marvellous
mind blowing
story
the turn u brought after arnav accussation and blaming to khushiwas super awesome
Really
if ipkknd had picked this story of urs and picturised the show like this
then the show will have turn more and more famous
i liked the way u make arnav repent and feel guilt all his
wrong accusation and bloody wrong abuses he had thriwn on khyshi
payal character turned into a protecting lioness after seeing khushi condition
that was one more superb plus point and credit to ur writing
and
then u turn the table on anjali
in show i hate it to hell
when bani told khushi to stay away from anjali
and here u made anjali went through that
and feel guilty even with no mistake of her
now
most imp character Dr. Raphoel
fabulous one
hats off to u for enter such sexy and wonderful character
loved reading this ff in one go
thanks for writing such amazing and beautiful story on arshi
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