VeeBa OS- Imperfectly Perfect

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Posted: 9 years ago

Hi friends, this is my first VeeBa OS, it sort of reflects my views on the couple and might be a little different. Sorry if its too long. Please enjoy and comment J

Veera and Baldev had started dating sometime after she confessed her feelings to him. They had planned to meet at Baldev's cottage for lunch, but as always Veera could not make it.

A few hours after waiting Baldev started getting really angry.

B-  Ay kudi apne aap nu samjhti ki hai? Let her come today!

After a while, Veera came inside Baldev's cottage with a guilty look on her face.

Baldev was laying on his sofa drinking. He met his angry eyes with her guilty ones.

B- aagayi ji aap. Sorry ji aapko mere waste inni taqleef uthani padi.

V- Baldev I'm sooo sorry, wo darasal...wo main...

B- BAS! Bahut ho gaya tera natak!

He walked up to her and grabbed her arm

B- Tu  chahati ki hai? Main apni puri zindagi tere intezaar me kat lo! Bahut sahliye tere nakhre nu. Ab aur nahi.

She starts tearing up and hugs him an apologizes he pushes her away and starts to leave. She begs him not to go and she will do anything for him to forgive her.

He comes back and pins her against the wall and  grabs her hair

B- Main tera khilone nahi hoon Veera

He turns to leave again but she runs and locks the door so he cant leave.

He comes closer to her face

B- tune bahut wadi galti ki hai veera

Veera closes her eyes and he opens the door to leave.

V- Baldev! Tu mainu chad ke nahi jaha sakta.

She runs outside to search for him.  She cannot bear the fact that he left her and starts crying again.

Two creepy looking guys approach her.

G1- wow what a beauty. Chalo ji humare saath aapka gham hum door karte hai.

G2- Kya pataka hai, aaj is de naal wada maaza aayega

They both grab her arms and drag her to their jeep

V- Chad mainu kaminey. Baldev! Baldev! Kitthe hai tu

G1 leans closer to her face and is about to kiss her. Just then a strong arm pulls him back

The goons let go of Veera and start fighting with that man.

Veera is overjoyed to know her sher, Baldev has come back to save her.

Veera is staring  at him in admiration when suddenly she notices two other guys attack Baldev from the back.

He is badly hurt and being beaten by the four of them now.

Veera sees a really thick log and starts hitting the guys with it,

B- Veera! Kamli ho gayi hai ki. Tu ja yahan se

V- Nahi main tenu chad ke kahin nahi jaongi!

Baldev gets back up and starts beating up the goons along with her sherni.

They goons are badly injured and run away.

Veera and Baldev have and eyelock. The elated couple run and hug each other.

Soon it starts raining so they go back to the cottage.

V- Baldev..tenu bahut chot lagi hai, le main teri patti kar deti ho.

She sits him on the bed and starts to apply medicine to his wounds.

He is staring at her intently while she is doing so and notices that she is also slightly injured on her hand.

B- veera tenu bhi chot lagi hai, mainu de main teri patti karta hu

He tries to grab the medicine from her but in vain.

V- Dev... tu mujhse abhi tak gussa hai?

B-  Nahi, aaj to mere zindagi ka sabse accha din hai

 Veera lowers her eyes in guilt as she thinks he is being sarcastic.

Baldev smirks knowingly

B- Veera, I am truly happy as today I have realized how much you love and care about me.

He pulls her onto his lap and they hug.

V- Baldev...Your happiness, your love and your care means a lot to me and I will never take advantage of it again. I know I am a stupid crazy and forgetful girl but despite my antics please never stay angry with me, I will not be able to take it.

She kissed him softly on the lips.

He pulled her closer and sniffs the fragrance of  her hair

B- someday you will be the death of me.

She giggled  softly at his words and laid her head on his chest.

Baldev's  heart skipped a beat at her antics

he knew that no matter what she did he will always be madly in love with her

and she knew that no matter how much she struggled to show it but she would always be there for him. They were both somehow imperfect but perfect for each other.

And so that my friends, is the unique  beautiful and  unconditional love of our sher and sherni of Pritampura!

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Posted: 9 years ago
It was really nice dear... I enjoyed it... It has that typical Veeba flavour to it... Keep writing!!!! Glad to see so many good writers in the forum and welcome to Veeba world!!!
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Posted: 9 years ago
This was really good Pearl! 👏I enjoyed it so much!Iloved da Veeba tashan and angry Ballu,and dn da caring one!😳Do write more soon dear!Really enjoyed it!🤗
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Posted: 9 years ago
Pearl this is very beautiful OS!👏
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Posted: 9 years ago
Pearl, thank you for this beautiful OS🤗 Great job dude.👏 Keep writing more.😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
Beautiful OS... Keep writing.. 😊😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
Hi pearl...very good OS...thank u very much. u have brought out their emotions really well...👏
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Posted: 9 years ago
Thanks everyone for the lovely comments. I hope
to write even better stories later on. 😊 please let
me know what type of VeeBa stories you guys like
I love all, but the intense hot dushmani ones are my personal
fav! 😳