Originally posted by: RisingPhoenix
Maar daala Saakshi maar daala
Mujhe hi nahi Karan ko bhi🤣
Full on dhamakedaar yaar
Just loved it❤️Update soon and thanks for the PM
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Originally posted by: Mohini2012
Hey dear thnx 4 d pm. 😊
Quite convincing prologue 🥳
N update ws fantastic. 🤗
Randhir seeking revange n he beat ankit! maza aa gaya.
sanyu cn nr thnk in evn her dreams dat a story of a book read by her vl bcm her real lyf story!!!😲
Keep wrting. wnt 2 knw more!
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Originally posted by: Param_love
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Cute Sis😳Love you yaar lovely, lovely written❤️love it👏⭐️keep it up👍🏼Update soonThanks for pmLoveBushra🤗
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Originally posted by: anjipankaj
woah this looks interesting
so Sanyu's dad is responsible for Karan's death .And the precap🤪please jaldi jaldi update karo
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Nice start yarr...
Looking forward for reading more of it.
I hope rd doesn't do anything to sanyu..precap sacared me 😆 😲
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Originally posted by: kaveriw2008
Wow yaar this ia damm interesting
Even me also love to read this kind of storiesPlz plz add me in ur pm list and send me link of next update
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I WILL SURE PM YOU NEXT PART😳
Thank u so much everyone for ur support.
Thank u ANU DI, AYESHA AND PIYA . this part is dedicated to u
Happy reading guys
Randhir arrived Mumbai at 5 am. He came at a house which was owned by his Baba.
Randhir called someone
Rd-hello mujhe uske bare me sari information chahiye, tumhare pass 8:00 am tak ka time hai.
Someone-boss kam ho jayega.
FLACEBACK
Randhir is talking to Baba on the phone
Baba-rd main chahta hoon ki tum Mumbai jane se pahle aaj ki party me zaroor aa jana
Rd-ok Baba, main aa jaonga.
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At evening in the party [I m not going to describe this party, because main to kabhi kisi gangster ki party me invited nahi hui na 😆 so khud imagine karlo ]
Baba-aao rd
Rd-jee baba aapko kuch kam tha kya?
Baba-haan. [slightly loud voice] maine tum logo ko yaha isiliye bulaya hai taki main ek important announcement kar sakoon. Main ab se apna sara kam apne bte randhir ko hand over kar raha hoon, aaj se randhir tum sab ka boss hai
FLACEBACK END
AT SANYU'S house
Ankit [to mrs agarwal]-mom, papa ki death ke bad to property equal-equal divide ho gayi, ab to uss sanyu ka bhi property par adha HAQ hai
Mrs. Agarwal- don't worry ankit . tumhe pata hai na sanyu humse kitna pyar karti hai, vo kuch bhi aisa nahi karegi jisse hume dukh pahunche.
Ankit-haan issi bajah se usne mujhe company ka CEO banane diya. She is really a emotional fool.
They both laugh evilly
Ankit-ok mom meri abhi 9:00 amm par meeting hai to uski preparation kar leta hoon
Mrs.agarwal-ok beta.
At randhir's place
Two goons are come with a man whose eyes are close.
1st goon- boss yeh sameer hai uss ankit ki company ka employ
Rd-open his eyes
2nd goon open sameer's eyes
Rd-[in cold voice]to tum ankit ki company main kaam karte ho.
Sameer-pahle tum batao mujhe yaha aise kyu laye ho. Main police me complain karoonga.
Rd-complain bhi kar dena par pahle jitna pooncha hai utna batao.
Sameer- main tumhara servant nahi hoon...
Rd punched him hard on his face.
Rd-ab bataoge,
And he caught his neck
Sameer-haan batata hoon . ask me what u want to know from me.
Rd-ankit ka aaj ka schedule bol
Sameer-vo.. .. aaj 9:oo baje office me meeting hai, uske bad office me hi rahenge.
Rd left him and said
Rd-leave him to his house with lots of respects. And smirk
Rd [thought] be ready ankit for ur death
Ankit left his house for office. At mid way.
Ankit's car stop with a jerk
Ankit [ to driver]- driver gadi kyo roki.
Driver-vo sir kuch log...
Driver couldn't complete his sentence because one goon kept gun on his forehead
Goon-bahar niklo, gadi se.
Ankit-but who r u.
Goon-bahar nikal varna tujhe yahi mar dalunga.
Ankit stepped out from his car
Ankit-mujhe kyo roka?
But suddenly he feels a tight punch on his face
Yes our hero [or villain 😆 ] is come
Rd beat him very harshly. Ankit is bleeding badly now,
Ankit-plz mujhe chod do , tum kaun ho aur mujhe kyo mar rahe ho.
Rd-jab tere baap[father] ki bajah se mere dost ki jaan gayi tab koi aaya bachane. And he again punch hard on his face.
Ankit-dost... papa... maut tum kya kah rahe ho mujhe kuch sanmajh nahi aa raha hai, plz mujhe chod do
Rd-meri life ka sirf ek rule hai JAAN KE BADLE JAAN [LIFE INSTEAD LIFE] jaise tumhare father ki bajah se mere dost ki jaan gayi waise he main tumhe mar kar badla[revenge] loonga...
Randhir going to punch him hard again but stopped by ankit
Ankit-plz meri baat suno. Tum revenge lena chahate ho na to unki beti se lo because main unka real son nahi hoon
Rd-what
Ankit-haan, main unki 2nd wife ka beta hoon unka nahi. Meri ma aur unki dusari shadi hui thi kyoki unki ek 2 saal ki beti thi aur main bhi 3 saal ka tha isiliye unhone humari Upbringing ke liye yeh marriage ki.
Rd-vo kaha hogi abhi[ still angry mood]
Ankit- vo abhi apne friends ke sath hogi shayad uske college me
Rd-kis college me
Ankit- LITS MUMBAI [mujhe aur koi nam nahi mila 😆 ]
Rd left his neck and rushes toward his car
Rd drove his car to LITS college. He enters to college campus and ask someone who is SANYUKTA AGARWAL
Someone point his finger to a girl. And said she is sanyukta agarwal.
Randhir just look at her. She is wearing a sky blue colored long skirt and a white color sleeveless top with a jacket [same attire as shraddha from ek villain]
Rd's POV
How can I kill her. She is pure soul. She is innocent . happy in her life. She is an angel. No randhir what r u thinking u want ur revenge from her.
Use marna hoga ,
POV END
PRCAPE-rd kept his gun in front of sanyu
Sanyu- u want to kill me. U can. Go ahead
Ok so here is end 2nd part of ss ANGEL AND DEVIL KI LOVE STORY.
So guys tell me hwz it
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