OS-Rashi's Wedding and Suhaag Raat... Note For MATURE READERS ONLY.... - Page 3

Saranya @saravathi Goldie

Posted: 9 years ago

Hi jen,

Actually I don't follow this serial but checked in for ur os,You made me to think I should watch this...It was sooo hot love the couple,Every line every word was poetic especially creamy skin brilliant writing..candle the witness wow what an end you gave n the rituals were briefly written hats off,I dunno how many times am going to read t again

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kmfan_2 @kmfan_2 IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 9 years ago

WOW...what a beautiful story...showing all the rituals so well and the lovely union of the bride and groom...

I really loved it!

Thanks dear...

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Jayeeta Paul @Jayeeta_06 IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 9 years ago

wow...awesome os dr...👍🏼...beautifully written...👏👏👏...very romantic and hot...☺️☺️☺️...loved it...❤️❤️❤️...thank u 4 sharing such a beautiful os with us...😳😳... Edited by JayeetaGurtian - 9 years ago

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crtkelly @crtkelly IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 9 years ago

Hi Jenelle,

I do actually watch this show every night so I had no difficulty picturing Raghu and Shivani as I read this plus the tone of this story seems just so appropriate for this lovely pair.

However, even if I did not know their story, I would still have enjoyed it; the imagery you create with you words is first rate, I'm certain I am not the only able to clearly visualize these scenes as they read it.

Thank you so much for sharing your story with me; it is a lovely read!

Kelly

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Manisha Sinha @ArhanAngadholic Goldie

Posted: 9 years ago

So romantic OS jen well written :) :) loved ur description :) plss keep writing the OS coz after 1st aUg we can imagine RaShi only through OS n FF only :'( :'(

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Anitha @-Anitha- IF-Stunnerz

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Posted: 9 years ago

Omg omg omg☺️
This os was lovely and romantic.😳
U have penned it beautifully.👏
I really dont know much about raghu and shivani..
But this os, the way u wrote - made me fell in love with them ❤️
Loved whole marriage rituals - his I❤️U, then kiss on her forhead, then the way her malgalsutra stuck on his sleeve, they everyones blessings- adorable and cute...😃
whole SR scenes were smoking hot ❤️
Finally they become one😊
keep write...👍🏼
Do pm me...😃