them with me.
said so and left from there,
Geet having tear in eyes and was
not able to think what to do?
Aman and Avni came there
Aman:I heard everything.What do
you think that I will go with
him.No am not.
Avni:I will also not.I cant live
without you.I love you Masi.
Aman:Yes Masi.
Three of them hugged each other.
Then Geet seperated them and
said,
Geet : But I dont have job.How
will I take care of both of you?
Avni and Aman were quite for
sometime.
Avni: You too come with us; we all
will go.
Aman: Yes we will not leave you
alone.
Geet: Ok.I will think.But now go
get ready we are going out for
dinner.
Avni:I want icecream, chocklate
too.
Geet : yes you will get .Go fast get
ready.
Avni left and geet's eyes well up
tear and thought to herself" This
is my last dinner with both of
you.I will miss you so much.I am
sorry."
Avni and Aman come,
Geet quickly wiped her tears and
they left for dinner
Precap: Again,Maan at Geet's
home
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PART 4
Three of them enjoyed their
dinner and were happy,after
sometime they came back,
Geet said to both to sleep.
Geet was in her own thoughts
"How will I tell you that I am not
coming with you? You both have
to go without me."
Then Geet gone to their room ,
They were sleeping peacefully, she
saw them and came back.
She started to pack their bags, all
stuff of them because she
accepted that she is not able to
take care of them.
Next Morning,
Maan came to home,
Door bell rang, Aman opened door
Aman : Why you are here?We are
not coming with you.
Geet came and said: Come inside.
Maan: So,Whats your decision?
Geet: Yes they are going with you.
Avni:And you masi? If you are not
coming I also not going with him.
Geet: Dont be stubborn sweety.I
am not leaving you, I will come to
meet you time to time.
Aman: You want to take both of us
with you.Right.
Maan: Yes,I am.
Aman:Then you have to accept
condition , then we will come only
Maan:Ok.Tell me.
Now geet was feared what will he
say because, she know his nature
and so rude sometime, never hear
others.
Aman: If masi will come then we
will come.
Maan: Ok .I accept.
Geet: But Aman listen to me...
Aman left from there
Avni: Please masi come with
me.How will I live without you?
Geet instantly hugged Avni
Maan thought" Aman and Avni are
so attatched with her.So she have
to come otherwise both of them
will not come."
Maan: I think you shuld come with
us. As you do not have job what
will you do here, may be in delhi
you will get more jobs
opportunity.
Geet thought for some time and
said: Ok I am coming.
Then she told Aman I will come
with both of you.
She went to her room and started
to pack her stuffs,
also thought"Today I come to
know how much Aman caress for
me, just he cant express.Its a new
ray of hope that old Aman will
come back soon just like before
when didi and jiju were with us."
All of them get ready an left for
Delhi.
Precap: They reached Delhi.
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PART 5
After long journey they reached to
Delhi in khurana mansion,
Avni: Masi its look like castle.Its
beautiful.
Geet: Yes Avni its big.
Maan:Yes, now it is your home
also.
Avni: Do you live alone here in this
mansion? You dont feel fear here.
Maan:No, your grandpa also live
here and caretakers also.
Then Maan told Nakul to take
them into their room.
Avni:Its very big room.I am not
going to stay alone in this room.
Masi you have to live with me.
Geet: Yes dear. I will live here. I
cant leave you alone sweety.
And Avni kissed on geets cheek.
Aman also got seperate room.
Maan said them to take rest and
come for dinner.
Aman:Its very big but useless,
Where is tv? As far I know there
are seperate tv in each room in
big homes.Then why not here.
Then Nakul called them for dinner
Avni: Masi this dining table is so
big.But we only few then why?
Aman: Avni these are dining tables
which mostly present in
big homes and it is also big
Maan also joined them.
Avni: You told that grandpa also
live there?then where is he?
Maan: He is out of city for work
and will come tomorrow by time
of evening.You start eating.
Aman: I want to tell you
something why there is no tv in
my room .I want it.
Geet: Aman its not way of talking
to elders.I told you before also
but...
Maan cuts her
Maan:Its ok you will get it.But get
ready early tomorrow we are
going to your new school for
admission.Good night to all.
Geet made Avni to sleep and layed
beside her was lost in her
thought,
"Tomorrow I would have to search
for new work, its also important."
While thinking she drifted in sleep.
Precap:Children in school.
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PART 6
Next morning
Geet: Get up! Avni.You get
ready.Today you are going to your
new school.
Avni get up
Then in hurry she left to see Aman
is get up or not,
Maan was coming from front in
hurry ,she collided with Maan but
before she fall maan held her in
his arms and lost in her eyes.
Geet was feeling uncomfortable
tried to free herself.Due to her
movement maan came out of
trance and made her stand
properly.
Geet:I am going to see Aman is he
ready or not?
Maan: Ok.
She left from there.
Maan thought to himself,
" Maan you never reacted like this
before,you lost in her eyes.How
beautiful her eyes are!"
Maan stop what you thinking
saying so he brushed off thoughts.
Geet: Aman get ready.
Aman:I am ready.
Then all completed breakfast and
three of them left for school.
Geet said bye to Aman and Avni
Geet was searching for jobs in
newspaper.
But unfortunately all were
mentioned that require
experianced employees.
First time she thought her degree
is of no use because she thought
before in big city like Delhi she will
get job on basis of her education.
she thought for sometime then
got ready and left from house and
called taxi.
In School,
Three of them come out of car
Maan took them to principal's
office.
Principal sir: Good morning
Mr.Khurana.
Maan: Good morning.Today am
here for admission of my nephew
and niece.
Principal: Are they here with you?
Maan:Yes.
Maan called them in.
Principal:In middle of session
admission is not allowed.So I have
to take their interview according
to rules.
Maan : Ok.I will wait outside.
Aman and Avni said Good morning
to principal
Principal asked them some
questions.
At last he called Maan and said "
They are approved for this
school.Both can join from
tomorrow.
Maan: Thank you so much.
Then they took tour of school.
Avni:Bhai, our new school is very
nice and big
Avni:Yes,Avni its big.
Maan:Do you liked or not?How is
principal sir?
Avni:I liked so much.Sir is also
very nice.
Maan: Aman you liked or not?
Aman:Its fine.
Maan took them to buy necessary
things for school.
Throughout the shopping Avni was
talking non stoply with maan.
Maan thought "how sweet she is!
Geet really took care of both very
nicely.She really teach her good
value.Aman is also fine but
sometime behaves weird.Now I
know why bro was madly in love
with bhabhi? Really Geet is very
different from other girls.
Oh !god again geet.maan stop
what you thinking."
They reached home.
Avni: Masi , masi where are you?
Maan asked Nakul"Where is Geet?"
Nakul: She only told that she will
be back at evening.
Maan:Avni may be she have some
work so she gone.You are good
girl then go get fresh and come
for lunch and Aman you too.Ok.
Maan: Where is Geet?Why she is
not here?She dont no anyone here
then...
Maan got tensed.
Avni: Chachu...
Maan: Come here.
Aman and Avni took lunch with
Maan.
Avni: I had lunch but I will not
take dinner without Masi.
Precap:Pratap singh Khurana back
to mansion.
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PART 7
In market,
Geet was wandering in various
shops for work,
But every answered that they
didnt need.Geet was disappointed.
It was very late so she left for
mansion.
In mansion,
Avni was waiting for Geet.
Avni: Bhai masi didnt back yet
when will she come?
Aman:She will be back soon.
In Maan's room,
Maan to himself" Is she mad?
didnt think at once how much
tensed I am now she is also my
responsibility."
Just then he heard noise and came
out
Avni: Masi where were you? You
know I was waiting for you.
Geet: Had dinner?
Aman: No we were waiting for
you.Avni again stubborn and she
will not have without you.
Avni:I will call chachu.Then we will
do.
Just then maan came down.
Avni:Chachu come lets have
dinner.
Maan: Yeah Avni.
Then they all had dinner.
Maan:Go both of you and sleep,
tomorrow is your first day of
school.Good night.
Aman and Avni:Good night.
Geet was also about to leave.
Maan:Stop.Where were you all
day?
Geet:Who are you to me to ask
question?
Maan:I am nobody.But Aman and
avni both were looking for you but
no madam was out for
sightseeing.
Geet:No, I was out for finding job.
Maan:Then you got or not.I am
sure you didnt.Come with your
biodata and certificates tomorrow
in my office.I will give you one
according your ability.Dont think
its mercy.
Geet: If I said no then...
Maan:I know you can say no
because your self respect is more
important to you, but as I said its
not mercy I will give you job acc.
your ability because I also want
employees who know good values,
honest about their work.Now
decision is yours.
As they were talking, Pratap singh
Khurana entered in mansion,
Pratap:Who is she Maan? I was
just out for day and you are doing,
whatever you thinking?I asked
something.
Maan:Go to your room Geet.
Geet left from there.
Pratap:Maan you haven't
answered yet.
Maan:She is Geet.Niharika
Bhabhi's sister she had taken care
of children and I didnt keep her
here then children also leave.
Pratap:Means she will also live
here.
Maan: Yes and may from
tomorrow work in Khurana
construction.
Prata:No , you will not do it.
Maan:I will papa I said you already
if you will not say yes,
then I will also leave this house.
Pratap left speechless.
Pratap to himself "I cant let you
go away from me.Because Kabir is
very far from me that I cant get
him back."
and then left to his room.
Next morning,
Geet:Get up! Aman you have to go
to school its your first day.
Aman: Its request or order.I want
to sleep more.
Geet: Its request dear.
Geet left from there.
Aman to himself "Oh god I want to
sleep" but he get up.
Geet: Avni get up tofay you have
to go to school.
She helped Avni to get ready.
She said Avni to go down.
Here Geet to herself " I will do job
MSK offering me.I cant live
jobless.As I will get new job then I
will leave this job.
At dining table
Geet: Eat fast otherwise you will
get late.
Just then Maan and Pratap
entered .
Geet: Namaste uncle.
Pratap:hmm.
Avni: Are you grandfather?
Maan: Yes .He is.
Avni:Good morning.
Pratap:Good morning.
And left from there.
Aman:What happen to him?
Geet: Aman...
Aman:Sorry
Maan: So Geet whats your...
Geet: I will do job which you will
give.Iam ready.
Then they finished breakfast Maan
and Geet dropped them to school
and they left for office.
Precap:1.Aman argued with boy in
class.
2.Geet in office.