#9 - AsYa/KaBhi FF : AsYa's Love Story... Epilogue - Page 1 ! (14/07) - Page 13

Originally posted by: vinita459

Hey Baano,

What an awesome story this was. I finished reading the entire thing in two days. I was so hooked . It was cute, funny, emotional, romantic what all not 😊 in another word total paisa vasool 😃

Sorry, due to busy schedule I couldn't read earlier but I am so glad I did now :)

I hope to read more of your work dear :)

Love,

Vinita

Awww Thank you so much for reading !! 🤗i'm gla u enjoyed it !! ❤️
Haha acha hai, at least u didnt regret reading this ! 😉 😆

Its ok i understan that everybody gets busy so do i ! 😳

Thank you so much !! 🤗 ❤️

Originally posted by: ican

Well dear still I hate ruksati
Wish males ki bhi hot I
And please do write na the idea I gave you
In which asad is very serious
And Zoya a harmless flirt but with no dark past
It will be so funny Zoya saying cheesy lines
Please
Thanks

Thank you so much buddy !! But i told that i'm not gonna write anything further 😕

Originally posted by: aarzoo50

beautiful update...
starting left me smiling n the ending left me with tears...
now see happy endings can also give you tears...
rizwan calls asad by his name... 😲 😆...
asya romance got disrupted bcz of the kids...
zoyas emotional support to asad was lovely...
n thn najmas convo vd asad was also good...
finally she got married vd a dukhi rukhsati...
awesome

Haha Thank you so much Aapi !! 😆 ❤️

Awesome epilogue
Loved the Rizwan called asad Ba
Lovely docket moments between son & father was amazing
Asma came when asya tried to kiss, her questions & embarrassing parents
Dilshad told asad for najma wedding & he refused.
Zoya spoke to him & he understand
Najma marriage was grand affair as asad first baby wedding
U said right that a elder brother is always on fathers place
Asad proved that he was a good son, good brother, good husband & good father
Last part was emotional as that bidai song always bring a tear.
Overall it was a beautifully written story
Thanks for the wonderful story & pm

How sweet 😛

so sad that it has ended

interesting... and little sad update...

but must... its time for najma ..start a family on her own...

awesome update...

thanks for the beautiful story...

and for all the pms...

brilliant
fantastic
amazing
wonderful updates dear
i love every update of this story
asad our hero saved his heroine zoya from ayaan & tanveer

asya adopted asma 😊
 
asad love his baby najma so much

asya sweet little family there son daughter and that cute moment was so lovely

i love it  how you describe asad and najma love for each other

zoya understand asad love towards his sis and make him understand one day he had to let her go
that scene i love it

toltally i love your story

i will miss this story 😭

thanks for pms 😃


 

I use to read this ff when it first came out and I read a good amount of it...I'll say like 4 threads or something around that...but I left the forum for a while because I just wasn't feeling the qubool hai spark anymore. Karan had left some time before that and I felt the spark in asya drop dramaticly. But sometime later I felt that spark in sahil...I guess only till recently like 2 months...but I decided to come back to the forum and read asya and sahil ffs...we actually use to be buddies and you would send me pms but you ended up cleaning out your buddy list and that's alright haha you deleted me but you had like 225 buddies! So I'm slowlying going thru all my pms I have 179 left to go...I just wanted to comment on this story because it was just wonderful and a great journey. I really think you should continue writing! You had such a huge following with this ff! It was just amazing! I felt that asya spark when I was reading this ff! It was like it never died! You truly have a gift! I really encourage you to continue! Hahah this comment is already very long! I don't want to make It even longer using a bunch of adjectives that wouldn't even fully describe how wonderful this ff was! This truly made my day!