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Posted: 17 July 2014 at 8:23am | IP Logged
Originally posted by hangok

im sorry im lateUnhappy

ohh my god a new story great...
and the idea of it looks great like it ..girls love each other too much and in the same time the boys hate each other...gerat concept...this will be a pleasure to read..

and now the first part,
ahh the beginning was just too cute , leaving homeSmile

great the boys have to tolerate each otherLOL

oww this is getting better...this girls are too much ,
they want to sleep in cars ..

and the morning scene was just amazing.


ahhh i have just to say that i love this ff..great beginning of this story..waiting now to read more...

great workClap thanks for pm
I cant tell how happy am seeing ur comments after a quite long days..Ya I felt the same for that sleeping in car thing
pls continue reading n Thank u so much

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Posted: 17 July 2014 at 8:25am | IP Logged
Originally posted by sandjanarai

Wauw what an update
Really nice I enjoyed it
What will happen now to rachna and gunjan?
The hatred between kabir and mayank awesome
Lovely dear
Hey am glad u r reading this in ur busy schedule
So sweet of you.

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Posted: 17 July 2014 at 11:54am | IP Logged
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Originally posted by mkakkar93

oh wow wow saranya totally in love with it as a very different story 
excited for the next part 
totally in love with it 
and this is gonna be a huge success i bet you gal Clap

and one more thing may be i will not be able to comment  because i am again going for 2 days out of town but will be free after that and will  comment Cry
Thats really sad,will miss u but I know u will read while u r back..n Thanks for ur support dear
atlast i m back Embarrassed i missed u and your updates too dear will just read it nowEmbarrassed

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Posted: 17 July 2014 at 11:57am | IP Logged
Chap:2
Gunjan:Hey hello?Who are you?How come you in my room
Mayank:Room what hey Miss open your eyes n see its car.
Driver:Who are you girl? get down of my car first
Gunjan:Omg yes I just now remember I ran out of my house
Mayank:What you ran out of house?How dare you
Gunjan:Yes I dare Hey I wait I forgot something
Driver:Sir this girl seem to be mental,lets leave her somehow
Gunjan:Haan Rachna where s she,omg
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Kabir:Don't you have manners to knock on the door before you get in
Rachna:Am really sorry,I was in a hurry.Actually I need ur help,Pls Its really important
Since Rachna was running on the road she was breathing heavily.
Kabir:ok Madam first relax n say what's ur problem
Rachna: Actually do you know about the owner of other car which stood along ur car.
Kabir:You mean Mayank
Rachna to herself " Rachna he is a stranger don't say him truth comeon think of something to cover up"
Kabir:You know Mayank?
Rachna:Ya I know him well,Actually we were about to meet here early morning but I lost this address n came just now,n I missed his contact number too can you pls help me find his car I mean find him.
Kabir to himself " Is she his girl friend"
Rachna:Sir
Kabir:Hmm am Kabir u can call me KT,
Rachna:Oh nice name brother
Kabir's mouth opened in shock on hearing word brother.
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Mayank:Miss
Gunjan:Am Gunjan
Mayank:Oh Gunjan am Mayank,Pls say where you want to go we will drop you there
Gunjan:I dunno,first where I am now
Driver:Sir why you are wantedly getting in to trouble
Mayank:She is a girl we cant,leave her in road
Gunjan:Hello Driver what you think about me, am a bold  girl u see
Mayank:Gunjan what's this
Driver:Sir pls you both get down,I don't want to get in to any trouble pls get down my car.
Driver got down from the car n throwed both their luggages on road,Gunjan got too angry n chased the car running but it was gone while Mayank was collecting their bags.
Gunjan:Mayank am really sorry,Its all bcoz of me,If I would have cought that man I would have killed him
Mayank looked at her from top to bottom with a suspect look
Gunjan:What why looking at me liking that
Mayank:You really a dangerous girl
Gunjan and Mayank took their luggage n walked on the road
Gunjan to herself " Rachna hope u r safe"
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Kabir:So can you say ur name now
Rachna:Oh ya am Rachna,so can you help me to reach that Mayank
Kabir:Ya sure,Get ready we will start soon.
Rachna thanked him n waited for him in shop.
Kabir asked his driver to go back home n he decided to drive the car.
Kabir to himself " oh poor Mayank your girlfriend is alone with your enemy wanna see how much you get irritated when you see us together,for that I will get her to you.
Kabir:Can we go Rachna
He said  n put his arm around her Rachna gave him a fake smile n moved away from his hold
Rachna:Brother can we start
Kabir:oh god plz stop calling me brother
Rachna:I always respect elders
Rachna said it n looked at him with one eye
Kabir:Ok madam you r very much good girl ok now go get in.Rachna sat next to Kabir as he driver.
Rachna to herself " I will get you soon Gunjan"
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Gunjan:Mayank where are we going?
Mayank:Lets walk till we get a lift or taxi
Gunjan:But Mayank am so hungry
Mayank looked at Gunjan who rubbed her tummy with her hand to show how hungry she is
Mayank:Enuf acting cum will get you food
Gunjan:Wow you r so nice.Thanks a lot.Gunjan in excitement went to hug Mayank but Mayank didn't notice it he turned towards her opposite to search for hotel,Gunjan  gave a small slap on her cheek as it smiled.
Gunjan was jumping in the road n following Mayank.And they finally found a small canteen.
Gunjan:Wow my fav parathas
Gunjan was eating like she hasn't eaten for months such that Mayank got even tired of counting.
Mayank :Gunjan better get married to a chef
Gunjan:Marriage no pls I hate that word
Mayank:Why so?
Gunjan:Hmm you know what I ran from home to escape from my marriage.
Mayank:Marriage for u in this early age? But really happy for that Groom who escaped from you.
Gunjan:You
Gunjan spilled water on Mayank n he was laughing hard.
Gunjan remembered Rachna n she felt bad to leave her n eat.
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Rachna:How long its from here
Kabir:Minimum one day,mostly tomo noon we will reach
Rachna:Pls drive fast
Kabir to himself " so hurry to meet your boyfriend"
Kabir:Can we eat n go,you not hungry
Rachna:You eat n cum I will wait
Kabir gave her a weird expression n left to hotel,Rachna was waiting for an hour she was listening to songs n Kabir returned with a carry bag in his hand n gave t to her
Kabir:Pls eat this madam,You cant fast whole day to see Mayank ok
Rachna:What?
Kabir:I understand y u not eating at least have these fruits u need strength to meet him.
Rachna:Oh god you r so confusing me first pls start the car
Kabir started while Rachna opened the cover.
Rachna:Thanks for ur concern brother
Kabir put sudden break in anger on hearing the word brother again which made Rachna's
fruits to fall down inside car n rolled underneath driver seat,Rachna bent down to pick it while Kabir too bent at the same time n both their heads hit n they tried again to pick it n again heads hit.Kabir had a small smile on his cheek which he immediately hidden on seeing Rachnas awkwardness.
Kabir:Rachna wait I will take
He took n gave it to her while she held it,both their fingers touched n both shared a small eyelock.
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End of chap 2
Chap-3-pg 8
http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=4096245&TPN=8


Edited by saravathi - 27 July 2014 at 12:22am

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Posted: 17 July 2014 at 12:03pm | IP Logged
wow lovely updateEmbarrassedgunjan is so naughty she even opened carsLOL they both ran out oh wow such a new theme Big smileClapi am just waiting that what will happen next as right now meeting and in shockWink lovely update saranya  it awesome 

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Posted: 17 July 2014 at 12:04pm | IP Logged
its gonna be great just reading now

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Posted: 17 July 2014 at 12:05pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by mkakkar93

Originally posted by saravathi

Originally posted by mkakkar93

oh wow wow saranya totally in love with it as a very different story 
excited for the next part 
totally in love with it 
and this is gonna be a huge success i bet you gal Clap

and one more thing may be i will not be able to comment  because i am again going for 2 days out of town but will be free after that and will  comment Cry
Thats really sad,will miss u but I know u will read while u r back..n Thanks for ur support dear
atlast i m back Embarrassed i missed u and your updates too dear will just read it nowEmbarrassed
Yupieee ...missed u too buddy,so u reading now
hope I wont disappoint u(as u sayWink)
 
 
 

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Posted: 17 July 2014 at 12:07pm | IP Logged
How fortunate am I that I am still on my break when  your update was posted!
 
So good, I just love the storyline LOL

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