Originally posted by Bul3
this is such a beautiful story..amazing,deep,surreal..loved it truly..such a touching and praise worthy end to Subbu-Ishita story..never saw this point of view to Ishita-Subbu break up..I literally cried at the part where Subbu said about praying for Ishita and they hugged..their's was a beautiful love story with a sad ending..a new perspective for Subbu..we all always hate him not taking into consideration that Ishita loved him so much and they were together for so many years so he must be a good guy..your story just shows your one big mistake does not mean you are ruined for life or you are a bad person..
Ishra were amazing..they were so in their characters in this one..when they were missing each-other in your story I could feel longing..such lovely writing..kudos!!!
Thank you so so so much for your comment !!
I tried to make the story fun as first and i wanted to add a bit of a jealous raman, that's why i brought back subbu but i realized that ishita-subbu was not really laughable and their story shouldn't serve the only purpose of making raman jealous.
They dated for 12 years. They were each other first love, they were family (because of bala-vandu relationship) and in one moment they became totally stranger. that's something i can't turn into a spoof.
I really think that if ishita loved subbu for 12 years (that's the double amount Raman spent with shagun), so subbu must have been someone special. And with a brother like bala, i can't imagine him to be a jerk.
i loved what you said : one big mistake does not mean you are ruined for life or you are a bad person. life had its ups and down and we must learn to ride along without holding grudge or hatred.
IshRa was hard to write especially in the last part because Raman is more insecure than jealous. he can protect ishita from parmeet, but what can he do to Subbu? His first love left him because he was not good enough, his new wife is with him because of his daughter, it's really not easy for him. He must be really insecure inside.
That's why i decided to avoid too much of subbu-raman in the last part because it's a serious subject that i don't think i could handle in only one part.
Thank you again so much for your comment, i felt like you truly understood why i wrote too long parts with subbu.