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Shezzy12

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Posted: 18 September 2006 at 9:22am | IP Logged

Part one

 

shows girl sleepin

"dream"

dekho na Music in the background

 

Raining………..

Shez dancing

Shez - yeh saajish hain boondon ki koi khwaahish hain chup chup siyeh saajish hain boondon ki koi khwaahish hain chup chup sidekho na dekho nadekho na dekho nahawa kuchh haule haule zubaan se kya kuchh bolekyon duuri hain ab darmayaan

 

shez laughed

 

Mystery man pulls her hand

 

Noori – Shez utoh!!!!!

 

Shezz moaned

 

(back to dream)

 

mystery man -jugnu jaise chahat dekho jale mujhemeethi si mushkil hain koi kya karehmm hothon ki arzi aaise thukraaon nasaanson ki marzi ko jhuthlaaon nachhuu lo na chhu lo nachhuu lo na chhu lo

 

Shez looked at mystery guy…………

 

Noori poured cold water on shez

 

Shez – AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA   

 

Noori – laughing……

 

Shez – ur so dead!!

 

Shez chased noori

 

Shez – di!!!!!!

 

Noori ran up to guy

 

shows eyes

shows smile

wearing = suit

 

guy – ufff hooo

 

noori – bhaiya bhichou!!!!! Shes gnna kill me!!!

 

Shez – aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa

 

Riky – uff hoo kya hua shez leave noori alone

 

Shez*out of breath – bhaiya liken ……its her fault I was havin a ogod dream and she poured water on me

 

Noori * lafin * - (winked at shez )

 

Shez – AAAAAAAAA

Ran towards noori

 

Noori – aaaaaaaa bhaiya bichou

 

Riky pulled shez

 

Rik – uff ho

 

Shez – bhaiya choro shes dead!!!

 

Shows girl doing pooja

 

shows smile

shows eyes

wearin – a pink saree

Its Rach

Rach – uff hoo yeh subh kya hora hain…..

 

Shez and Noori start to argue

 

Riky – CHUP!!!

 

Quiet……..

 

Noori – anyways shez wht was ur dream about…….

 

Rach and noori loked at shez

 

Quiet………..

 

Rach n noori – acha acha sumthing special

 

Riky let go of shez

 

Shez – umm

 

Riky – huh kya matlaab

 

Shez – bhaiya kuch nahiin

 

Noori – uf hoo bhaiya shes dreamin off someone special

 

Rach – lafin – uff hoo tell us shez koun hai who

 

Shez – I WAS HAVE A GREAT DREAM AND I WAS DANCIN AND DEN I WEN I WAS ABT TO SEE THE GUYS FACE n den NOORI DI POURED DA WATER ON ME………..SO I DON'T KNOW

 

Rach and noori lafed

 

Riky – oi u shudnt be dreamin tht

 

Rach – uff hoo bhaiya shes just dreemin its not true is it  anyways go and freshen up im making breakfast

 

At the Breakfast table

 

Rach di serves everyone

 

Riky – thanks

 

*noori and shez fitin *

 

ricky – oi tum duno look at your rach di soo perfect cant you be like her for a day just a day

 

Rach*lafed *

 

Gaurav – good morning

 

Shez ran to Gaurav

 

Shez – jigu jigu jigu!!!

 

Gaurav*lafed *

 

Gaurav – kya

 

Shez – come in and have breakfast

 

Ricky – hi haan khana kahloo

 

Gaurav – umm teek hain

 

 

Gaurav sat down

 

Noori – shez pass me the bread

 

Shez * pulled a face * - nahiin

 

Riky – shezz!!!!

 

Shez – uffffffffffff

 

Shez passed noori the bread

 

Noori stuk her tongue out

 

Ricky – oi!!! Stop it!!! Ur acting like lil kids!!!!

 

Noori – Rach dii!! Sit down!!!!

 

Shez – next to gaurav jigu…….

 

Noori and Shez winked at each other

 

Rach – umm haan

 

Rach sat down

 

Shez – I will serve jigu

 

Shez went round and passed him paratha

 

Then she got the water and through it al over his suit

 

Shez – haila im soooo sooo sorryr jigu

 

Gaurav – nah its okay just an accident don't wrry

 

Noori – rach di take jigu upstairs

 

Rach – mein………..

 

Riky – haan

 

Rach took gaurav upstairs

 

Noori and shez started to laugh

 

Riky – uff hoo itne jaaldi dosti I don't understand u too

 

Ricky left the table

 

Noori – awww now theres going to be sweet romance in the bedroom

 

please guys tell me whether i shud cont plz plz

Confused

luv ya xxxx

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LOL lovely part sweets Embarrassed Embarrassed

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awwww dat was really gud....continue plz!!!

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