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Beautifully Broken Love - a poem

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Posted: 29 June 2014 at 4:14am | IP Logged

Beautifully Broken Love

 

With darkness covering my eyes, yours is the only face I see,

But then, why did I fail to realize that you were never meant for me?

When I had fallen into a bottomless pit, and you came to me with your hand outstretched,

But little did I know that I belonged to this darkness wretched?

There was a time I thought that I found light,

And that was when I met you, the most beautiful sight.

 

My life became a fairytale, a dream when I wasn't sleeping,

But then I realized you were not mine, when my heart was weeping.

I prayed for light... and only your light,

But never did I realize that I lost my will to fight.

I were my choice, I had to make,

But too late when I realized that you weren't mine to take.

 

I still crave for your warmth and heat,

Even now, it is for you that my heart beats.

When you barged into my life, whole and new,

I failed to realize that you were too good to be true.

Out of the wretched gloom, you had me rescued,

And more my own, yours was the life I valued.

 

It's all over and it's all fine,

But I will think you are always mine.

When everything's done and all's gone,

Just remember that you are not alone.

I will always wait by and far, for your arrival, near the stars.

Because my love for you is eternal, and will bear those scars.

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Hey guys!!!!! hwz it? it is my first try on writing a poem. so please do tell me whether it's good or not. your comments matter a lot.

love,

Niru




Edited by -CrazyNiru- - 29 June 2014 at 4:18am

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Posted: 29 June 2014 at 4:22am | IP Logged
Its beautiful <3 

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Posted: 29 June 2014 at 4:26am | IP Logged
Awsm poem
Loved it
Very nicely written

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Posted: 29 June 2014 at 4:32am | IP Logged
lovely

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Posted: 29 June 2014 at 4:41am | IP Logged
ds is awesome..
heart touching poem...
well done..
keep it up

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Posted: 29 June 2014 at 4:42am | IP Logged
Wow Niru! Its amazing..
the words nd the feelings were perfectly described and synchronised.
well done..
i would love to read another one from u.Tongue
Do write more.

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Posted: 29 June 2014 at 4:43am | IP Logged
Its so beautiful
Nd more beautifully written :-)

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Beautiful poem

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