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saravathi

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Posted: 16 July 2014 at 7:38am | IP Logged
Originally posted by PINky733

very good saranya
Amazing storyline I like so much
Pls continue because ab to me ye story end tak enjoy karna chahti hu
Sorry me ek baar me itna english bol sakti hu isse jyada nai
Thank u so much saranya aapke pm ke liye
Pls pls update soon
I m waiting ok
Jyada time lena
Thanks pinky n will update tonight.
am too glad u liked t
Actually am too bad in Hindi,but its ok I will learn by this way

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Posted: 16 July 2014 at 10:50am | IP Logged
So chap 1 is here
Rachna and Gunjan were sitting in upstairs where they spend most of their time.
Gunjan:Rachna you gonna hear me or not?
Rachna:Pls dont say we are running from home again
Gunjan:So you r ok with my marriage n u r ready to leave me too..wow
Rachna:No pls dont say that
Gunjan:Then accept what I say,our parents didn't listen us n y should we alone worry about them
Rachna:Ok baby We are leaving tonight enuf now cool down.
Gunjan:That's like my good friend
Both hugged each with a wide smile on their face.
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Mayank took a taxi n was traveling along the highway,The driver was too tired of driving whole day so Mayank thought not to travel in night and togive him rest.They found out a tea shop n stopped the car.The tea shop man allowed Mayank to rest in his house.Mayank entered the house n was irritated seeing Kabir already there having dinner.
Kabir:Wherever I go Y you following me?Pls get out
Mayank:How dare you?You get out.I have paid to stay here
Tea shop man:sir there is space for both of you
While Mayank and Kabir was starring.Tea shop man arranged their bed n forced them to adjust.Both slept on nearby beds
turning their back to each other.
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Rachna:Where we gonna go now?
Gunjan:We will get any bus first come soon
While they were running with their luggage,many guys were looking at them as though they never seen a girl before which made the girls nervous.
Gunjan:Rachna,I think its not safe to go in night
Rachna:Ya I am scared too but We cant back out now na
Gunjan:Hey Rachna see there is a car outside teashop
Rachna:So
Gunjan:We will rest in car tonight n then start in morning
Rachna:Are you gone mad?Car would be locked
Gunjan:I came prepared for all this.
Rachna:Really then Fine lets go before anyone see us
Gunjan:Rachna not that car,come here
Rachna:But Gunjan that looks like taxi it might be waiting for someone its not safe
Gunjan:Hmm ok but how can we both sleep in same car..you know how I will sleep na
Rachna:He He  ok I understand you sleep in this car n I will take the other one
Gunjan:Thats good,Hey dont forget to wake me up early.
Rachna:Done,ok get in soon before anyone sees bye gn.
Gunjan:Good night darling.
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Early morning 4 am
Mayank to himself" Yesterday I missed my interview,n  I am staying with Kabir how can my day go bad than this? First Before he wakes up I must leave the place.
Rachna Gunjan and Kabir were in sound sleep,While Mayank started to get ready.He informed the driver to keep the car ready.
since Mayank n his driver were in half sleep n it was dark too that they didnt notice Gunjan sleeping in back seat n driver started the car,behind Gunjan was hugging her bag n sleeping.
Its 7 am
Rachna woke up,seeing the sunlight she got shocked
Rachna:Omg I slept for solong,First I must wake,up Gunjan
She checked if anyone is outside the car n since none were there she got down with the luggage n ran in search of car.She got so tensed that car is missing,She was controlling her tears n pretending like she was strong before public. she inquired the tea shop man about the car
Tea shop man:The car left so early.Y child any problem
Rachna:No I actually hmm haan I kept my luggage on top of car its gone with it
Teashop man:child there is a man inside,I think he knew the man who was in car
Rachna:Thanks a lot
Rachna went inside the house without knocking she was in a big hurry.Kabir was changing his dress.He was shirtless n was trying to put on his pant underneath the towel.Rachna eyes lengthened in shock,
There Gunjan bcoz of more bright light woke up stretching her hands.
Mummy coffee "shouted Gunjan
Driver stopped the car in shock n Mayank slowly turned to his back seat while Gunjan was trying to,open her eyes she saw Mayanks face so close to hers.Both of their mouth opened for...(its in the last line)
There Kabir wore his pant n turned to take his shirt but his eyes met Rachna's motionless eyes which was still in schock.
When both couples finally met All four gave a long cry in shock " Nooo"
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End of Chap 1
Next chapters will be def long.Since I want to end with their meeting


Edited by saravathi - 27 July 2014 at 12:29am

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Posted: 16 July 2014 at 11:04am | IP Logged
Fabulous update. Every story of yours is too good. Please continue soon;)

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Posted: 16 July 2014 at 12:04pm | IP Logged
This is the best, an absolute great read Smile...please update soon!

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Posted: 16 July 2014 at 1:38pm | IP Logged
awesome...
no words coming in mind
fantastic update

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Posted: 16 July 2014 at 5:11pm | IP Logged
Wonderful story continue soon

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Posted: 16 July 2014 at 6:15pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by Pookhi

Fabulous update. Every story of yours is too good. Please continue soon;)
Thanks a lot dear sure will update soon

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Posted: 16 July 2014 at 6:22pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by crtkelly

This is the best, an absolute great read Smile...please update soon!
Happy to hear t from u,Thank dear

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