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SaHil, two-shot: Pitter-Patter, a Qubool Hai fanfiction, 18+, SS

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Posted: 02 August 2014 at 11:20am | IP Logged
Chapter - 1

A/N: Dedicated to NallyLove, my friend, my supporter, my inspiration
for this piece. Rest at the end of the chapter.

Disclaimer: This is a pure fanfiction with author rights only on the
plot and not the pretty characters owned by their creators.


Rains, Ahil hates them. Not
because of the stupid lightening or thunder. It's the pitter-patter that annoys
the hell out of him because he can still hear the noise of rain against a tin
roof. He's not lived under a tin roof since forever but some sounds cannot be
forgotten. Some parts of your life cannot be erased.

It's not the sound of rain that
discomforts him; it's the shrieks that were muffled in the thunder that drowns
his thoughts. Shrieks, they're different from shouts. Ahil knows why, he knows
the difference between a shout and a shriek. A shout is not a helpless
involuntary noise that leaves your mouth when the pain is intolerable, that's a

His fingers trace the screen of
his phone; he needs to call Rihana because she will know someone who can drown
this. The rain, the shrieks, the thunder.

A woman's moans are a man's
greatest delight. Not Ahil's, he likes them quiet, breathy but quiet because he
has heard moans and they were usually followed by shrieks. He would gag a woman
if he needs to but he can't bear to hear a moan.

"Rihana, where's the party
tonight?" Ahil's patience and endurance is thinning and he needs the
solace of a warm soft body around him. He needs a distraction and he needs it

He shuts off his phone and walks
out to his car; he's just about to open the door when he sees her.

His heart misses a beat. He then
wonders what the hell that is and almost goes to the hospital fearing he's
suffering from a heart disease. But he checks his arms and it doesn't feel like
a heart failure. It's not a pain, just a small contraction. He dismisses it and
opens the door. He sees her again and loses his focus and footing seconds apart
from each other.


She hears a noise and her
instinct tells her to stop. But she overrules it and continues. With the past
few days she's had, Sanam deserves this reprieve. That's what she keeps telling

She loves rain; rains are best
disguise of tears. Nobody can listen to sobs because the thunder and
pitter-patter muffle that noise perfectly. Rains are the best times to drop her
mask. To drop the cloak of responsibility and strength. She doesn't need to
need to be strong in rain. She doesn't need to cater to her responsibilities.
She needs to get lost in rain and that's what she needs today.

She loves her responsibilities
and her life, hasn't regretted a single day or minute of it. But it's not easy.
Some days, no matter how loved you are, you need a fathers kiss on your face.
You need a mothers embrace. She never tells her grandmother about these days,
they come and go and her grandmother doesn't deserve this despair. Her pain,
her loss, it's hers to bear.

She has embraced the rain and is
being kissed by droplets on her face. She's going to make the most of it. She
needs this to survive and if it's a dance in the rain that keeps her sane, then
so be it. People do much worse.

It's only fair that it rained
today. Allah knew that Sanam needed it; she needed to flow in the rain because
she wouldn't have survived in the dryness her life has found itself in. Today
is the hardest day of the year. Today is her birthday. Today is the day she
feels empty inside because nothing fills up the space her parents untimely
death has left.

And today, today is the day she
will dance the pain away. This rain like all rains will absorb her pain. This
rain like all rains will give her strength.

This rain will change everything.


He curses the skies for skidding
him and hopes no one saw his downfall. Relieved to note everyone's absence, he
remembers that they've all gone out of town this weekend. His foster mother and
her desperate need to not stay in one place for long. She's never comfortable
living in one house or one place. Maybe the air gets stale. It doesn't matter;
she will always get what she wants because she's his everything.

A movement distracts him from his
thoughts, it's her again. "Why the f**k is she dancing in this rain?"
His thoughts are befuddled. This woman, he will never understand her. She's
nothing, no one significant yet she walks talks and lives like the world rests
on her shoulders. Her very pale and smooth shoulders. He can see her dress
clinging to her because she's drenched in rain. He hates getting wet. He hates
rain. He opens the umbrella and walks.

Her stride comes to a halt
mid-step and she finds herself surrounded by a cold body. She can't make out
his words because a huge round of thunder garbles his noises, she shouts back,
"WHAT?" He winces at the noise, his pain evident on his face. She's
stunned to see such raw pain on his face and realises her decibel of sound. She
whispers, "Why are you here?"

Her soft words shake the memory
of "what" being shouted in rain, he looks into her eyes to reply,
what he sees in them shocks him. He's never seen her eyes so empty, so hollow.
He pulls her along to take her inside because he really hates rain and doesn't
want to get wet.

She withdraws her hand from his
and refuses to budge. He points at the stairs and walks away. He sits on the
top stairs of the porch, the nearest he can get to rain; she understands his
peace offering and sits on the last stair of the porch, farthest from the rain,
accepting his offering.

Silence between them stretches.
He's lost in his thoughts and she's lost in hers. He breaks away from his
thoughts because he really doesn't need the noise in his head and asks the
question that stopped him in the first place. "Why were you dancing in the
rain? And more importantly, why were you crying if you were happy enough to

She's startled by his question
because she's never had to explain herself. She says the first words that cross
her mind. "Rain washes away my tears. Droplets kiss my face."

"I'll kiss your face."
The immediate reply in his mind shocks Ahil, he's suddenly glad he didn't vomit
it out. He takes a deep breath and words his next question carefully, not
trusting his random thoughts and obviously not understanding the importance of
a droplet's kiss, "you're so happy that you're crying in rain and dancing
with it?"

She turns her head and looks at
him; her eyes tell him these are not happy tears. "What happened to
you?" He whispers to the rain. Her empty eyes are hurting his heart for
some reason. She turns back, she hates that he's caught her today, today when
she's lost her strength. When she doesn't have her armour.

"I should leave." She
starts to walk away when she hears him say, "Please don't." He
shouldn't ask her to stay he knows that. He's selfish. He can't survive this
rain by himself. If nothing, he wants to know how the fire in her eyes has
died. He's never seen her like this and it's scaring him.

His words are so pained. As if it
hurts him to say them, she can't move leaving him like this. She doesn't
understand him. He has everything in his life and yet he takes it for granted.
He takes it from people less endowed. He's never faced a problem in his life
such as hers. What will he ever understand about her? She sits back, closer to
middle this time. He sits back too, closer to middle.

"These are not happy
tears." He starts, hoping she will continue. She's staring at the rain.
Trying to figure out if she should say anything. He's different today, softer.
Tired, maybe. He's staring at her. Droplets falling from her hair to her
shoulder blades. She's softer today, milder. She looks broken though. He
doesn't understand why he noticed that.

"It's my birthday
today," she says in such a small voice that if he wasn't paying enough
attention he would've missed it as a gust of wind. "Then, why-" his
words die on his lips when hears faint sobbing. Sobs are worse than shrieks.
Shrieks need thunder to muffle them; they need an unbearable pain to emit.
Sobs, sobs can be muffled by rain itself. Sobs are not a result of unbearable
pain; they're a result of a pain that refuses to leave us. A pain that wrecks
us and leaves us broke

He places a hand on her shoulder,
for comfort or support he doesn't know. He just felt compelled to do so. She
rests her cheek against his hands. His wordless support was accepted by her, no
questions asked. She didn't have the strength to question his motives, she felt
warmth in his gesture and she took it. She's so cold. So cold and empty.

He sees her shiver and places
both his hands on both her shoulders. She shifts closer up a stair, his legs on
both sides of hers. His hands resting on her shoulders, her back could touch
his chest but isn't.

"I hate rain," he tells
her. He never told anyone that. He doesn't understand why he told her just that
he wanted to tell someone. She touches her back to his chest, and tilts her
head on his shoulder, "why?"

He suddenly observes how close
she is, how beautiful her lips are and how easy it would be to kiss them. He
closes his eyes, to gather himself because her eyes will make him tell her and
he really doesn't want to. "You don't want to know." He says after

She looks away into the rain.
"I never saw my parents." The moment the words leave her mouth she
regrets them, her body cringes. He notices her body contracting and rubs her
shoulders subconsciously.

They needed a distraction. Both
of them. He doesn't know how to process the information her words have given
him. How she would've reacted if she heard, "you're lucky" from his
mouth. That was the first thought in his head. He tells her something that
shocks him and her both. Him because he never thought he would say it out loud
and her because his words were so harsh she feels bruised by them. "I wish
I didn't know mine."

She whips her head in his
direction and notices for the first time that her back feels warm because his
chest is touching it. And she notices her state of dress and feels utterly
naked. Her questions and astonishment dies on her lips as she hastily gets up
to change her clothes. He holds her hand and she looks back into his eyes. She
musters a small smile and mentions coffee and change of clothes.

He nods and let her go. Shapes of
her breasts were imprinted on his mind and the clothes clinging to her slim
figure. Her hands were so soft even though she works all day. He curses himself
for thinking about her. For telling her about 'them.'

His mind is suddenly filled with
pitter patter and the shrieks that accompany them. The sudden blast of noise
startles him. He was sitting in relative peace from past few minutes. Her
presence dimmed the noises in head. Her touch muted them. He gets up to go find
her, just to shut the noises. Just for tonight. Just for this rain.


She peels off her pants as soon
as she enters her room. She proceeds to dry her hair with the towel on the
other side of the room. She doesn't register a presence in the room. Her heart
is slowly losing the fullness she felt just few minutes ago. Desolation and destitution
taking its place in her heart instead. She wonders what changed, why she's
feeling even hollower than she did before she started dancing. She realises
it's him! He filled her heart, for those few moments, there was no darkness.
His presence, his touch, made her feel cherished. The darkness is crushing her
again and she cannot escape it. She turns around to go to back, just to find
some light. Just for tonight. Just for this rain.

He walks in the general direction
of her room and finds the door ajar. He stops at the entrance and finds her
walking toward the other side of the room. She picks up the towel and starts
drying her hair. Her beautiful dark locks look even more gorgeous ruffled by
the towel. And then he notices her body go rigid. Like she's being held captive
by unseen ties. He sees her back straighten and observe a resolution that she's
come to. He feels like he's intruding on her and just as he's about to turn,
she turns back.

And just like that, the noises
are gone. It's her. It's only her. He walks to her and places both his hands on
both her shoulders. He looks at her, her hair ruffled, her clothes still wet,
still clinging at her breasts and waist, her calves naked. He didn't know she's
removed her pants. Her clothes are now sticking to her thighs, her slim thighs.
He drags his eyes back to hers and places his forehead on hers. His eyes
trained on her lips. He needs to kiss her right now before he combusts.
"Please," he whispers.

His eyes hold hers captive, his
touch feels like fire on her skin. She should feel cold. Her body is shivering
but heart is filled with warmth, his touch does that. It fills her heart. His
hands are on her shoulders. His thumbs running circles on her shoulder. He runs
his palms down her shoulder and arms. Her body shivers and this time not from
cold. She's staring at his lips when she feels his forehead on hers. His lips
are turning blue from the rain and the cold. She wants to kiss them and send
warmth through them. She can feel his laboured breath on her face. His forehead
on hers, her nose touching his. And then a faint whisper of "please"
breaks away any tie to reality that she possessed. It's him. It's only him now.

He wasn't expecting her kiss to
come so suddenly as fiercely. She kissed him like she's starved. She bruised
his lips with the onslaught of hers. Lips, teeth, tongue; his mouth was
attacked by all. Seconds after she crushed her lips to his, she stopped.
They're both breathing so hard and staring at what just happened. But before
anyone of them let reality catch them he attached his lips against hers and
proceeded to grab her and shove her against the nearest wall.


They kissed hard and fast,
bruising, biting, and sucking. They slowed down to nibbles and licks and soft
kisses only to bite and bruise again. Their hands all over each other. Her
hands in his wet hair, his hands on her hips. He grabbed her face with his hands
and shoved his tongue in her mouth, pinning her to the wall with his hips on
hers and her hands on his back. He's slowly driving into her with their clothes
on when he feels her shiver.

He detaches his mouth from hers
and proceeds to kiss her neck, her collar bones, and her shoulders. He kisses,
then suckles and then kisses again. He slowly unties her dress and let's it
fall. She's unbuttoned his shirt and thrown it off his shoulder. He's in his
pants and she's in her undies. She's shivering again and he proceeds to kiss
and suck her soft skin below her collar bone to keep her warm. She unties his
belt and he removes his pants. His bulge finally breathing. Her eyes widen when
she finds no underwear beneath. He removes her brassiere because he needs to
suck on her. Before his mouth reaches her, his head is being yanked in her
direction and her teeth clashes against his making noise, her tongue battles
with his own but he doesn't let her win. He battles right back sucking on her
lips and taking her mouth in his.

Their kisses slow down to small
pecks. His nose pressed against hers. His forehead on hers again. He stares in
her eyes when his hands reach her panties. His eyes daring hers to say no, hand
stills before removing them. She shifts her hips and licks her lips. He removes
it all the way leaving them both naked. He cages his arms holding her captive
inside them against the wall, his hips pinning her again. And suddenly
everything changes because she smiles. She smiles and his lips stretch in
return without a conscious thought or action on his part. And he knows, he
knows nothing will ever be the same again.

A/N: This is a two-shot story. The second chapter is in the editing stages right now and will be posted as soon as possible. I'm
not sure of the rules and regulations of India-Forums, I've censored as much as
I can, if this is still deemed inappropriate or the thread is removed please
know that the uncensored version has been posted on under the
same penname.

Link to the story published at fanfiction:

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Edited by sri_ffn - 03 August 2014 at 2:15am

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Posted: 02 August 2014 at 11:55am | IP Logged
Chapter 2

This is dedicated to my darling Lily and my soul mate Rhea, without whom this chapter was impossible.
Disclaimer: This is a pure fanfiction with author rights only on the plot and not the pretty characters owned by their creators.
The morning rays streamed through the netted window on his face. He squinted to the light and opened his eyes begrudgingly. He splayed his arms around searching his sheets for her warmth but only found her lingering smell in her bed instead. He was lying on his stomach and found his legs tangled in her sheets. He lifted his head and looked around for her. A phone call from his office assistant woke him up completely, "Yeah, Junaid?"
And his day begins.
She's stirring the pot slowly; this dessert needs slow deliberate stirs to add the flavour to the dish. The smile on her face has made a permanent appearance since last night. "Sanam!" She hears him shout out.
And her day begins.
Where is she? Why isn't she here? Does it mean nothing to her? Is she still playing with him for his money? Thoughts in his mind, especially the last one is grating on his nerves. He needs to go to office and distract himself. "He can't keep thinking about this girl," he tells himself. There's no breakfast on the table. "What's the point of employing a cook if there is no breakfast served?" He mutters under his breath, and then he shouts out, "Sanam!"
She carefully pours the dessert in the bowl and picks the bowl in one hand and breakfast platter in the other. Precariously balancing the two, she greets him with a smile. Angry look on his face dims her smile and just as her face retracts her smile, he smiles back. "Does he even realise how beautiful he looks with a smile on his face?" Sanam's thought startles her. She proceeds to place the breakfast on the table and gestures him to begin the feast.
"God her smile lights up his day." He sits at the table and all his insecurities vanish with the burst of flavours in his mouth. He moans in delight and glances her way because he can't stop looking at her. The look in her eyes halts his breathing. "Does she even realise that her mouth is slightly open and her tongue is peeking out to lick her lips?" His thoughts thrill him. He offers a bite to her.
His offer was unexpected and she respectfully declines. It's surprising how they haven't said a word to each other. As if they don't need to. She is brought out of her musing by a spoon on her lips, he insists. She opens her mouth and tastes her dessert. She moans at the perfect texture though she does wish she gave it another minute to cook to get that perfect colour. Oh well she will do better next time. She opens her eyes and is surprised to see his reaction.
Her moan, it brings back the worst memories. His body goes rigid and his fingers refuse to move. This is the first time he has heard her moan. Yesterday - flashbacks of yesterday are mellowing his body slowly - he noticed yesterday how she never moaned at all, she was breathy yes but she was quiet. She was perfect. He felt her hand on him and instantly his skin was on fire and his memories were getting dimmer.
He held her hand so tightly she thought he'll crush her fingers. His pain was clearly visible on his face and she didn't even realise when her hand extended to his to comfort. Why is he in pain? He was the one who offered her to eat; does it hurt him to feed her? No, maybe it was her reaction; she mentally slapped herself for moaning. Did her moan make him react? Why though? She has so many questions. She looks at him with all the curiosity in her eyes.
He could almost read the questions in her mind they were that clearly visible in her eyes. Her eyes, those aren't as hollow as last night. Is it him? Does he help her like she helps him? Can he trust her not to hurt him? Somehow, he doesn't know how but something inside him trusts her. Trusts her not to hurt him and that's what makes him say, "Ask, I'll tell you what I can."
"Why?" The question leave's her lips without her understanding exactly what is she's seeking an explanation about. Why did he want to tell her? Why is he so sad? Why has he done this to her? Why is this morning so different from the others? She doesn't know what she wants to be answered first. She places her other hand on his hand leaving it on him to decide how he wishes to answer the open question. She's pleasantly surprised that his answer is a smile.
"Why?" Such a simple question. But not just one question. She's asking everything and nothing in one word. It brings a smile to his face because it proves him wrong once again. She's smart; she's not a Barbie doll with no thought process. It's a relief because she's nothing like the woman he's been around all his life. He turns to her and says with a smile, "Small steps jaan, how about we start with small questions instead of existential ones? I would like to ask you a few things too? I'm as curious about you as you are about me." Her answering smile fills his heart with hope.
Questions and Answers are long winded conversations to most, not to Sanam and Ahil. Once they started talking it's like they couldn't stop. But they had an unsaid unwritten understanding of not letting anyone know about their newfound relationship. This lead to the most curious ways of communication between the two. He would leave a paper beneath her pillow asking her about her favourite movie. She would ask his favourite colour by drawing on his fogged bathroom mirror. It became a game to them, who is more creative or more discreet.
Their relationship slipped most of Ahil's family member's attention. Somehow their small smiles and quick kisses were missed by them. Their smiles were once traced by Rehan, Ahil's best friend, but he didn't know of the reason behind them nor did he ever see them smile at each other. He was happy that Sanam was more upbeat these days; she looked beautiful with this near constant small smile on her face. But he also noticed how some days were much sadder for Ahil than others.
Not all questions were easy or fun for both of them. That night when Sanam asked Ahil his favourite memory of his birth mother, it was no fun. Ahil's painful description of his past slashed her heart. She felt so helpless facing the open window with nothing to lean on. She leaned into him instead. She listened to him pouring his pain out in words. She hugged him and prayed to god that she would absorb his pain and relieve him from it. Her body against his was the best ailment to his wounds. He held her close and drew strength from her. That night, they slept in crying hoarse each other's arms.
"Drunk in love, this is what it feels to be drunk in love." He murmured against her pale skin in an early light of dawn. He needs to wake her up or someone could catch them. No one can catch them because the world will destroy them. Their bubble is safe. They are safe. They trust each other, they love each other. They are almost always together, they sleep beside each other. Some days, they are wrapped in each other's arms in the morning, some days she's tucked under his arm. They can't sleep well without the comfort of the other anymore. One night when Sanam spent the night at her grandma's house, they talked on phone for some time but they were both really tired, they ended up on the phone all night just to hear the other one breathe.
He remembers how she held him when he cried all night in her arms. Last night, she told him about losing her parents and how she knew they were murdered but had too many responsibilities at the age of eleven and that took precedence to avenging their murder. She doesn't remember her parents, she should love them, she said and that she does but she loves the idea of her parents more likely. He was afraid after hearing the kind of so-called parent he had if she would still love the concept of parents, he's glad she decided to hate the man not a father. She told him he wasn't a father; he doesn't deserve to be given that respect. He wonders if he deserves such a perfect girl. He can feel her stir in her sleep. He kisses her lips to wake her up. "She needs to get back to her bed. One more kiss and I'll let her go," he thought.
One kiss became twenty and half an hour and bruised lips later, Sanam tip-toed out of his room into hers. Thanking god that no one saw her. No one saw her that was true. But someone felt her. Ahil's mother that is visually challenged is very keen of hearing. She could hear someone's padded feet coming out of Ahil's room. She assumed they must be from some random woman Ahil is currently keeping company and dismissed it. Sanam on the other hand, took deep breaths once inside her room to get her heart rate normal. She got ready for the day and realised she's late for preparing breakfast.
She didn't even glance at the mirror before she left her room and her wet hair went flying behind her. Halfway through she realised she's not completely dressed and she ran back to her room to put on her pants. Ahil saw Sanam running to her room and followed her, worried at the distressed expression on her face.
Sanam wears her pants at express speed and buzzes to rush back when Ahil blocks her gateway and shuts the door behind him. He reaches for her face and cups her cheeks softly and asks, "Are you okay sweetheart?" Huh? She wonders, he never called her that word, what does it mean? He smiles and repeats the question, "Jaan? You okay? Why are you so stressed?" His question reminds her of how late she's running and she explains to him at express speed at how late she is. Her haphazard explanation makes Ahil laugh so hard that cat of the house hisses loudly at it. Rehan observes the unusual behaviour of the usually quiet cat but dismisses it quickly and resumes musing about breakfast cooked by Sanam, her cooking is sensational and someday when he gathers enough courage he might just tell her.
"Shhh..." Sanam plants her lips on Ahil's. Best way to shut someone up. Ahil naturally deepens the kiss but she detaches their already bruised lips and asks him to leave because there will be no breakfast if he doesn't. Ahil has loved her breakfasts since she made him write a list of his entire favourite breakfast foods along with breakfasts he wishes to eat in his lifetime and thereafter made breakfasts sticking only to that list. He loves the small box of snacks that she sneaks into his car for munching at work. Some days, there are two boxes not one and the other box contains the answer to his question, like her favourite childhood game. That box usually has another question by the end of the day, like why does she hate the colour silver? And so it goes.
It's raining again. The noise is back, pitter-patter, pitter-patter. Another rain, another window. Strange, it doesn't hurt as much as it used to. Sanam made Ahil talk about it so much that he started to remember the good days as well. The good days were far and few in between but they're good memories to have. He used to love his mother cooking his favourite bean rice on a rainy day; those memories were long forgotten behind all the hurt caused by his father. Ahil is surprised at how far he and Sanam have come. It's been months to the last rain. The rain that changed his life.
Is it a co-incidence that it's raining today too? Last rain, Ahil filled Sanam's life with hope and happiness. This rain, this time it's her turn. He's hinting at it from few weeks now, she knows what he wants to hear from her. She knows from that first rain that things have changed forever. They will never be the same. And she loves what they've become. She loves what he means to her. She loves what she means to him. She loves him. And today, today she will tell him what he's been waiting for her to say. He won't say it, she knows. He hopes that she loves him but doesn't want to hope because no one he knows has really loved him. Not even his foster mother that he loves unconditionally. Deep down, he knows that's a one way street. Sanam feels proud that she knows and loves a man like Ahil. His struggles and his life, they make him a made-man. The type of man her grandma always told her about. She's going to tell him, right after this special dinner.
Dinner that night was quiet. Sanam gave Ahil a huge surprise when he saw his long-forgotten favourite bean rice for dinner. He thanked her immensely through his eyes; she had to know what it meant for him. She beamed a smile in return. Ahil saw Rehan turn to Sanam and he looked away from her. Rehan saw Sanam smiling brightly with her eyes closed, her smile faltered his heartbeat. He loved the bean rice and told her so. Ahil snapped his neck to look up to her; he saw her blush at Rehan's compliments. He's never seen her blush outside their bubble. Her blush is his, only for his eyes. "Mine!" his mind screamed at him. Ahil noticed Rehan's satisfaction at Sanam's blushing thanks and his fists clenched. He told himself that this is Sanam and she blushes in his mere presence without sweet words directed at her. He told himself he doesn't ever need to worry because she loves him. She does right? He doesn't compliment her like Rehan did. Is that what she wants from him? Rehan's next sentence snaps him back from his thoughts.
"Have some please? You have to know how tasty this is. I insist," says Rehan. Sanam respectfully declines and when Rehan insists further she profusely refuses. Rehan feels frustrated at her insistent refusal and decides to be bolder, he offers her a bite form his spoon. Sanam is about to refute his offering when she hears a clang of spoon on Ahil's plate.
"Stop it! She said no! She's allergic to beans, she won't eat it!"
All eyes are at Ahil's face after his sudden outburst. Rehan is visibly shocked at Ahil's rudeness directed to him. He feels guilty for forcing Sanam to eat the rice but is even more surprised that Ahil even knows about her allergies. "How does Ahil know? He's never even in the same room as Sanam let alone talk to her." Everyone on the dinner had that same question written on their face. Ahil realises his slip the moment it leaves his mouth. He needs to leave this table before he sees her face. He doesn't want to see her reaction. It will break him if its fear or disappointment. He can't answer the question written on everyone's faces. He pushes his chair and walks away, takes two steps and walks back, picks up his plate and takes it to his room. Everyone is staring at him walking up to his room. His footsteps match the pitter-patter of the rain, same as Sanam's heartbeat.
That night when Sanam entered Ahil's room she found him staring at the raindrops on his window sill, standing completely still, like a statue. She hugged his broad shoulders from behind and felt his stiff body loosening under her touch; he placed his hands on hers and absorbed her warmth. She turned him around and planted a soft kiss on his lips. She smiles and says, "You took the plate." He scratches his neck averting his eyes from hers, he looks down and mumbles, "Couldn't exactly leave it to get cold, it was amazing." She lifts his head with one finger and grins, "just like Mum?" He shakes his head making her lose her smile. "Much better, just like my jaan," he says, bringing her smile back. He hugs her close to him and breathes her in. She always knows what to say to him.
She's lying in his arms about to drift off to sleep when she remembers what she planned to tell him today. "Ahil?" she nudges him. "Hmm?" he pinches back. She tells him she wants to tell her grandmother about them. "Tell her what?" he asks. She knew his reaction would be to ignore the obvious truth so she patiently tells him that they should tell her grandmother about their relationship because she doesn't want to hide anything from her anymore. Ahil realises from the seriousness of her words that he needs to ask her, really ask her that one question before they involve other people in their bubble. "Are you sure?" he asks quietly. She asks him to clarify and narrow down his vague existential question like he asked her to do all those days back that first morning after 'the' rain. He rubs his hands down her arms and asks again, "Are you sure about me? You are so much better than me. You could get someone so much better than me. I mean, you're so loveable, I can already see Rehan-"
She flips her body at hearing Rehan's name and straddles Ahil. She slowly brings her forehead to touch his and asks him softly, "Do you still doubt?" Me? Us? My feelings? Your feelings? He smirks at her vague existential question that asks more than one question but understands her unsaid words just as clearly her said words. He shrugs vague response to her vague question. She flicks her eyes to his shrug and back to his eyes. The uncertainty in his eyes and the reluctance to include her in his real life halts her plans to kiss it better. The moment she halted her plans, she heard him say, "No. Whatever you're thinking, no. Please, let there be only one of us that has a doubt if at all." He kisses her lips and doesn't stop kissing till she kisses him back and pours out all her agony in it.
She takes both his hands and places them on her love handles. She presses herself on his chests and proceeds to bite his lips thoroughly. Her kisses were slow and then rough and then they became downright painful because she bit him hard. He took it all and gave it right back. He squeezed her waist and lifted her to remove the offending clothes on her. She dug her fingers in his waistband and removed his t-shirt. Soon, clothes went flying in succession and their heavy breathing and kisses, licks and bites were the only noises heard.
He shifted his hands to her hips, squeezing a little and kneading it. She started kissing his neck and chest, small kisses, kitten licks, she was driving him mad. She then switched to sucking his skin, taking bigger bites out of his chest. She was a woman on a mission today, leaving dark red marks on his skin. She softly kissed his scar above his navel, dragging her lips across the welt because she knows the pain behind it. He once said her kisses absorb his pain and since then, this scar and many others are her special places to kiss him.
Her soft lips against his skin are too much for him, he cups her face in his palms and sits up to thoroughly kiss her lips and proceeds to kiss her neck. He kisses her neck and her collarbone. He licks her while rubbing her skin with his thumbs. He palms her and squeezes her softly at first and then firmly. He moves below her collar bones where he kisses, licks and bites her long and hard. Her sharp intake of breath makes him stop. He immediately takes her in his mouth and sucks on her skin. He takes small bites on her too, she loves those small bites. He takes her hardened skin between his teeth and pulls at it.
She stills his biting and pinching and pulling by thoroughly kissing his lips and slowly pushing him back on the bed. She can feel him, hard and hot. She slides down him and puts her hands on him like he taught her. She pumps him faster as he bucks his hips in her hands and just as he thinks to slow her down so he can give her pleasure first, he feels her soft lips on it and the scenes of it inside those lips make him lose his control and he pushes her away to save her from the jet stream.
She didn't know kissing it would make him react like this but she sure liked it. She slowly comes back and kisses his lips softly. She's smiling that same permanent smile of hers. They drift off to sleep for some time when she remembers her question and how it's still unanswered. She moves to straddle his hips and slowly runs her palms on his chest and rubs herself on him. "Do you still doubt?" she whispers, rubbing his hardening muscle. "No. I never should've doubted at all. I'm sorry, it's difficult for me -" She kisses his lips, "Who am I?" she asks him. "Sanam." He automatically answers; she shakes her head and asks again, "Who are you?" "Ahil," he answers. "Sanam's Ahil," she completes. "Ahil's Sanam," he smiles.
"What we have, do you honestly think I have this with anyone else?" she emphasises on this by pressing further into him, enough to him feel her warmth. "Never. You're mine, only mine." She stops rubbing and lifts herself, he flips her and places her on her back, he proceeds to kiss and lick every part of her neck and below telling her every small thing he knows about her. He tells her everything she knows about him. He tells her he never doubted their feelings for each other, he just never wanted the world to create any problems between them. He flips her again and she lies on his chest.
They talk all night about his potential fears and her flicker of doubt. Slowly before the first rays drifted through the window, they were both drifting to sleep when she asks him, "Do you still doubt?" He looks straight in her eyes and says, "I love you too, no, there's no doubt." She grins sleepily and mumbles, "I love you so much." She's off to sleep when he realises that another rain has changed his life yet again because now he's Sanam's Ahil and she's Ahil's Sanam and its time the world knows about it.
Translation: Jaan means life.
This is it, thank you. I hope you enjoyed it. I'll be back with something else hopefully sometime soon but this story ends right here. Just so you know, you will make my day if you send me a review. Thank you again.

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All my love

Edited by sri_ffn - 02 August 2014 at 12:02pm

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Posted: 03 August 2014 at 2:14am | IP Logged
Beautiful work.
The essence of all d emotions of d lead cud b felt.
Could feel & see d story unfolding in front of my eyes.
Loved it.

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Posted: 03 August 2014 at 2:19am | IP Logged
Originally posted by SnehaMaaneet

Beautiful work.
The essence of all d emotions of d lead cud b felt.
Could feel & see d story unfolding in front of my eyes.
Loved it.

Thank you darling!

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You know that you completely did me me in with this absolutely beautiful piece of writing. Sahil had already won my fangirl heart but your amazingly written spin on them just tipped this fangirl over the edge and sent me straight to borderline obsession! Clap
It is a truly beautiful piece of work my dearest Sri, the way you captured the very essence of who both the characters are and blending that with sexual intensity that we know will never see on screen yet we can picture it happening because of how intimately and accurately you wrote it, simply breath taking. 

I know I will make you regret writing Sahil fic for me because. now I'm going to be pestering you to write so much, maybe next time you could aim to be less brilliant and I might stop bugging you! WinkLOL

Love you my darling. Keep up the amasing work!

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Posted: 03 August 2014 at 1:13pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by NallyAshlokFan

You know that you completely did me me in with this absolutely beautiful piece of writing. Sahil had already won my fangirl heart but your amazingly written spin on them just tipped this fangirl over the edge and sent me straight to borderline obsession!Clap
It is a truly beautiful piece of work my dearest Sri, the way you captured the very essence of who both the characters are and blending that with sexual intensity that we know will never see on screen yet we can picture it happening because of how intimately and accurately you wrote it, simply breath taking.

I know I will make you regret writing Sahil fic for me because. now I'm going to be pestering you to write so much, maybe next time you could aim to be less brilliant and I might stop bugging you!WinkLOL

Love you my darling. Keep up the amasing work!

Thank you so much sweetie! I'm more than happy to write for you darling. You were my original pest and I love you for it. Thank you for making me write about these two, I didn't even know these characters when I started.

To more dedications and more stories.

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omg it was wonderful work
loved it totally

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Originally posted by navk

omg it was wonderful work
loved it totally

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