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nishu98

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Posted: 29 June 2014 at 12:11am | IP Logged

                       I am still there...

Darkness  is surrounding me ,no light to be seen,

I am still there where you left me ...

What I am, where I am? are the question wandering in my head

I am what you made , I am where you left...

My heart is pumping, but  blood is dry.

Eyes are blinking, but no twinkle inside ,

I am breathing but oxygen had died.

Dark sky is swallowing me,

Sorrowness has over took me.

I am still there where you left.

Everything was perfect , but one misunderstanding changed it all.

I know it can't be changed, Its too late..

You went away like a wind ,leaving me suffer alone.

I am still there where you left me ..

You might be much big that i ask to god ..

I am lost no one is there, to show me way.

My heart is aching but no one to there to heal it

Happy that there is one for you,

She will be special who had you.

 
You have star , I had only darkness.
You have family , I am alone.
You are happy , thats all I want.

U have moved on , but i am still there where you left me...

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NOTE: Howz it? i was watching Ashiqui 2 and again cried so pata nahi yeh likh liye .. so tell me howz it ?
HIT 'LIKE' AND COMMENT  IT ENCOURAGES ME SO PLZ SHARE UR VIEWS
 
 
 

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raddhi

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Posted: 29 June 2014 at 1:48am | IP Logged
This was emotional one
I Luv last line ^_^

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Posted: 29 June 2014 at 2:03am | IP Logged
Lovely nd emotional poem..
U wrote it really well
Loved itBig smile

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Posted: 29 June 2014 at 2:23am | IP Logged
oh my god yrrrCry
what a poemCry
love this yrrr fabulous
i really like these lines
You have star , I had only darkness.
You have family , I am alone.
You are happy , thats all I want.

U have moved on , but i am still there where you left me...
love these lines
thanx for pm
keep writing
Clap
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Posted: 29 June 2014 at 2:32am | IP Logged
Wow lovely poem
Loved it

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Posted: 29 June 2014 at 2:36am | IP Logged
Such an amazing poem
Really too good
Loved it

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Posted: 29 June 2014 at 2:37am | IP Logged
very emotional...Cry
hats off...such a wonderful poem...
love it...could fell each and every word...
awsome...

..Deepkriti..

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Posted: 29 June 2014 at 2:49am | IP Logged
omg!! so emotionalCry
its the pain of love. made me remember someoneOuch
great job!!Clap

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