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hey guys this is my 1st try on ff i dont know wat will it be...my 1st OS is veeba - yeh jawaani hai deewani...this is the link for tht - http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=3966641...
so now i'm going to start my ff...this on baldev ok!! pls do hit a like and do comment... this is from the track wen veera broke baldev's heart...
Part 1
baldev was very hurt after knowing the truth of veera's fake love...he was very angry and sad...all sorts of questions were going on in his mind...he roamed through every part of the pind...and atlast thought tht it was his fate and came home...it was late night..
balwant - aa gaya nalaiq...ithe aa mennu tujse ek zaroori gallkarni hain..
baldev - (going and sitting in a chair near his dad) ki hoya pappaji?? aapnu ki gall karni hain???(in irritated tone)
balwant - tu na kal sheher wich jaake kuch zaroori kagas par mere ek dost ke dasthakar leke aana hoga...bohot zaroori hain..
baldev - (with no option left) theekhe...
balwant - changa...
after talking he went to his bedroom and fell flat on his bed...as soon as his head touched the pillow, he fell into a deep sleep...
~~the next day~~
baldev got up early and went to the city...
~~veera house~~
veera was sitting in her room...thinking of wat she did and the way baldev was angry at her for playing a trick on him and felt a bit guilty...but told herself to be calm and she only did this because he was madly behind her...
baldev was driving his jeep and was thinking about veera wen suddenly, a girl came in front of the jeep...he stopped the jeep into a hault..he got down from the jeep and went to the girl to see if she was alright...she was sitting down because of the big shock...baldev went 2 her and asked if she was ok...she looked up to baldev...wen baldev saw her he was mesmerized by her charm, beauty and even her glamour...he was lost in her...but then he came back to senses..
baldev - uhh...oh ji, aap thik toh hona??? kahi lagi toh nahi??
girl{which i am introducing as me😉} - (crying) haan...main theek hoon...thnx...vese mujhe maaf kijiye maine achanak aapke jeep ke saamne aagayi...
baldev - oh..koi gall nahi ji! lekin app roh kyun rahe ho?? koi pareshaani hain kya??? mennu batao, shayad main aapke koi madat kar paoon!!
girl - (looking into his eyes with tears)sach main??
baldev - haan...bilkul!!
girl - voh kuch log mere peeche aarahe the...asal main unn logon ko mere pappaji ne bheja hain mujhe pakadne keliye...unse bajke bhaag rahi thi main..tab he mene aapke jeep ke saamne aayi...
baldev - (shocked) tumhare pappaji ne unlogon tumhare peeche bheja?? lekin kyun??
girl - (crying more) voh..isiliye ki maine shaadi karne se mana kiya...pappaji ne mere vaaste ek munde ko dekh rakha tha...lekin mujhe voh munda bilkul pasand nahi...isiliye main ghar se bhaag aayi...jiske kaaran unhone mujhe dhoondne keliye unnlogon ko bheja...(weeping very badly)
baldev - (holding her hands) aree ro mat...hum kuch na kuch indezaam toh karlenge...aap ro mat...aapke shehere main..vo kya kehete hain angrezi main...haan sute nahin karta...
girl - (laughing at his eng) tum bohot funny ho...thnx mujhe sahaara dene keliye..
baldev - aree uskeliye thnku ki ki zaroorat?? eh toh mera farz tha..vese tum shaadi kyun nahi karna chathi??
girl - (shy) mujhe hamesha se lagta tha ki mere liye ek munda hai...mene tho kabhi mila nahin lekin mera dil hamesha vahi kehtha hai...
baldev - ohh...vese ye sab baat karte karte ye poochna toh bhool he gayi...aapka naam ki hai???
girl - jasmeet...jasmeet singh!!
baldev - bohot vaddiya naam hai tera!! toh jasmeet kya tum mere naal mere pind main aana chahogi??
how was it guys??
INDEX:
PART 1 - PG 1
PART 2 - PG 2
PART 3 - PG 3
PART 4 - PG 4
PART 5 - PG 5
PART 6 - PG 7
PART 7 - PG 7
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