Hello.
I know this topic is pretty much closed down but couldn't help posting a comment.
U r a very good writer with an excellent grasp of the plot and grammar.
I must admit that I have read many fics in IF and ur story was so artfully etched that I made an account just after reading it to comment.
The first chapter was brilliant. The tension of the moment was described very well.
However this is my suggestion to u.
U r strong in writing mysterious scenes. Hiding something and making loopholes, u r good at that.
U should take up the crime genre if u ever take up writing.
And I end this here as I dash to ur next thread.
- Aryan
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