Rantara Dark SS Yeh Kyun Kiya .......Sathiya .(updated Part 16 pg 57) - Page 23

Pampi..!😭😭 I'm so sowiw!! Mene tere updates review nai kiye!!

Pampz yeh kya kiya tumne 😲
Kahan stop kar diya 😕 , hum sab yanha kaise jee payenge
Wait karte karte humari aalat karab Ho jayegi Toa tumara next update koun padega 😕
Isliye jaldi ae update Dena iss baar 😉 , wait nahi Ho raha yanha 😳
I think chilly, Rantara ko pass le aayegi 😉 😳
Yeh Antu baat baat pe rone kyu lagti 😕
Antu Raghu Inna bhi bura nahi hai, asal me much bhi bura nahi hai 😳
Raghu bahut beautiful place pe laya gumne 😳
I loved it 👏
Waiting for next update eagerly
Update soon 😊

love the intensity between them
wow i loved that chilly is so close to him now
i am sure he will never harm or hurt her
but antara does not know that

omg so this means rajdeep had called raghu
he had told him to bring back antara
was she the one who escaped or a new victim ?
what does he do with them ?
he seems so wicked devil

aww the moments between rantara and chilly are so sweet
poor raghu it was so difficult to manage 2 crying persons
but he did it so easily i will applaud him really
the resort seems like a place in heaven it is so exotic
u have described it so well here

i think that the butterfly scene was symbolic and significant
she told raghu indirectly that holding some one against will was bad
also playing with some ones life was also bad

aww the man called her bhabi ji how cute
i loved this toyland idea
did raghu bring them here purposely ?
did he really care so much for chilly ?
did he want to impress antara too ?

i am sure raghu will not do anything wrong with her
continue soon

sorry i think i am a bit late 

Originally posted by: pampz

Sanji u really liked this update so much ???? ohh My God ...am in cloud nine then ...am really glad yaar if i make u really happy ... So sanji Gundi wakes up 5 O clock in the morning !!!! thats really good . is that the time when u write ur super wonderful stories ????

dear tere stories ke aage meri update kuch bhi nahi (i really mena it yaar...be it romance entertainment or twists u r the queen of this forum...👏 ) ...😃and when i get so lovely comments from u ..it means a lot to me ...it really gives me the enthu to write down the next part ...thank you😃

and i wll try to update soon

luv u gundi😆

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