An Honest Attempt - A Humble Request - Page 10

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Posted: 9 years ago
Originally posted by: Perfectionist2

Dear Farz,Farzi,Farzu!

 

I have not watched last night's episode. Tamara is "Wonder Woman" and I am cluster f**k...I have so much on my to do list, I struggle every single day.Considering I have only watched selected 4 episodes so I don't know if this fits the bill. But you gave a cue " Rehan offers the gajra to Sanam and his emotions there in that scene.."

 This is my vague attempt but time constrains my Faru, so I will probably do something more dignified later next time..

 Just for Farzu and Tamara... Do you not know, I can never say no to my Tammy!

 

                                              ***

 

 

                                   Rehan !

 

 

If wishes were horses

Mine just galloped free

Unveil a land of red treasure

Where you belong to me

 

That only infinite circle

I never will out fall

To become your someone

Like you own my all

 

 

Searching my vacant vast

A token that is like you, pure

One string of that white garland

Binding to my heart, soul to endure

 

Sanam " Mein apake liye kuch laya hoon... Yeh Gajra!"

 

To my world, "You" denote its axis

Dancing a giggle, you hold and allure

Vacant doesn't seem empty any longer

Hope, mirth, faith, LOVE

                           ...coiled and bestowed.

 

 

If wishes were horses

Mine just galloped free

Unveil a land of  red treasure

Where you belong to me

 

                                                         Love,

                                                              Juliet!

 

(Red Treasure - The land of love.

Coiled and Bestowed - When Sanam coils the gajra in her braid..)

                                          


Juliet Juliet Juliet...

It is you is Wonder Woman and Mighty Mum (😉) all rolled into one. 

You really got ALL of this after what we've been telling you?

You're amazing. Really and truly...

I know I sound like a complete fangirl, but what the hell? Yeah, I am your FAN!

I love love LOVE you!

PS. Clearly you don't need time. and I don't know what you mean by "more dignified"... this is beautiful as is. 
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Posted: 9 years ago
Originally posted by: MsGrumpyShumpy

Qh1 left a bitter bitter taste in my mouth! I just cant connect with qh2 as it happened at the cost of my beloved AsYa! The characters of SaHil i hate with a passion which prevents me frm reading their stories no matter how good they are! I mean no harsh feeling to tamara she really is a great writer but i cant read SaHil to save my life!

 
I get it and I respect your decision.
Thank you for stopping by, I truly appreciate it...
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Posted: 9 years ago
Originally posted by: Rarepearl

Hey Juliet,

 
thank you for encouraging me to read this. Its not like I don't follow Tamara's stories, I always do & love them too but you know just like you I wasn't a fan of SaHil so just didn't read it. But your message made me go through it, to see for myself what it was about. Okay honestly the part about Asad just pushed me more. You know I cant say no to Asad. I am super glad that I did. It was really worth reading, sharing & loving.
 
Thank you sooo much.
 
Love lots.. 

 
 
Thanks to you too! I get it totally...
 
But let me didn't you just love Asad there.
There can be no other to complete "Jahapana Six Packs!"
 
I just fell in love, I truly did.
 
FAN! WOW! Thanks😳
 
You are a sweet heart you know. And I am totally a fan of your comments, every single time you graced them for me.
 
 
Love, Love and A whole Lot !
 
Juliet
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Posted: 9 years ago
WELL SAID.

Love you Tamara-Juliet ❤️
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Posted: 9 years ago
hey dear
i am not sahil fan
but i read this os it is awesome
beautifully written

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Posted: 9 years ago
Why is she receiving any negativity? Is it because she wrote an OS on SaHil?
Leaving that aside, I will definitely read this story. Thank you for letting me knoe :)
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Posted: 9 years ago
done.. she is amazing writer...
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Posted: 9 years ago
Read...she is awesome writer...
Thanks...😃