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Mayan n Rabir ff [Play Date] -Completed Last chap @pg 49

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Posted: 15 July 2014 at 11:34am | IP Logged
Hi friendsSmile
Its my 3rd now,I was like I should not write anymore n bore you all but actually am bored without writing so decided to write another one...This time its going to be Mayan n Rabir combo.Pls read my prologue n say If I can really continue.since am so much confused  to write or not bcoz already many good ffs r in line..
Thanks Mehak for ur advice.I am writing with  confidence bcoz u said yes.
Character sketch:
Gunjan and Rachna:
Best friends from childhood,N of same age,completed their high school.They both are so close that anyone would go jealous for not having such a friend.They resemble each other in their way of dressing by always wearing same colour dress,same hair style,Wherever they go everyone will think them as sisters.One thing they would pray for God is Nothin should seperate them.
Mayank and Kabir:
Both completed their Engineering from same college,They both hate each other as they were more competitive to each like both became univ topper n both fought against each in college election,both having equal popularity among girls.All this made them hate each.
Mostly I wont introduce anymore character,If needed I will insert in mids
Prologue:
A hand under the white thick bedsheet peeped out just to turn the alarm of.It was quite far from reach of hand,not willing to stretch more,she  immersed her head under pillow n decided to sleep again.But someone behind her bet on her back with pillow.
"Rachna youuu"Shouted Gunjan
Rachna:Gunjan wake up first,how can you be so cool in this situation too
Gunjan:Relax my darling,When Gunjan is here why to fear
Rachna:Hello problem is for you not for me n am suffering here
Gunjan:One week there lets solve it baby
Rachna:Am really scared you will get married and leave me.why our parents are not at all understanding us
Seeing Rachna cry Gunjan too got emotional
Gunjan:Am scared too Rachna.Pls God stop this marriage.
Rachna hugged Gunjan n they both consoled each other.
Rachna:I wish God really hear us.
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In a highway road,a car stood alone.
Mayank:Shit, what the hell hapn to my car,how will I attend my interview now?
Driver:Sir pls wait,I will see if anyone gives lift.
Noone stopped for a while n later a car stopped.
Driver:Lift pls Sir,My sir wants to attend interview,Its too late already
The car window opened slowly,Mayank eagerly saw who he was,Kabir with his coolers on just turned his neck Both were shocked to see each other n Kabir now throwed a low look at Mayank.Mayank got so angry that he hit his foot on his car.
Mayank:Driver I wont Mind cancelling my interview for going in his car
Kabir:Driver you start the car,its waste of time
As Kabirs car started he turned back through the window to look at Mayank who was starring at him.
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I dont want to give a long prologue so just gave a glimpse of how story will proceed..If anyone feels story line to be changed pls feel free to share.
Index:
Chap 1- pg 3
http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=4096245&TPN=3
Chap-2-pg 5
http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=4096245&TPN=5
Chap-3-pg 8
http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=4096245&TPN=8
Chap 4 pg 10
http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=4096245&TPN=10
Chap-5 pg 13
http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=4096245&TPN=13
Chap 6 pg 15
http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=4096245&TPN=15
Chap7 pg 16
http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=4096245&TPN=16
Chap 8 pg 19
http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=4096245&TPN=19
chap 9 pg 25
http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=4096245&TPN=25&#p110847502

chap 10 -pg 27
http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=4096245&TPN=27
chap 11 pg 29


Edited by saravathi - 07 September 2014 at 4:09am

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Posted: 15 July 2014 at 11:41am | IP Logged
I would love to read this story...please continueSmile

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Posted: 15 July 2014 at 11:46am | IP Logged
Originally posted by crtkelly

I would love to read this story...please continueSmile
Thanks Kelly feeling relieved now

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Posted: 15 July 2014 at 12:10pm | IP Logged
Honestly I would love to read just as you have it planed out, do continue it sounds very interesting.

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Posted: 15 July 2014 at 1:15pm | IP Logged
Hi...
Aww wow amazing protologue...
N hw can u say tht your ffs r boring no way...
Cntinue...start soon...
Thnx 4 the pm...
N am currently reading your ff...just missed it...

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Posted: 15 July 2014 at 3:43pm | IP Logged
Lovely start!Thumbs Up
Want to read more..Embarrassed

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Posted: 15 July 2014 at 4:16pm | IP Logged
wow mayan and rabir ff..by you!! wohooo
so excited, plzz plz continue
and if we don't get any ff from u then that make us bore..

update soon saranya..can't wait .

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Posted: 15 July 2014 at 5:26pm | IP Logged
oh wow wow saranya totally in love with it as a very different story 
excited for the next part 
totally in love with it 
and this is gonna be a huge success i bet you gal Clap

and one more thing may be i will not be able to comment  because i am again going for 2 days out of town but will be free after that and will  comment Cry

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